IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 97

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations

Whilst some people believe in accepting a difficult condition of life, others believe that every person deserves a hope for a better life condition. In my opinion. Everyone has a choice and certain reasons like the unsatisfactory job or shortage of money cannot be a serious problem.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages for children of watching televizion?

There is view that watching televizion can provide children with entertainment. While this if they addicted to watching television,they would be spend less time on physical skills and should artificial light from the television negatively affects their sleep, I believe the benefits - some shows will help kids how to think creatively and television is educational.

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Learning English is important? Do you agree or disagree ?

So, people want to learn more languages. Most of them are in English. Why do most people only learn English? The reason for this is the increasing demand for learning English. All teenagers are busy learning English and other languages.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In present times, the advance of technology are driven people to do their daily activity remotely because they have convenient doing all things at their homes. This phenomenon certainly have the benefits and drawbacks, I firmly believe that the advantages outhweight the disadvantages and will be clearly describe through this essay.

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At present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In our rapidly world, the residence of some countries a large proportions of young and adults,this quantities compare with figure of older population. This two groups produce advantages and in some time disadvantages. In this essay I will compare this groups and find the main solution of outweighs this or not.

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Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

nowdays, in the very fast and strong growing global economy is promoting businesses to be established to earn income. Some people think that the income should be invested in hospitals and schools and some individuals think that the money should be invested in high-rise buildings.

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Nowadays,many old cities are rebuilt and redesigned (with older buildings knocked down) in order to look modern.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this practice.

Remodeling or rebuilding is considered to be an uprising trend in the present time, especially among the new generations. I will explore the pros and cons of this trend as precisely as possible in this essay.

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Due to so many young people dropping out of schools, the rate of unemploymentis increasing, and it affects our society in different ways. In your opinion, how can this situation be improved?

These days the level of unemployment is rising due to many young people dropping out of schools and this has been impacting our society in different ways. Regarding this issue, I propose several solutions that will be ventilated along this essay, including to enhance school accompaniment and ensure family support.

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There are several advantages to hosting an international sporting event. There are disadvantages too. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

for thiscases there are two things the benefits / advantages and dis advantages that are wheter they are support for hosting an international sporting event or not. let'start with the advantage of hosting an international sporting event . lest we've just make an example of the 2018 asian games celebration that held in indonesia backdays. on that days there's an significant change on the infrastructure development , cause there will be an international event that will be held , so by that the government improve and boos their infrastrustur development ,followed by the international exposure for the country itself . and also it is increasing the economy by the tourism that visited the event itself.

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Robots‌ ‌can‌ ‌free‌ ‌people‌ ‌from‌ ‌difficult‌ ‌and‌ ‌dangerous‌ ‌work.‌ ‌However,‌ ‌some‌ ‌people‌ ‌are‌ ‌worried‌ ‌about‌ ‌the‌ ‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌ ‌robots‌ ‌may‌ ‌create. ‌‌Discuss‌ ‌the‌ ‌benefits‌‌ ‌of‌ ‌using‌ ‌robots‌ ‌and‌ ‌the‌ ‌‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌‌ ‌from‌ ‌it.‌ ‌

Technological advancement has brought about the invention of new technology in every industry. Robots can relieve individuals of hard and harmful tasks. However, there are concerns of other individuals of the impending danger that these robots might cause. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using robots as it can result in the idleness of people and reduce the job market.

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Some people believe that it is essential to include physical eduction classes i the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Presently, physical wellness is as important as academic education in schools. Whilst people contend the notion that physical classes should be amended to the school curriculum, proponents of academic education address a contrary opinion so to say children's time should solely be diverted towards subjects like mathematics and science. It is my contention that filling out children's time at schools with academic classes can be backfired at education provides, therefore, a hybrid educational system that entails fitness and academic classes should cautiously be considered for a sustainable development.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages for children of watching television ?

Nowadays, the majority of the youth are not keen on reading paper books apart from that their are wasting of time, such as watching television. I reckon they are watch excessive. This condition is often observed among kids.

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Some people believe that radio is the best source to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose. Discuss both perspectives and give your opinion with relevant examples?

Some would argue that getting news through radio is finest way, while others say that television serves the purpose in an efficient manner. Although walkman provides information regarding happenings around the world in handy and cheapest way, I believe that television broadcasts current affairs in an interesting manner with both audio and video.

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Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In recent years, many countries have increasingly relied on importing a significant amount of food from abroad. Although, this trend offers a country access to a wider variety of products and can stabilize food supply and it also raises concerns about environmental sustainability, food security and economic dependency.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high amount of sugar which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree.

Due to high population in our global world Manufactured food and drink products which contain large amount of sugar can be causes many health problems. Producer have to increasing price for the food and drinks products that contraning suger to be more expensive than the normal prices to encourage people to consume less sugar. In this essay, I will discuss why I do not agree with this idea.

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The illustrations below show how chocolate is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagrams below depict the techniques employed in the extraction of fresh chocolate. Overall, this 10-stage process entails the fermentation of ripe cocoa beans that will be roasted once dried in order to have the liquid chocolate pressed out.

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Governments should speand money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is a consideration surrounding whether governments should spend fees on constructing railways instead of roads or not . The writer of this essay agrees with that notion as this will protect the environment alongside improve the working quality

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It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films and the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days most people talk about this topic.So,some people think that it is not necessary for prople to travel to other countries to learn about the culture.While others believe that its better for people to travel to other places to learn about culture and we can learn as much as from books,films and the internet. This eesay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal conclusion.

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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, there has been a significant increase in the number of people travelling to foreign countries for leisure. While some argue that this trend has a negative impact on the countries being visited. I personally believe that the benefits for that country outweigh its drawbacks.

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With recent improvements online, it is increasingly possible for people to leave reviews for goods and services they have purchased. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In the modern era, individuals can give instant feedback to the items they have acquired online. This enhancement can benefit both consumers and businesses in numerous ways and brings some difficulties as well.

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