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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend and propose some solutions you think would be effective.

Crime seems to be growing in majority of the nations in the amidst of adolescent people. There are variety of violations that people can face, while a few measures that can be implemented. Firstly, there is a drastic increase in social problems involving youngsters because more parents spent time at work than with their children. Unattended youths and their siblings intend to lavish hours more in front of the screen. Secondly, on video sharing websites, it can be easily found instructional videos for just about any crimes that you can think of. With the extensive use of smart phone, tablet and laptop anyone can type numerous kinds of search words in the search engine. Finally, we must consider anxiety and stress caused to them in their very early stage of life and being called as a criminal. The initial legal process’s pressure is observed comparatively enormous than the adults on them. Turning to possible solutions, probably the most effective measure is parents should con...

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Some believe that younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting older family members when they become physically, mentally and financially unable to look after themselves. Do you agree or disagree?

Many argue that older family members should be taken care by younger family members and are responsible to support them mentally, physically and financially when they are unable to look after themselves. I believe that, it is everyone's responsibility to take care their parents or grandparents once they become older and cannot look after themselves but many fails to take that responsibility by their own due to the globalisation.

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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

It is often argued that in every country renewable energy such as solar panel can replace conventional energy to support residential's power source. Although using sun power have many beneficial, I think it is also have negative sides.

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Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers. Do you agree or disagree?

For years going outside had been viewed as an inseparable part of having a job but people are taking a fresh look at it recently and working from home is being feasible due to the technology improvement. A great number of rationales are being discussed by experts in the favor of remote working. Although it is noteworthy to bear in mind that this new jobe style has brought us several benefits, I am not completely in agreement with it. I will discuss two reasons for this disagreement in this essay.

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To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of edible insects as foods. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively the nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the population is rising significantly, which requires high intake of food. In order to meet this demand , country should allow edible insect recipes as part of the food. On the other hand, few individuals argue that eating insects is not healthy. Moreover, it also affects the human behaviour.

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Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should bebanned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is an undeniable fact that smoking is highly likely to have irreversible damage to both smokers and people who arearound them. Thus, from my point of view, it can be a valid reason for banning smoking in public outdoor areas.

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Many of the medical problems that people are experiencing in today's world are due to the fact that we have a very sedentary lifestyle.

In cannot be denied that modern people are facing various health problems and diseases. Some people believe thatthe explanation for this is due to our inactive lifestyle. From my perspective, the reason can be considered as one ofthe biggest problems, however, we cannot ignore others more dangerous impacts that can easily cause sickness toour well-being.

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Many of the medical problems that people are experiencing in today's world are due to the fact that wehave a very sedentary lifestyle. To what extent to you agree?

There is a belief that most of the illnesses that people are having these days is caused by the lack of physical activity.In my opinion, this is partially true, because a part of health problem is caused by the fact that people simply livelonger.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. what do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Some parts of the globe are witnesses of an ascending rate of both obesity and similarly the associated diseases.However,some probable factors are uttered here,whereas the possible solutions are given as well to iron out the issue. One of the most highlighted contributors of suffering from unfit body has to do with the sedentary lifestyle that recently dominated the globe as an offspring of the development of technology,which has bestowed comfortability to humans in exchange of their health.As a vivid case,the majority of the body demandig functions that used to be seen in farms,nowadays,are tackled by the machines,therefore,a lower level of calory is burned in comparison with previous decades.Furthermore,while the body requirement of energy has plummeted drastically,it consumsion has skyrocketed owing to the emerging of pre-packed foods that uaually are unhealthy.Not only utilise a lucrative source of spices to giving flavour to them but also some chemicals are added to ...

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. what do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Culture and rituals change don't change with generation they remain as it is but now a days many human think new think new genration should follow culture whereas other that should be there own decision. In following essay we will see both side of view and opinions, I will also try to convey my opinion on this

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Many parents believe that when their children read books for entertainment, they are wasting their time, and that they should read only serious educational books. What is your opinion about this?

It is argued that youngster should only read scientific book only. I strongly disagree with the idea and the remainder of this essay shall outline the rationale behind my position on this.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people why might be the case do you think this is a positive or negative situation

The preference of family to buying the condo has any reason.they want their most of time spent with family rather than renting their mansion to others. This is a debatable topic and I am going to delve into my points in upcoming paragraphs.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Improving the environment is as important as having next generation. We produce offspring to the world so that they continue the humanity while we show no love towards the so-called Mother-Earth. Taking care of the mother-nature , such as improving the environment , is neither just for one people nor a organization. Its a responsibilty for all man kind, individually.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

It has been noticed that some people contribute most of their lives to stay close at their born place.there could be multiple reason for this; however living at their birth area has it's own benefits as well as drawbacks. both the question would be answered further.

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree?

Media is one of the most powerful tool in the world. It is essential to our daily life and updates us with everything going on around the world. Lately , media coverage has mostly been about celebrities rather than actual news.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

While one majority of the people thinks that advertising encourages us to purchase things that we really do not need at the moment, another majority of the people could argue that the advertisements introduce us to the new goods that may simplify our lives.

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The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organizations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

As technology advances in the modern era, so is the sprouting of popular online apps, that generate millions of users , in which each individual identity was taken. There must be some benefits and drawbacks to this but I believe the disadvantages outweigh the precedence.

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Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is said that popular events such as the Football World Cup and similar sporting events play an imortant role in easing international tensions. I strongly agree with this predicament.

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It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films, and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

in this fast-moving world, Technology such as textbook, movie, and website could assist humankind to learn everything worldwide. Individuals could learn socio - culture in spesific area effortless without physically entering those area. although there are arguments on both sides, due to my own beliefs, i agree with this statement. these beliefs will be discussed in support of my personal stance in the following paragraphs.

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