IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 571

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people says that art (painting, music,poetry) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Community needs teenage helpers and it also motivates their opportunity to interact with other people in the Society.I totally agree because this can help the community and young generation to utilize their valuable time by serving the people and this is the way to socialise and communicate with other people.

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Some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of town and cities than to build more housing . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are many people how think that it is more important to plant tress in open area of town and cities , while some people believe that we should build more building. I compeletly agree with the former statement, and in this eassay I will support my view with examples.

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In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

As the world is becoming digital, the people are taking immense advantages of it and one of the example of that is doing work from home. This essay will throw some light on the advantages and disadvantages of the work from home.

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Crime appear to be rising in most countries in the word, especially among young people. Identify the possible cause of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.

These days, crime may frequently be occurred in both developed and developing countries, and also criminals may tend to be younger than ever before. This essay will discuss three main causes associated with the crime and suggest three possible solution. Perhaps, the major factor here is education program that is related to prevent from doing crime is not sufficient in education curriculum. This means that school not almost warns students may commit petty crime such as intimidate elderly people, playing truant and drop litter which are potentially opening a pathway in to more serious crimes later on. Another factor may be macro economic crises that influenced on family budget and standard of living. This decreasing revenue contributes people to commit crime for their living costs and even just surviving expenses. A third factor is that parents care for their children is may decreasing continuously and this may lead to more children attend a little crime, especially in poor ...

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Many countries spend a lot of money on improved transport for urban areas while neglecting rural transport. What are the problems associated with this? What are some possible solutions?

In the capital for each country, it always has a drastic advance or a substantial development; therefore, transports public are likely more relatively improvement than other cities, that it absolutely negatively affect to people in countrysides or others. This essay will demonstrate both problems and some ways to solve them.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

Nowadays, there are many qualified students after graduation are unemployed after long-term seeking for a job. In my opinions, this issue happens due to some reasons relating to both graduates and governments and some measures should be taken to tackle this problem as soon as possible.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like.Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology

University education system is one of the most widely discussed topics of these days whereas many people considered that the education seekers of the professional institutions should choose streamlines according to their interest while others have view point that learners should restrict to study science and technology-related subject matters which will become beneficial for them in future. I subscribe to the view that trainees should be provide complete liberty to select the learning material they have interested in.Both views will be discussed in this essay

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

It is sometimes argued that advertising have significant impact on consumers decisions, In contrast some people believe, due to the growth of advertisements we do not really care about them any more. While advertisements could help companies to introduce their products and services, personally, I think commercials are not effective any more.

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In the future, it seems more difficult to live on earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching another planet to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals think government should pore more amount of financial resources into searching another habitable planet as living on earth is becoming quite challenging. In this essay I will discuss reasons why I my opinion more amount of money should be put in to finding solutions to the problems faced by humans, as men are root of all the problems.

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Many people support use of animals for testing medicines for humans. Others believe it isn’t appropriate to use animals for such experiments. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The bar chart illustrates how the British population was employed in four major industrial sectors over the period of 1910 to 2010. The unit of measurement is in millions.

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Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays learners are more dependent on the Internet. Although the Internet is suitable for studying but some people think that it has many side effects therefor it’s use should be limited for studying purely. Limiting the Internet uses will limit its benefits and therefore prevent student from login valuable sites that may help them in their studies. This assay will discuss benefits and side effects of using the Internet In learning process.

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Bringing in foreign workers to fill positions that domestic workers are unwilling to do can cause problems in the local community and should, therefore, be stopped. Do what extent do you agree with this.

The number of foreing workers are increasing day by day in whole the world and they are fill up job position that the local workers are not willing to do. It can cause some issues in the community, but I do not agree that it should be stopped if the domestic workers do not want to attend certain job vacancies.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

The relationship between parents and child is one that takes care of the physical, emotional and social development of the child. It’s a unique bond that every parent and child can enjoy. This lays the foundation for the overall behavior of a child and the life choices that he/she makes. So I think it is indeed a good idea to teach every young person on how to be a good parent from the school. The essay formulated below provides key reasons as to why it is essential to teach youngsters to become good parents , to maintain a positive relationship with the child and to the skills needed to become a good parent.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

These days, advertising plays a big role in our market activities. Some people feel that it is usual and has no impact to our preferences. However, it might unconsciously influences our economic behaviour, and makes tremendous effects in our purchases.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

In this modern era, we might know obviously that internet have a big impact in shaping our culture and behaviour. Actually, reading habit is not an exception; while everything could be browsed and read by online and free, some peoples think that nobody would buy physical books or newspapers anymore in the future. I partially disagree with this notion that it would totally change all peoples’ behaviour.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.

Nowadays, having a place for live is credited to one of the most important basic need in our society. While people in some countries believe that owning a home is a great deal, it might be a contentious issue for some people who live in the big cities considering the payment that absolutely higher than renting for it.

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in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be this case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?

Nowadays, having a place for live is credited to one of the most important basic needs in our society. While people in some countries believe that owning a home is a great deal, it might be a contentious issue for some people who live in the big cities considering the payment that absolutely higher than renting for it.

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Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country for their studies. Do you think this is a good or bad Idea?

The figures represent the number of owned vehicles per thousand people in China between 1987 and 1999 years, inclusive. Overall, the bar chart shows an upward progression; additionally, the rate of increase varies significantly according to the individual years period. Turning to details, the smallest number of cars per thousand was in 1987 which amounted to considerably less than 500. The number of vehicles was rising gradually from 1987 to 1991 and became twice as many (just under 1000) as it was in the beginning. However, the changes in cars number were insignificant for the next years and remained approximately the same; additionally, it almost reached 1000. Furthermore, by 1995, the number of vehicles doubled (about 2000) in comparison with the previous time. It started uplifting rapidly; in addition, the number of cars in the next years accounted for just below 3000 and by 1999 it increased by almost 2000 (reached just above 4000). The figures represent the number of own...

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Some people think that the government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy. Do you agree or disagree?

Fast foodstuff on the plates at every meal is not only a habit but also a status symbol nowadays. It has been argued that the government must raise tax on such kinds of cuisine items to galvanize the public to initiate eating fresh and healthy. I am totally agreed with the aforesaid notion because it would help individuals to get rid of obesity and related diseases, in addition to that, it could also enhance physical as well as mental fitness. This essay will dive into the detailed advantages of it in the upcoming paragraphs.

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some people think watching TV is bad to children in every way. other think TV has positive effects on children , as they develop to grow up. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some opine that television affects adversely on development of youth whereas others think the opposite. This essay tries to discuss both views in my opinion later one is better because of catastrophic effect on health and make teenager uncivilized.

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