IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 97

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's society, leisure time is essential for children to release stress from their activities. Some people argue that parents have an order to set the activities, while others believe children have the free will to choose. In this essay, I will discuss both sides, but I personally agree that children should have the freedom to spend their free time.

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The advantages brought by the spread of English as a global language will outweigh the disdavantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the view

English is familiar in our lives and spreading quickly as a global language. This may lead to some Benefits and drawbacks. But I believe that the benefits is outweigh disadvantages.

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These days people prefer to watch live performances through TV or Computer, online rather than go to the place of event

Nowadays people would prefer to watch performances on TV or computer rather than go to the place of the event.

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numbers of participants for different activities at one social cantre

The graph provided illustrates the amount of Australians involved in various leisure activities provided by a social centre in Melbourne between 2000 and 2020.

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•Some people suggest higher education should be funded by the government, while others think that students should pay the course fees themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are opposite opinions about university education whether it should be financed by pupils or by the government. Although the quality of education increases with personel fundings, from my standpoint, government-supported colleges reach large number of people and it creates equal opportunities.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people advocate for parents' role in teaching their children how to become good members of society, while others argue that schools are the primary institutions responsible for imparting values and behaviors.

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Some people think that it is better to build more public parks and sports facilities in new town rather shopping malls. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The major aim of this report is to describe the park which is in close proximity to my house, mention the pastimes city dwellers can do there and give some recommendations on enhancing the place. The park has changed the lifestyle of the vast majority of people living in the neighbourhood and now I’d like to discuss why.

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A few people debate that technological inventions like cellphone are making people socially less interactive. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

At present days, there is at least one device with each individual in the community, and people are discussing how these new inventions affect the lack of communication between the community members. This essay have several points of view and will explain them all.

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More and more plastic is polluting the city, countryside and ocean. What are the problems caused by plastic waste? What measures should be taken to solve these problems?

The large number of plastic items causes pollution in different escapes of the environment such as cities, country side and ocean. In this essay, I will explain the problems that plastic waste resulting in, and I will give viable solutions to solve this problem.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People consider the computers being the most vital discovery of the recent century. This essay will discuss the reasons and give a conclusion on this topic.

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Some think it is a good thing for senior managers to have much higher salaries than the other workers in a company. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that some people believe it is a good thing for senior managers to have high salary much higher than other workers in the company. This essay agrees with this statement.

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Postponement, or the act of delaying a task, has been cited in some research articles as one of the factors for poor academic performance by some university students. What are some of the reasons behind students procrastinating, and what measures can be taken to address the problem?

Some research articles has mentioned that procrastination is one of the factor for lack academic performance by some clollege students. This essay will examine some factors why are students have tendency to delay a task and how to prevent that proplem.

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Some people believe that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

the majority of visitors of museums and historical sites are tourists,but not local residents. the reason for this is marketing and promotion. absolutely everything is aimed at attracting tourists.

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It is thought by some that is better to live in a city while others believe it is better to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is sport. It is undeniable that sport has become an essential part of our life. However, there is no absolute agreement sport should take important role for people s life.

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Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economics around the world.However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argued that one of great deal contributed to economics around the world is tourism with the rapid growing industries. On the one hand, the after effects on tourism such as local culture and environment damage is often ignored. This essay is completely disagree with later statement because it can help local community through economic transaction and eco-tourism to restore the environment.

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Some people believe that Watching a TV is beneficial for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In today's world, television programs developing rapidly. Some people argue that watchin TV can be beneficial for children, others believe it has more harmful effects.

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In many countries nowadays,more and more women have full-time jobs as men,so there is logic men and women should share the housework tasks equally(like cleaning and looking after children).To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, in many countries, women have full-time jobs like men, therefore, some people argue that men and women should equally share the household chores, such as raising children and cleaning. I completely agree with this statement because as women are earning and contributing economically like men, men should ensure equal contribution of men and women in society

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Some people think that it is more important to plant more trees in open area in towns and cities than build more housing. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that some people think that it is more important to plant more trees in open spaces in town and society than build more housing. While it is a commonly held believe that planting trees in areas more important than building houses, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinon I disagree on this statement.

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We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages.

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