IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 605

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some think that father's should have time off from work after the birth of a child. Do you agree on this or not.

Some people believe that father must have days-off and be responsible after having a baby.

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Working long hours causes a great deal of stress and can be very bad for the health. The government must find a way to reduce this type of stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Everybody knows that stress is bad for workers' health. But whose fault is that? It is my submission and that it is the government role to intervene through legislation and support network to tackle this issue.

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Some feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Advertisement is the most innovative strategy in marketing which aids in sale improvement. A few people debate that it brings a plethora of negative drawbacks while other strongly believe it brings a lot of advantages to the company and individuals. I strongly believe the positives outweighs the negative by exhibiting its reach to the consumer and elaborating its use.

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crime is a big problem in the world, many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it to what extent do you agree or disagree? give your opinion.

The act of violation of law which is called offence, undoubtly is one of major barrier in the world. The majority of people think there is no measures to deter the increasing crime rate. I strongly opine that, this view is a unrational scepticism.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a common belief that public health would be strengthen effectively by raising the number of sport infrastructures. However, there is a more persuasive opinion that this is seemed as a part of building a sustainable health, then, other approaches would be required.

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Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development？

When it comes to how to make progress in sports, attitudes vary from country to country. Some remain firm believer in splurging to provide top infrastructure for elite sportsmen despite the common international belief that making these infrastructures an everyday luxury available for both school boys and city workers is more vital. In my aspect, burning money only for a few top athletes is a negative method of development.

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Some people think that technology makes life overly complexed, so we should make life simpler without using the technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is the most talked-about topic recently that technological innovations increase the complicated level of life overall, therefore, technology should not be applied to eliminate this complexity. In my perspective, this opinion does not make sense.

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Some people believe that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the environment, others maintain that the major profit is the development of world business. Discuss the both views and give your own opinion.

People are split on the governing advantages of global collaboration. Some hold the view that improvement on ecosystem is the major benefit, however, others the revenue gained from international trading. Form my prospect, the profits matter more and I will analyze both the opinions and the forces behind them in this essay.

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In most countries, young people form a large proportion of those who are unemployed. Why is this the case, and what can be done to solve the problem?

Numerous statistical studies all over the world have revealed a serios domination of young people among the unemployed. This essay will try to determine the reasons and outline possible solutions.

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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problem as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore, necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The fact that imposing higher taxation is one of the best ways to fix the problem of health related to fast food is true. I reckon that it is a solution and I agree with this statement.

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Learning to play team sports is an important part of a child's education. Do you agree or disagree?

Schools not only teach academic subjects but also make children to participate in different physical activities and sports as part of the curiculum. In addition to individual sports such as running, children should be trained to play team games such as football and basketball too. Learning to participate in group activities will establish team culture in their mind as well as make them enjoy sports.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Bio data,marital status and leisure time management are some of the information that employers seek to know about before giving a job offer.Though some people take it positive others criticize it and prefer that it is better if such information can be omitted.In this essay,we shall explore both sides and a personal view will be stated at the end of the discussion.

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Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Do you agree or disagree?

The major source of serious illness and death in the whole world nowadays is smoking. Therefore , in regard to public health, cigarettes and other tobacco products should be prohibited.I agree that smoking is a danger to human health and should be prohibited. Firstly ,those people who smoke usually Do not have the repercussion in mind towards their health from smoking habits and thus continue making a daily trend however lowering their body immune which they end up having serious illness and death . In addition ,the government has established smoking zones which are underutilized although not in all town centre consequently putting the public at risk so the other alternative is prohibiting cigarettes and other tobacco products. For example , a research done by the Nairobi university shows that 80% of lung cancer cases are caused by smoking. Therefore ,it is imperative for the government to put the strict measures ...

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People think that countries should produce food their population eats and import less food as much as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Produce own food and import less food will be always a topic of discussion because different goverments have different point of view and economic perspetive and it will depend how politicians are planing to goverment. I can give my personal opinion about it topic saying that I am agree with produce ouw food is better than import.

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.

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sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions?

Global warming causes sea levels to rise rapidly. This phenomenon affects all creatures living on land tremendously and without actions being taken, all human beings and other species will no longer be able to live on the planet as there will be no land left to do so. In the following paragraphs, examples of relevant problems and possible solutions to enhance the situation will be discussed in detail.

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It is better for people to be unemployed than people to be employed but they do not enjoy. Do you agree or disagree?

There are two views about God gif talents. While one group of people believe that certain features such as music and sport in individual are with people from born, another group are against from this opinion, they agree that successful persons work as hard as they can to achieve whatever they want. I completely agree with second view.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In recent years, more and more people tend to run their own business instead of becoming a worker in an organisation. In my opinion, this trend obviously has their own benefits and also some drawbacks.

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Social media such as Facebook, Twitter and Instagram has replaced face-to-face communication in our everyday life. Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages.

There is no doubt that reading plays an important role in our life. Doing a project about reading I found an opinion of teenagers' favourite book genres and collected some data. I am going to comment on several key features of the results.

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Some governments spend a lot of public money training individuals to be successful in international sporting events. Some people believe that this money should be spent on things that will benefit the general public instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In our diverse world, there are different types of Governments, some pay more heed towards welfare of their citizens by internal growth whereas some give importance to building Image of themselves globally as a strong nation through participating in international sporting events. It's all about their leaders vision and their people's priorities, so the ones who want internal growth spend money in developing infrastructure of the country or improving their healthcare and education system, usually these are the under-developed or developing nations. on the other hand are the developed nations who have peaked in other internal matters and are in the race for being global leader.

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