IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 609

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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it is often said that retirement is the happiest time of a person's life. how far do you agree with this view

Most people tend to believe that retirement is one of the best stages of life and a time when a person can be truly happy. Nonetheless, it may also appear that more youthful periods of life could be more joyful compared to the senior years as the latter can have many disadvantages. This essay will tackle both views and give a final opinion regarding the matter.

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When it comes to the effect of the increase of age, opinions vary from person to person. Some are firm believers on that becoming elder is disadvantageous, while others argue that it is not a serious thing nowadays. Next, I will analyze both the standing points in this essay.

On one hand, there are sveveral pionts stem for the decreased worry of aging. To begin with, getting old does have some benefits. Elder peolple have much more useful experiences and skills compared to young people due to their longer life span. Therefore, it is easier for the old to deal with the problems in workplace especially the occupation that demands various working experiences such as doctors and lawyers. Moreover, with technological innovations flourishing, the daily lives of the elderly are beconming more convenient than the past time. Living standards of the old have been tremendously lifted through a series of infrastructures specially constructed for the old people, such as a particular device embodied in the showering equipment for the improvement of the safety of users, which will ring if it is clicked. At the same time, nursing industry is booming and the needs of caring old people can be easily met.

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With the coming of new mass communication media like television and internet newspaper is losing its importance. Do you agree with this or not?

Nowadays,different ways of communication like television and internet are becoming more common than tradition ways like newspapers.It is discussed that the importance of newspaper is missing.This essay disagrees about this opinion and it will be explained in a larger context.

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Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays more and more people are attracted to extreme sports and dangerous activities. The reason seems to lay within the fact that individuals lack adrenaline in their everyday life and this essay will discuss this topic.

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Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

In the modern life, the advancement of science and technology requires the development of artificial intelligence, resulting in an opinion asserting that people are not used to control anything smarter than their. From my perspective, artificial intelligence play an indispensable role in the future. Several arguments that augment my standing, are discussed in this essay.

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Fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere; this has bad effects on our lifestyles and diet. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowardays majority of people are spending of their time at work more than being at iregadless of you are male or female. This is due to economic expenses. Put simply long time ago most woman never used to go to work therefore they used to do all the choirs including making home made food and to attend to other needs of the house. On the other hand close relatives used to visit and demonstrate their own cuisines to promote variety of food and taste. For this reason that is why most people opt for takeaways even though they know its unhealthy practise.

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Advertising discouraged people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same.agree or disagree

We see a lot of advertisements in our daily life, be it on transportation or on different media. We get to know about the products that are available in the market through them, and they give the individuals with different taste options to choose from.

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extend do you agree?

People have always tried to improve themselves by following the actions of somebody they admire, depending on the aspirations each have. Nowadays, Internet has made possible that any person can make their daily routines public, and for famous people to show how they live and interact outside scenery. This is not exactly positive for kids that are just starting to learn about life and how to organize their time.

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Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficlult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antartica. What are benefits or disadvantages for tourists visiting such places?

Now a days, People have a plethora of options to travel for vacations but it gets weirder when they are attempting to go to the places where the atmosphere is extreme such as Sahara Desert which is too hot and Antartica which has shivering cold breezes. However, this has both the advantage such as making memories and also disadvantage like injuries.

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Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In contemporary era, manufacture of vehicles get increased and the demand for fuel also increased and due to that small towns and rural areas which are at far not able to get the enough quantity of that. Thats why the find the alternative of that is become a nessesity. Finding the new source have definatly have more advantages. Electric vehicles are more popular for alternative, it make less polution in environment compare to those transpotation whic are run of petrol or diesal.

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Some people think that Hardwork hands in achieving financial success working hard does not contribute to financial success discussible both views and give your opinion

Shoes Do you like buying shoes? How often? I don’t like buying shoes. Once I buy shoes, I wear them for a long time. Have you ever bought shoes online? Of course I have. I bought my shoes online last year. I bought it on Nike’s official website. How much money do you usually spend on shoes? I don’t wear shoes that are too expensive, but I think I spend about 100 dollars on shoes. Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes? I prefer comfortable shoes. Because I have to walk every day, comfortable is the best. Headphones Do you use headphones? Yes, I use headphone. I use Beats wireless headphone, it is very light so I bring it in my backpack everyday. What type of headphones do you use? As I said, I use wireless headphones. I use it when I study IELTS, or doing workout. When would you use headphones? I usually use headphone when I got distracted by something in library or gym. I mean, when I want to focus on something, I use headphone. In what co...

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In order to study at university, students are required to pay expensive tution fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A section of society thinks that the government has to provide free university education to all students. However, high priced tuition fees are imposed on them to do their graduation, which every learner cannot pay out. So, in my opinion tertiary education need to be given free for the benefit of students and society.

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Public celebrations (national days, festivals) are held in many countries. Some people say that these celebrations are a waste of money and we should spend money on more important things. Do you agree or disagree?

Public celebrations, which are held in many countries, seem to be allocated much money. Therefore, some people consider that governments shoud concentrate their expenditure on more important things. However, there are some reasons why I strongly disagree with this point of view.

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Some think that father's should have time off from work after the birth of a child. Do you agree on this or not.

Some people believe that father must have days-off and be responsible after having a baby.

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Working long hours causes a great deal of stress and can be very bad for the health. The government must find a way to reduce this type of stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Everybody knows that stress is bad for workers' health. But whose fault is that? It is my submission and that it is the government role to intervene through legislation and support network to tackle this issue.

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Some feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Advertisement is the most innovative strategy in marketing which aids in sale improvement. A few people debate that it brings a plethora of negative drawbacks while other strongly believe it brings a lot of advantages to the company and individuals. I strongly believe the positives outweighs the negative by exhibiting its reach to the consumer and elaborating its use.

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crime is a big problem in the world, many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it to what extent do you agree or disagree? give your opinion.

The act of violation of law which is called offence, undoubtly is one of major barrier in the world. The majority of people think there is no measures to deter the increasing crime rate. I strongly opine that, this view is a unrational scepticism.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a common belief that public health would be strengthen effectively by raising the number of sport infrastructures. However, there is a more persuasive opinion that this is seemed as a part of building a sustainable health, then, other approaches would be required.

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Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development？

When it comes to how to make progress in sports, attitudes vary from country to country. Some remain firm believer in splurging to provide top infrastructure for elite sportsmen despite the common international belief that making these infrastructures an everyday luxury available for both school boys and city workers is more vital. In my aspect, burning money only for a few top athletes is a negative method of development.

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