IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 96

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobd are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether genders in occupations is an increasingly concerning topic of debate. Some people maintain men and women have their own performance, which then leads to a number of particular jobs are for men and the rest are for women. The writer of this essay agrees to the given statement due to health strength and their personalities and will shed light in the latter.

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Both governments and individuals are spending vast amounts of money protecting animals and their habitat. This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in the society such as poverty and health care. To what extent do you agree?

Enhance of surgery technologies is leading to more and more people are getting the opportunity to use these services. Human complexes the hugest mental problems for many people, that’s why an increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. In the time, other people debate about reasons of having that opportunity and morals of the decision. Let’s figure out either.

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It is important for childrento learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

The understanding and learning of right and good at an early age will guide them to sucess. This essay mainly talks about educating childrens's and do we need the punishment involved in this process, will it help them to understand.

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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagre.

Many people feel that, learning foreign language is a waste of time to. I completely disagree with this opinion and think learning languages satisfaction is much more important than computer translate. To explanation, the right computer will translater all the information accurately, but not always, the computer is big and it will be inconvenient to carry it with you all the time. So I think it is better to learn foreign languages, for example you traveled to korea or for some business you went but you do not know Korean, there are several disadvantages of this, but you can not communicate properly with koreans and that is too bad therefore our understanding that learning languages is a waste of time is completely wrong because when you learn the languages of a country, you also learn the history of it is culture, which helps us to increase our knowledge and think bradley . If you want to go for a trip learn the language and culture of that country and you will have a good time the...

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I disagree to a large extent of the aforementioned statement. The ratio of male and female students in universities has changed from the usual figures in the past, but this dogmatic claim is done without careful thoughts.

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Many people believe that playing games teaches us about life while others believe that children waste their time by playing games. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, many people know that if we play games, games will educate us about our real life. While other people know that many children are dissipating their time by playing games. In my opinion, children are wasting their time by playing games.

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Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, in the rapid change of technology, many developed countries compete to place their researchers in space to find a place to live for humans besides earth. As well as for scientific results and new discoveries for their countries. However, debate is on the surface about the huge amount of money that the governments have spent on those projects. In addition, many people conclude that the governments should spend their money on other beneficial things related to the nation. In my view, I firmly disagree with this statement, and in this essay, I will elaborate the reasons and provide examples to support my viewpoint.

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In many countries, people now wear Western-style dresses such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development

Most countries have developed a new fashion for a few decades now. Today people wear suits and jeans coming from different shops, but all the same and really easy to find.

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Shops should not be allowed to sell any food and drinks that has been scientifically proved to be bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree

There is an ongoing debate about food products which are proved to be harmful for the health and wehther markets should not be permitted to sell these goods. In my opinion it is extermely essential for the governments to make strict regulation for preventing shops from selling these unhealthy items. The following paragraphs will discuss this assertion.

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Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or films) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In these recent years, freedom of speech has become a controversial issue among human rights defenders. It is to the extent that some people believe creative artists should have the right to say anything they want under any circumstances and government should not restrict them. I partially disagree with this opinion.

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Whether or not someone achieves their aims in life is mostly a question of luck? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

at all times people were wearing uniforms to show their proffession. In this essay I want to describe advantages and disadvantages of this tradition.

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advertising has become increasingly popular in different markets. Firms are using various forms of advertising to popularize the novelty of their products to the public for additional profit

Nowadays, advertising has become increasingly popular in different markets. Firms are using various forms of advertising to popularize the novelty of their products to the public for additional profit. I suspect this is a negative development that could hurt the welfare of consumers.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is highly argued that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. In this essay, I vehemently agree that music is an art a form of language which brings generations and loved ones together from different backgrounds.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In many countries, people are now living longer than even before. some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having ageing population outweigh the disadvantages.

It is certainly true that the increased number of elderly population brings some drawbacks for governments. However, it is my belief that the positive effects of this phenomenon could certainly offset its disadvantages.

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The ling graph below shoes the percentage of tourists of Schtland who visited for different attractions in Edinburgh.

The line chart depicts proportions of consumers for different community facilities in Edinburgh such as aquariums, castles, zoos, and festival Scotland for a span of 30 years between 1980 and 2010.

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nformation technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benifits of IT outweigh the disadvantages.

IT has become more of a buzz word through recent times. Many might believe that we are losing our path by relying too hard on technology, While others believe this is our path of redemption. I believe the positives completley outweighs the negatives, But I will discuss both sides.

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The only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offences. What extent do you agree or disagree?

Lately, a large number of mishaps on the street have due to careless drivers. Today, many people feel that committing stricter punishment would be the reply to handling the driving offender issues, but I disagree it is the only means.

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Some people believe that education trip or excursion helps promote overall holistic learning. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In this contemporary era, the approach of learning is transforming among scholars. Therefore, some individuals claim that educational trip and workshop should be organised by school, which can be beneficial for the overall development of students. I agree with this notion and reasons associated with this are elucidated in following paragraphs.

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Q. In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

Every year a numerous local and international festivals and celebrations are host to represent countries with their unique cultures and customs. In the contemporary era, the urge necessitating holding maintain those indigenous events has been diminishing in some countries, posing a formidable threat to very existence of some trends. I contend that globalisation is a chief culprit which yields the biggest influence over young generation to steal their attention from these traditional events.

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