IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 490

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many parents believe that when their children read books for entertainment, they are wasting their time, and that they should read only serious educational books. What is your opinion about this?

It is argued that youngster should only read scientific book only. I strongly disagree with the idea and the remainder of this essay shall outline the rationale behind my position on this.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people why might be the case do you think this is a positive or negative situation

The preference of family to buying the condo has any reason.they want their most of time spent with family rather than renting their mansion to others. This is a debatable topic and I am going to delve into my points in upcoming paragraphs.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Improving the environment is as important as having next generation. We produce offspring to the world so that they continue the humanity while we show no love towards the so-called Mother-Earth. Taking care of the mother-nature , such as improving the environment , is neither just for one people nor a organization. Its a responsibilty for all man kind, individually.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

It has been noticed that some people contribute most of their lives to stay close at their born place.there could be multiple reason for this; however living at their birth area has it's own benefits as well as drawbacks. both the question would be answered further.

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree?

Media is one of the most powerful tool in the world. It is essential to our daily life and updates us with everything going on around the world. Lately , media coverage has mostly been about celebrities rather than actual news.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

While one majority of the people thinks that advertising encourages us to purchase things that we really do not need at the moment, another majority of the people could argue that the advertisements introduce us to the new goods that may simplify our lives.

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The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organizations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

As technology advances in the modern era, so is the sprouting of popular online apps, that generate millions of users , in which each individual identity was taken. There must be some benefits and drawbacks to this but I believe the disadvantages outweigh the precedence.

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Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is said that popular events such as the Football World Cup and similar sporting events play an imortant role in easing international tensions. I strongly agree with this predicament.

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It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films, and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

in this fast-moving world, Technology such as textbook, movie, and website could assist humankind to learn everything worldwide. Individuals could learn socio - culture in spesific area effortless without physically entering those area. although there are arguments on both sides, due to my own beliefs, i agree with this statement. these beliefs will be discussed in support of my personal stance in the following paragraphs.

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The society would benefit from a ban of all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purposes and can even be damaging. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

The promotion on the social media's as well as on the televisions play an important role these days. Some argues that it should be banned because no longer use of these. As per my prospective, it has increased the efficiency of business by promote selling of goods, aware the consumer's about new launching products and many more informative messages. So, I disagree with this statement, and would like to describe my views in upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

I agreed when a country becomes a host in an international event. of ,course there is advantage and disadvantage to this topic . the advantage about becoming a host is the other country who join to participate the competition will know more about that county who becomes a host. however as a host in an international sports events that you can show or introduce something about your country for example introduce the traditional food, clothes, tourist attraction,etc. after becoming a host and i...

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Summerise the information by selectying and comparing for the relevant information.

The bar charts describe the information about the ticket cost between two cities in Australia namely Sydney and Melbourne over two weeks periods in 2013, units are measured in dollars.

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Students are becoming more and more reliant on computers. What are some problems associated with reliance on computer and what are some of the possible solutions

Now ,days as technology is growing quickly pupils becoming more and more dependent on computers . however convenient education is made by the use of technology, associated problems persists which I am going to discuss and try to provide possible solutions for the same. First of all young one's are spending more and more time online either studying or playing games which is promoting a sedentary lifestyle in them, Adding further their social life is suffering as much as their physical health is. This causes problems such as obesity , depression, underdeveloped social as well as communication skills. For a clear illustration, in a recent ,studuy it's been found out that using any device for 4 hours straight has a hazardus impact on the eyes and brain leading to depression and other brain-related problems. On the other ,hand these detrimental impacts on children can be minimised by the collective efforts of the school, paren...

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Some People claims that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement

The way in which how people claim waste in contemporary society has become a topic of discussion among researchers.It is true that,with the advancement of state of art technology,garbage plays an integral role in human evolution.However,a significant proportion of society is in the view that garbage is not enough of the waste from homes recycled.In my point of view, the government want to make a legal requirement.I am inclined to believe that,household garbage becomes a major problem until involving the authorities by declaring laws on garbage.

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Summerise the information and selecting, reporting.

The pie charts describe the information about the regular meals contained three types of unhealthy nutrients Sodium, Saturated fat and Added sugar in the USA, units are measured in percentages.

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Some people think that illegal internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Music has become source of entertainment as it is common these days to download from internet. Some beleive it puts great effect on the whole music industry while other argues that artists'first priority is to become popular through the viral songs. In my opinion, financial lose to the company may lead to be bankrupt. So I agree with the first group, who are against illegal uploads.

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with the rise in popularity of the internet,Newspapers will soon become a thing of the past.To what extend do you agree or disagree

Both studying online and traditional classes have their own benefits. There are many factors should be taken into consideration.These days during the pandemic online classes have become trendy and this continues to grow more.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects.Other people think that in today's world,subject like Science and Technology are more important than history.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some masses believe that the past is one of the mandatory subjects to teach in schools, whereas, other folks think that in today's modern world Science and Technology are more vital than history. In my point of view, both have their own importance in student's life which I will discuss in this essay.

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Some people believe that children should be taught how to manage money at school. Do you agree or disagree?

Learning at an early age has a great impact on people's future knowledge and thoughts, so a certain group of the population argues that education centers should include some additional subjects to the early stages of learning such as how to control your expenses. This essay will express their ideas despite that the exact opposite is true.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.

In my honest opinion, music is always a good way to get to know each other and bring the different cultures and age groups together.

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