IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 608

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world.Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Disy both these views and give your own opinion.

In today's world some people have an opinion that it is absolutely helpful to portion information as much as possible, but on the other hand, others believe that some data is totally confidential or extremely valuable to be shared freely.From my point of view, both approaches have their advantages and disadvantages.So,in the following essay I will discuss both viewpoints.

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Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both vioews and give your opinion.

Government earns money through the taxes paid by the individuals on their income and then spends it through various projects such as building roads for better transportation, hospitals for healthcare, sports facilities for the athletes and so on. But any amount that is spent on the entertainment or art often comes under heavy critisism as many people think that it is not a necessity, when compared to schools or hospitals. There are obviously two schools of thought that differ from each other on this point. According to me, amount invested by the authorities on helping the artists, is definitely not a waste.

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some people believe that vegeterian diet is better for health. do you agree?

In the last few decades, the vegetarian diet has entered the mainstream all over the world, most notably in western countries. Furthermore, today many people are conceived that everybody should go vegetarian since it is not required to consume meat to maintain a healthy lifestyle. Personally, I argue that this approach has flaws.

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some people think that medical service should not be run by profit making campanies . Do the disadvantages of private health care outweigh its advantages

It is ususally argued that healthcare facilities should be governed by non-profitable organization and not by companies who are in this department to earn money.I acknowledge that it has a wide range of beneifts and also has some drawbacks but in my opinion advantages of such system outweigh it's disadvantages it is further discussed below. Almost everywhere in the world medical supplies such as vaccines,medicines,surgical instruments etc. Are sold by A private company and not by any governement organization.This is the right approach because healthcare is such an industry where being upto date and ahead of time is really important. One prime example of this was covid.While government organizations in the front-end were working with general public to control the spread of the virus by Analyzing the situation and making laws or regulations like enforcing nation wide lockdown,urging people to where masks and maintaining social distancing. Governments around the globe...

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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.

Nowadays, more and more community choose to watch TV set at home as their leisure activity. Some people think that it can make community lazy and isolated from socializing with others. I totally agree with this view.

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In some countries, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

It is quite common, that wards are being informed that they can accomplish whatever they desire if they put in some effort. This kind of information can help the kids to be courageous about their future, and venture into careers that they normally would not go into; however, it has to be balanced, because it can give a false sense of hope, and it can also cause discouragement in pursuing their dreams, if they encounter setbacks.

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In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless . The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you Think the advantage of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, there are many driverless vehicles and people try to develop this technology . so automatic car will increase and a lot of drivers prefer this way in automatic. I’m sure there are pros and cons, but I think advantages far outweigh disadvantages

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You should write a story ending with the words “It was only then that I realised they had mistaken me for someone else.”

I was a 12 years old kid with some friends, but most of the time I have been feeling lonely. There was nobody that I could share with except my family, but you know that sometimes you can’t tell everything to your mum or dad. When I started to write my diary about the things that had happened during the day. I started to feel more calm and free.This book was hidden from everyone without exceptions. There were all of my experiences from cheerful to miserable moments.Everything was alright. I am taking notes, talking with my parents and everything is perfect. Well until one amazing sunny sunday in which I couldn’t find it in the place I used to hide it.

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an essay presenting the pros and cons of teens using social media

The social media is a trending thing right now, in the last twenty years it has become from a vague point that people used it often to a critical part of our society, especially for the young people.Social media can consume time and it is a great deal of power in most people’s lives, but is it good or bad? Social media isn't just for personal connections, it can be also used for job, network and connect with potential employers.The second this is that social media is a great tool for social awareness about various things in the platform u can raise funds or post a help for a human and many other things.There are some creative opportunities and it is a great thing that people can build as side hustle as i said earlier you can find a job on the social media and be “Influencer”, this type of people are the patrons for the younger generation, they follow their life, what they are eating, their clothing etc but is social media made of only good sides.

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Some people feel unsafe either staying at home or going out. What are the possible reasons for this? What can be done to address this issue?

Different strokes for different folks. In recent years, global safety rates are observed to decline drastically to an extent that people now feel insecure wherever they are. This essay shall intend to delve into the main reasons why folks feel unsafe either indoors or outdoors and some preventive measures to overcome this issue in the upcoming paragraphs.

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In some countries, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Now can achieve anything they try hard enough because now time competition is so high in all countries.if you try hard way you take many apologies in future.in my opinion some countries children are often told that they can achieve anything they try hard this way is advantages children increasing confidence in future but advantages children losing mindlessly.

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Successful sports professional can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professionas. Some people think this is guppy justified while other think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion

To be successful in the field of sports has it's share of benefits. If you are highly successful in the field of sports be it any sport like Cricket, football or tennis, there is virtually no limit for you to earn money. There are two groups divided on the fairness of the amount earned by the succeasful sports personalities.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cell phone) app is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

With the introduction of various online platforms many people have started to go digital for making payments to the vendors. May it be paying for shopping clothes or transferring money to the relatives, many opt for digitalised mode of settlement.I feel that there are multiple positives and only a few negatives. There are pros and cons of this method. Let us look at both, the benefits and the dangers.

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Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although some people like to spend their free time with their workmates,others keep their personal life away from work life.In my opinion,there should be a gap between once personal and professional life.

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The government should take responsibility for their actions to the environment. To what extent do you agree?

We vote a certain ideology to the power thinking that they will deliver on the promises that they have made. Committment to the environmental issues is one such task in any state's progress card. They should be held accountable for any damage caused to the mother earth due to their policy decisions. At the same time, it is equally important to acknowledge any goof effort on their part to save our planet.

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Discuss advantages and disadvantages of working from home?

These days , the remote work has become increasingly commun among companies and emplyees . Although I think that this trend can have some obvious adverse consequences , I believe that the advantages of telecommuting can outweigh the disadvantages .

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Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In this modern world, it has become a debatable issue what subject should be added for adults in their studies. As some people believe that, they should have to teach regarding global updates, while, others consider it completely useless. I will shed light on both these prospects along with my opinion.

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Some people think that dangerous sport should be banned while others believe that people should be free to choose.Discuss both views and give your opinion

Different strokes for different folks. A good Sport should be a source of entertainment both for the participants as well as for the spectators. Some individuals argue that some sports activities should be legalized. This is mainly because it is not safe for human beings. Although, others think that people have all the rights and they are independent to take part in any game activities. This essay shall intend to delve into both views and will elaborate on my perspective in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people say that the best way to imporve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others , however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Now days all people bussy about work and study.they have a don't time other activities like one playing sports and exercise .they most like spent the free time at home.i counsider that sports facilities the best way to improve health.

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Some people say that the best way to imporve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others , however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The society has different opinions on how pubilc health should be improved.There is a number of peaple who believe that sports can help reduce the increased number of health problems while others believe they are other ways means .ln my opinion i believe they are different ways to promote health

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