IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 605

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometime starting until the age of five or six, right up until the age of eighteen. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making childern do exams?

Althogh learning new knowledge and testin it is very important, it must be done very carefully since children are very influential.While some accept that issue has positive effects on children and teenagers,majority beliieved that issue has negative impacts.These points of viwe will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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With the advent of social media, more people are getting their news online instead of from print media. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for people who read news online.

Nowadays, most people take the advangate of keeping up with the world through social media rather than reading newspapers. I think that new channels for information transfer are both beneficial

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Nowadays both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care. This was not so in the past. What may be the root cause of this behaviour? Discuss the reasons and possible results

In this contemporary era, people are going vast behind artificial beauty and are forgetting about natural beauty. Everybody is spending many expenses on beauty products or beauty care centres. It has many causes and consequences that I will discuss in the following paragraphs.

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Many adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games. Why do they do this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Access to computers has increased significantly over recent decades, and more and more adults playing games on computer. This essay will discuss why myriad of adults present this preference and why it is a positive development.

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More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

With the development of technology ,more and more technical talents are needed.Therefore ,many parents want their children become the talent in this field ,they allow their children to using computers and tablets in order to study internet ability .May be this way can help children learn more skill about technology ,but in my opinion,i think the good sides is less than bad sides.

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Some people say that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Other thinks that those who contribute to society like teachers and scientists are most successful. Discuss both side and give your opinion

Many individuals argue that those who have contributed significantly to society such as teachers or scientists are much success as compared to the affluent. In my opinion, those who try their better for doing something beneficial for society can be considered actual successful because they are selfless.

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In some countries, university students live at home, while in other countries, university students go to other cities rather than live with their family. Do you think the benefits of living away from home outweigh the disadvantages?

In this contemporary world, some college-goers choose to attend a university in their hometown while others want to travel across the country, attending in a faraway university. In my perspective, the merits of living away from family outweigh its demerits.

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Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Museums and art galleries exhibition have been a very well-known event since decades. People, whether have the understanding of art or history sculptures or they don't, loves to spend their time admiring the same. We would like to elaborate here today is regarding the admission fee charged by the Museums and art galleries.

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In recent years, the family structure and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?

The family structure and the role of its family members are shifted considerably when compared to the past few decades. I truly believe that the positive side of those changes is more compared to the negative side.

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People who believe in animal rights think that they should not be treated cruelly, for example in experiments or for sport.

Opinion is divided on whether 8 humans should focus concentrate on animal cwelfare humans should focus more on their psychological halth problems. I am of the opinion that humand welfare should deserves more concern. Admittedly, Animals are all adorable creatures and merit affection and tour of humane treatment. But in Some cases, humans Just go too far with showing their animals affection. Some people actually out of their ways, regardless of their financial bong capacity or relation human interactions just to treat animals " right " s people tend to when people are su from certain problems, thy still do the best they can to worship their pets. tlumans tend to forget that animals per are considered their friends and friends don't want to see the other get hurt or suffer because of them. Animals ' welfare should not be pur above human's happiness. & For instance, if a person Is not happy with their lives and co own aper, this they might use the pets...

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Some people argue that working in a large company is important, others however give preferance to work in a small company.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

With reference to above debate that people usually have on woking in large organisation is better doing work in small firms is better. Lot of persons have lot of queries on this that which company is better to work for their future. We will conclude this as below:-

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the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

At the present time, the large number of people prefer to buy online shopping as demands of it are developing with velocity among the world. To my mind, it is not good point.

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Many students decide to further their study abroad. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad?

In the present era, international study is becoming highly popular amongst students and they prefer to educate themselves in other nations. This essay will discuss both merits and demerits of students studying abroad followed by a conclusion.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

After completing school life, all teenagers struggle to resolve the problem whether they should enter into a university for a degree or look for a job. Some see more plus points of doing a bachelors degree and start their career life afterwards, while others prefer to start an employment right away without doing further learnings. However, below paragraphs support the first view with reliable supporting ideas as having a degree or same qualification explores a vast range of opportunities for a person.

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Competition for university study is becoming increasingly strong. Why are universities becoming more competitive? Is this a positive or negative development?

It is conspicuous that in this current era, people have become much more competitive in trying to get a seat in a university. This increasing trend, in my opinion, is just because welfare has increased in various societies, thus, the middle class are able to think about going to university in order to engross themselves in science and other fields of study. This changed attitude definitely is positive on the whole.

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More people have decided to have children in their later age than in the past. What are the advantages and disadvantage of doing so?

It is a serious topic of discussion that at what age people should have kids. Some people like to have kids in their early days, while some believe that one should have kids when they are ready to explore parenthood. I am going to discuss the pros and cons of this in the following paragraphs.

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Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

People have a language as a communication media. There are more than 200 languages in the world.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.

Today many company try to show their products some new way when they do advertising. I reckon, it is a positive trend. In this essay, I will provide some arguments to support my view.

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Nowadays a large amount of advertising aimed at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Children are the resource in the future.they are the future leaders.they need to grown up with strong manner.so advertising is the one main important way to communicate the massage to others.so,it help to make a market place.As per the above topic the lot of advertising aimed at children.So I am not strongly agreed with this comment and I would like to evaluate further more.what ever it has more controversion.

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In some parts of the world, the rate of divorce has increased dramatically over the past few decades. Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.

In some parts of the world, the rate of divorce has increased dramatically over the past few decades.

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