IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Before the era of today, men believed that the only place a woman is meant to be is only in the kitchen and birthing of children.women then are not giving the opportunity to attend to college, their parents are of the belief that training girls in school is waste of resourses and time. But today , with the global advancement, things has turned to be better for the women in this 21st century in society. thanks to some few women like Frances Wright , and Margaret Fuller who advocated for the importance why women should be giving the opportunity to study and experience the four walls of the school.
Nowadays , technology develops alot and it affect all the respective area such as television , cinema and many more. Also some individuals say that all television programmes should be have good story content which good for social issues, such as unequality , education and many more. Apartfrom this I completely agree with this statement so in upcoming paragraph I would discuss benefits of this change.
Well, I love to read books and play sports. I read both fiction and non-fiction books. I play some sports such as soccer, badminton, and swimming. I read books daily. I love reading because I gain a lot of knowledge and information. Reading book also helps me to keep emotional balance in difficult situations. I bring a book written by a meditation master named Thich Nhat Hanh all time. I read books for at least 30 minutes daily, and play football once a week. My colleagues often reserve a football playground near my workplace. My colleagues and I go there and play together every Saturday evening. I have been reading books for over 15 years. Actually, I was in high school. During my high school period, I often read fiction books such as sword fighter and detective books. Most of them I borrowed from my friends. I used to play computer games, especially when I was in university. You know. I didn't live with my parent during this period, and I could not be against the appeal of co...
In our human society, we have a lot of countries, each of which has different cultural customs. However, music to which everyone can easily listen is one thing bringing people from different countries cultures, and ages together.
Railways are necessary for some public transportation such as high speed railway, train and subway. Besides, I strongly agree that government spendmoney on railways instead of roads. From my point of view there are two main reason. Firstly is about the global warming. Secondly is about residents security. Moreover, I will discuss some details in the following paragraph.
Nowadyas, many people worry about do tthey safe or not when they are at home or when they go outside. From my point of view, the reason of this situation have two reason. On one hand, the news on TV program, news paper or anywhere always report the bad news of. On the other hand, the amount of own vehice increase. Moreover, some of soution can solve these problems it will discuss at the third paragraphs
In this contemporary era, many individuals believe that education is most important for society's progress. However, others believe that purpose of education is fulfill their dreams and achieve success. In this essay, i would explain both points and give my personal opinion towards this in upcoming paragraphs.
There is no doubt that these days number of smoker is increasing in the world. The question is, why we should worry about this habit? In this essay I am going to write my own opinion and my own conclusion.
Most individuals are of the opinion that the increase in the rate of use in computers,robots and artificial intelligence will render tutors redundant in future.I believe this is true as the level of development in gadgets and machineries has improved tremendously in our society.
The pie chart illustrates the average domestic spending in Japan and Malaysia in terms of five category
Modern times have influenced different aspects of human life such as styles of making money that it has been changing everyday. This transformation cause that many workers who live off using brain instead of body in closed areas, had started feeling depressive at the begining of 20th centuries along with urban growth. In last decades, office employees who are called white-collar, began seeking a solution way for overcoming stressful life. One of the most popular method is giving up the job and settling a small village for coping with dull office life. However, this idea is not practicable because of two main reason: urban opportunities and life style.
Pakistan is the country in which the literacy rate is 58 per cent according to the 2022 survey. the population of this country is 20 million and it is a developing country which needs more professionals to be a strong empowering nation and to build the good economy of the country. I strongly encourage the professionals to stay in the homeland and serve the country to help in growing. professionals are an asset to the country which can help the netizens as well as they can contribute to the country's economy by generating the foreign money by attracting the foreigners through their skills,by this mean person of the other countries come and facilitate through their skills and bring foreign money into the country. nowadays professionals prefer to go out of the country and settle abroad and serve the English people to make good money for just themselves they forgot how their country help them to be a good professional and make them enable to this point.This is the sad rea...
Abstract— Erratic in concentration of the blood hemoglobin (Hb) is pernicious and common disease in many humans of all over the world. The establishment of Hb measurement led to finding bio-optics mechanisms for tunable and high sensitivity dual-band plasmonic metasurface (PM) configuration that studied for Hb concentration detection of blood and formed by a semiconductor integrated with metal and dielectric layers. However, finding the mechanisms are particularly used without surgery that is a safe method with several potentials in biomedical applications. In this paper, a biosensor based on surface plasmon resonances (SPRs) that is a label-free detection method, is proposed to measure Hb concentration of blood. The presented sensing method has the susceptibility to be a dual-bands metasurface perfect absorber at room temperature for adjust the optical properties of the integrated semiconductor plasmonic structure. The modeling and numerical performance have been fulfilled based on...
In our generation, groups of people think that we have too many choices in nowadays society.However, in my opinion, I do not agree on this view.Because the situations and factors we face will limit the number of choices which we can decide.
while some families think having a famous brand is extremely delightful for themselves and their family members, other people believe that a well-noun brand is not essential to have a nice life.Let me discuss my view in the next paragraphs.
In most communities, adolescent are encouraged to spend their leisure time carrying out one duty or the other without being paid.This is thought to have positive effect on the teenager and the community at large. From my perspective,I think this has great advantage on the individual as it would help to guide them in the right path
There is a widely believed that people's diet is changing and they are following an unhealthy diet. Overwhelmingly I agree with this subject.
Nowadays, health concerns are being addressed among kids day by day. Their eating style and way of living are changed significantly. However, it is generally argued that it has negative repercussions on their health. I partially agree with this notion and in the following paragraphs, I would discuss reasons with examples to support my opinion.
The pie charts show the numbers and percentages of men and women in both full-time and part-time employment in the UK in 1988 and 2012. Overall, we can see that all numbers increased but there were significant differences in the proportions for each year.
Noise pollution is unavoidable in today’s society. Due to high level of tone, it is badly affecting the quality of human life. There are numerous reason behind it, namely infrastructure development and increase in high volume of automobiles. However, it must be controlled by the government laws and initiative measures by the people in society.
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