IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 568

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion?

In our human society, we have a lot of countries, each of which has different cultural customs. However, music to which everyone can easily listen is one thing bringing people from different countries cultures, and ages together.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Railways are necessary for some public transportation such as high speed railway, train and subway. Besides, I strongly agree that government spendmoney on railways instead of roads. From my point of view there are two main reason. Firstly is about the global warming. Secondly is about residents security. Moreover, I will discuss some details in the following paragraph.

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People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?

Nowadyas, many people worry about do tthey safe or not when they are at home or when they go outside. From my point of view, the reason of this situation have two reason. On one hand, the news on TV program, news paper or anywhere always report the bad news of. On the other hand, the amount of own vehice increase. Moreover, some of soution can solve these problems it will discuss at the third paragraphs

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Some people believe the purpose of education is to make people useful to society. Others believe it is to prepare them to achieve their ambitions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this contemporary era, many individuals believe that education is most important for society's progress. However, others believe that purpose of education is fulfill their dreams and achieve success. In this essay, i would explain both points and give my personal opinion towards this in upcoming paragraphs.

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Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solutions would you suggest? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt that these days number of smoker is increasing in the world. The question is, why we should worry about this habit? In this essay I am going to write my own opinion and my own conclusion.

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Some people feel that with the rise of artificial intelligence,computers and robots of artificial intelligence, computers and robots will take over the roles of teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Most individuals are of the opinion that the increase in the rate of use in computers,robots and artificial intelligence will render tutors redundant in future.I believe this is true as the level of development in gadgets and machineries has improved tremendously in our society.

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Some people sre suffering from diseases, what is solution

The pie chart illustrates the average domestic spending in Japan and Malaysia in terms of five category

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Most high level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be require to allocate a certain percentage of these position to women. Do you agree?

Modern times have influenced different aspects of human life such as styles of making money that it has been changing everyday. This transformation cause that many workers who live off using brain instead of body in closed areas, had started feeling depressive at the begining of 20th centuries along with urban growth. In last decades, office employees who are called white-collar, began seeking a solution way for overcoming stressful life. One of the most popular method is giving up the job and settling a small village for coping with dull office life. However, this idea is not practicable because of two main reason: urban opportunities and life style.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss views and give your own opinion.

Pakistan is the country in which the literacy rate is 58 per cent according to the 2022 survey. the population of this country is 20 million and it is a developing country which needs more professionals to be a strong empowering nation and to build the good economy of the country. I strongly encourage the professionals to stay in the homeland and serve the country to help in growing. professionals are an asset to the country which can help the netizens as well as they can contribute to the country's economy by generating the foreign money by attracting the foreigners through their skills,by this mean person of the other countries come and facilitate through their skills and bring foreign money into the country. nowadays professionals prefer to go out of the country and settle abroad and serve the English people to make good money for just themselves they forgot how their country help them to be a good professional and make them enable to this point.This is the sad rea...

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Blood Hemoglobin Concentration Sensing by Optical Nano Biosensor-based Plasmonic Metasurface: A Feasibility Study

Abstract— Erratic in concentration of the blood hemoglobin (Hb) is pernicious and common disease in many humans of all over the world. The establishment of Hb measurement led to finding bio-optics mechanisms for tunable and high sensitivity dual-band plasmonic metasurface (PM) configuration that studied for Hb concentration detection of blood and formed by a semiconductor integrated with metal and dielectric layers. However, finding the mechanisms are particularly used without surgery that is a safe method with several potentials in biomedical applications. In this paper, a biosensor based on surface plasmon resonances (SPRs) that is a label-free detection method, is proposed to measure Hb concentration of blood. The presented sensing method has the susceptibility to be a dual-bands metasurface perfect absorber at room temperature for adjust the optical properties of the integrated semiconductor plasmonic structure. The modeling and numerical performance have been fulfilled based on...

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choice To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In our generation, groups of people think that we have too many choices in nowadays society.However, in my opinion, I do not agree on this view.Because the situations and factors we face will limit the number of choices which we can decide.

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More and more people want to own famous brands such as cars, clothes, or other items. This is positive or negative? Give out your opinion.

while some families think having a famous brand is extremely delightful for themselves and their family members, other people believe that a well-noun brand is not essential to have a nice life.Let me discuss my view in the next paragraphs.

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Some people think teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. They believe this would benefit teenagers and the society.What is your opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In most communities, adolescent are encouraged to spend their leisure time carrying out one duty or the other without being paid.This is thought to have positive effect on the teenager and the community at large. From my perspective,I think this has great advantage on the individual as it would help to guide them in the right path

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Some people claim that what eat in many western countries is unhealthy and that their diet is getting worse. Critics say that these countries should change their diet. What are your opinions on this?

There is a widely believed that people's diet is changing and they are following an unhealthy diet. Overwhelmingly I agree with this subject.

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In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, health concerns are being addressed among kids day by day. Their eating style and way of living are changed significantly. However, it is generally argued that it has negative repercussions on their health. I partially agree with this notion and in the following paragraphs, I would discuss reasons with examples to support my opinion.

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Some people think that sports contribute to peace building internationally. Do you agree or disagree?

The pie charts show the numbers and percentages of men and women in both full-time and part-time employment in the UK in 1988 and 2012. Overall, we can see that all numbers increased but there were significant differences in the proportions for each year.

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The noise levels have impacted the quality of our life, what are the causes of this problem and what should be done to solve it. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Noise pollution is unavoidable in today’s society. Due to high level of tone, it is badly affecting the quality of human life. There are numerous reason behind it, namely infrastructure development and increase in high volume of automobiles. However, it must be controlled by the government laws and initiative measures by the people in society.

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The noise levels have impacted the quality of our life, what are the causes of this problem and what should be done to solve it. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Noise pollution is unavoidable in today’s society. Due to the high level of tone, it is badly affecting the quality of human life. There are numerous reasons behind it, namely infrastructure development and an increase in the high volume of automobiles. However, it must be controlled by the government laws and initiative measures by the people in society.

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It is better for boys and girls to study separately rather than study in mixed sex classes. They are less distracted and this leads to better results. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some humans argue that it is better for male and female students to study separately than study in mixed-sex classes due to they may be less distracted and get more advanced results. In my experience, I totally oppose the argument because of some pros and cons.

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Subjects like arts, music and drama are more important than other school subjects and therefore should be given more time in the calendar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the role of art lessons in the educational system has been altered to be more beneficial than other courses. Yet, there remains a contentious debate as to whether the time of these cognitive processes should be increased or not. I partially disagree with this topic and will support my perspective with more details and practical examples.

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