IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 604

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that the unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

High school is a fundamental part in the formation of many people. What we learn and experience here might stay for the rest of our lives and be the reason for making decisions later as an adult. This is why it is important to recieve relevant information about different fields of life, not only theorical. Doing community service can be relevant for students to complement their subjects with practice, to make them aware of people's reality and keep them busy during free time.

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Many things can influence the academic achievement and emotional growth of a student. In this regard, peers have more of an impact than teachers do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Some people think that schoolmates have significant effect on the academic performance and emotional development of a student than teachers do. In my opinion, I think that classmates are more impactful as academic moltivation while educators serve as a more righteous guide to student’s emotional maturity.

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In spite of technological developments in transportation , many people believe that a bicycle is the best way to reach in any destination .What are the advantages and disadvantages of using a bicycle nowadays?

Technology has increased rapidly to make human lives more comfortable and convenient. It is assumed by humans that cycle is the most sustainable and convenient mode of transport to get to their destination. In this essay, we will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of riding a bicycle.

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

We face a greater part of our lifetime ,learning facts, theories ,and many other scientific laws, grafted by our ancestors,but we have forgotten the basic aspect of what learning is about.It is not just about attending lectures,reading books, and passing examinations with good grades,it has a practical side, which needs to be touched, and although the former is very crucial, the latter part ought not to be discarded. I strongly agree that we spend much of our education on factual stuffs, than the real aspect of it.

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Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

A section of society believes that in today's world, few strategies followed in promoting products are not profesional as well as not acceptable. However, other's disagree with this approach. In my opinion,advertisements nowadays are negatively persuading children and young adults.

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In spite of technological developments in transportation , many people believe that a bicycle is the best way to reach in any destination .What are the advantages and disadvantages of using a bicycle nowadays?

Technology has reached every nook and corner of the world. Even the transportation is not untouched, but many deem that one must choose ecofriendly means of transport such as bicycle. Opting this have many benefits as well as drawbacks. I'll discuss it in this essay.

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it is often said that retirement is the happiest time of a person's life. how far do you agree with this view

Most people tend to believe that retirement is one of the best stages of life and a time when a person can be truly happy. Nonetheless, it may also appear that more youthful periods of life could be more joyful compared to the senior years as the latter can have many disadvantages. This essay will tackle both views and give a final opinion regarding the matter.

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When it comes to the effect of the increase of age, opinions vary from person to person. Some are firm believers on that becoming elder is disadvantageous, while others argue that it is not a serious thing nowadays. Next, I will analyze both the standing points in this essay.

On one hand, there are sveveral pionts stem for the decreased worry of aging. To begin with, getting old does have some benefits. Elder peolple have much more useful experiences and skills compared to young people due to their longer life span. Therefore, it is easier for the old to deal with the problems in workplace especially the occupation that demands various working experiences such as doctors and lawyers. Moreover, with technological innovations flourishing, the daily lives of the elderly are beconming more convenient than the past time. Living standards of the old have been tremendously lifted through a series of infrastructures specially constructed for the old people, such as a particular device embodied in the showering equipment for the improvement of the safety of users, which will ring if it is clicked. At the same time, nursing industry is booming and the needs of caring old people can be easily met.

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With the coming of new mass communication media like television and internet newspaper is losing its importance. Do you agree with this or not?

Nowadays,different ways of communication like television and internet are becoming more common than tradition ways like newspapers.It is discussed that the importance of newspaper is missing.This essay disagrees about this opinion and it will be explained in a larger context.

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Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays more and more people are attracted to extreme sports and dangerous activities. The reason seems to lay within the fact that individuals lack adrenaline in their everyday life and this essay will discuss this topic.

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Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

In the modern life, the advancement of science and technology requires the development of artificial intelligence, resulting in an opinion asserting that people are not used to control anything smarter than their. From my perspective, artificial intelligence play an indispensable role in the future. Several arguments that augment my standing, are discussed in this essay.

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Fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere; this has bad effects on our lifestyles and diet. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowardays majority of people are spending of their time at work more than being at iregadless of you are male or female. This is due to economic expenses. Put simply long time ago most woman never used to go to work therefore they used to do all the choirs including making home made food and to attend to other needs of the house. On the other hand close relatives used to visit and demonstrate their own cuisines to promote variety of food and taste. For this reason that is why most people opt for takeaways even though they know its unhealthy practise.

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Advertising discouraged people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same.agree or disagree

We see a lot of advertisements in our daily life, be it on transportation or on different media. We get to know about the products that are available in the market through them, and they give the individuals with different taste options to choose from.

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extend do you agree?

People have always tried to improve themselves by following the actions of somebody they admire, depending on the aspirations each have. Nowadays, Internet has made possible that any person can make their daily routines public, and for famous people to show how they live and interact outside scenery. This is not exactly positive for kids that are just starting to learn about life and how to organize their time.

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Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficlult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antartica. What are benefits or disadvantages for tourists visiting such places?

Now a days, People have a plethora of options to travel for vacations but it gets weirder when they are attempting to go to the places where the atmosphere is extreme such as Sahara Desert which is too hot and Antartica which has shivering cold breezes. However, this has both the advantage such as making memories and also disadvantage like injuries.

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Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In contemporary era, manufacture of vehicles get increased and the demand for fuel also increased and due to that small towns and rural areas which are at far not able to get the enough quantity of that. Thats why the find the alternative of that is become a nessesity. Finding the new source have definatly have more advantages. Electric vehicles are more popular for alternative, it make less polution in environment compare to those transpotation whic are run of petrol or diesal.

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Some people think that Hardwork hands in achieving financial success working hard does not contribute to financial success discussible both views and give your opinion

Shoes Do you like buying shoes? How often? I don’t like buying shoes. Once I buy shoes, I wear them for a long time. Have you ever bought shoes online? Of course I have. I bought my shoes online last year. I bought it on Nike’s official website. How much money do you usually spend on shoes? I don’t wear shoes that are too expensive, but I think I spend about 100 dollars on shoes. Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes? I prefer comfortable shoes. Because I have to walk every day, comfortable is the best. Headphones Do you use headphones? Yes, I use headphone. I use Beats wireless headphone, it is very light so I bring it in my backpack everyday. What type of headphones do you use? As I said, I use wireless headphones. I use it when I study IELTS, or doing workout. When would you use headphones? I usually use headphone when I got distracted by something in library or gym. I mean, when I want to focus on something, I use headphone. In what co...

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In order to study at university, students are required to pay expensive tution fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A section of society thinks that the government has to provide free university education to all students. However, high priced tuition fees are imposed on them to do their graduation, which every learner cannot pay out. So, in my opinion tertiary education need to be given free for the benefit of students and society.

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Public celebrations (national days, festivals) are held in many countries. Some people say that these celebrations are a waste of money and we should spend money on more important things. Do you agree or disagree?

Public celebrations, which are held in many countries, seem to be allocated much money. Therefore, some people consider that governments shoud concentrate their expenditure on more important things. However, there are some reasons why I strongly disagree with this point of view.

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