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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Write about the following topic: Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

A segment of people contend that non-public learning institutions should offered government aid. Conversely, other segment believe that corporate schools have enough funds to support themselves. My perspective inclines with the notion that these schools are self-sufficient which do not require any financial support from authorities.

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The world of work is changing rapidly and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change, and suggest ways of preparing people for the world of work in the future. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, lots of people are required to consider changing their occupations. People can no longer rely on getting incomes and sticking with stable jobs because of recent advanced technology and unpredictable human disasters. A possible solution to this dilemma is having an own proffession which allows people to work globally. This essay will explain this statement and provide some examples.

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Some people say educational school is the only critical factor to the development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often argued that the prosperity of a country is merely depending on the education level of its schools. I am inclined to believe the idea that the only way to achieve the significant development of a country is the highly-developed education centres.

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Some people say that television contributes more than any other modern inventions to the quality of life of the modern people. Do you agree or disagree?

A group of individual thinks that television has made our life easier than the past as compared to any other other technological equipments of the contemporary era. In my perspective it is not true are many other advancements that are far superior and provided more comfort for the human life such as mobile phone, computer and means of transports.

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Schools concentrate far too much on traditional subjects which do not adequately prepare students for the realistic demainds of the modern working world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world where we are experiencing a technological overture as of the moment, contemporary school teaching is still far behind and falls short of the standards required for the modern working world. While ultramodern technologies are popping up each day, the schooling system is still stuck with the conservative educational policy and subjects which have become a bit of a drag for the 21st Century student. Not only is this obstructive to the growth of nations and societies but also psychologically trammeling the socio-psychological thinking of the modern child, the mindset of the modern employee, the livelihood of the modern laborer and even the political aspirations of a leader.

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Many people work from home using modern technology today. Some people think that only the workers benefit from this and not the employer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, using technology is become ubiquitous all around the world. Besides, a large number of people who work at home using modern technology in these days. It is deemed by some individuals that using technology only beneficial for the employees and not the employer. Although, technology might be more practical for workers, I strongly disagree that there are no merits for employers.

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Some people think parents should supervise their children’s activities closely, while others believe children should have more freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The age-old question of parental supervision hinges on a delicate balance. One school of thought advocates for close monitoring, ensuring children's safety and fostering good behavior. Conversely, others champion greater freedom, believing it fosters independence and exploration. The ideal approach, however, lies in a nuanced interplay of both.

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Some say that news have no connection with most people’s life and it is waste of time for most of us to read newspaper and watch television new programs Do you agree or disagree

It is thought that there is no relevance of news to citizen’s life and is also believed to waste our time to update new information though reading traditional as well as watching digital video news. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with these beliefs and will explain the reasons in this essay.

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that rich countries must assist poor countries that suffer from natural disasters with humanitarian logistics. Regarding that notion, I completely agree with the action because of the following reasons.

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not all drivers obey the laws while driving on roads, what are the reasons for this? what can be done to fix this problem?

In modern society, although traffic laws apply to arrange myriad of road safety, some drivers avoid to obey them. I will exert considerable circumstances beyond it and propose potential solutions to address this issue.

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Computer and A.I technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, online education growing using artificial intelligence and computers. This happens because of the benefits of this development such as fast research or having a large source of data and it is a negative growth.

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Computer and A.I technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

A.I technology and computers are more and more being used for online education. This writer thinks that artificial intelligence can enhance the learning experience because of its flexibility and enormous knowledge, it will be a positive development.

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Computers and A.I . technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

Study online and apply more A.In technology and smart devices in recent years, artificial bits of intelligence have been able to develop learning experiences and help from virtual websites has been more positive than negative.

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EXPERTS BELIEVE THAT, OVER THE NEXT DECADE, ROBOT WILL BE DOING MANY OF THE JOBS CURRENTLY DONE BY HUMANS. DISCUSS THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF THIS.

Emerging technology as well as robots is inevitable in the next decade and some of them believe they will replace human jobs. In this essay, I will explain the benefits and drawbacks of this topic.

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Some people think that news media nowadays have infulenced people's lives in negative ways to what extent do you agree or disaggree.

The majority of people believe that News and media these days have a bad effect on people. I totally disagree with this and I will discuss that.

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Leaders and directors in an organization are normally older people. Some people think younger leaders would be better. Do you agree or disagree?

In today’s rapidly evolving world, the debate over whether older or younger individuals make better leaders in organizations is ongoing. While some argue that experience and wisdom often come with age, others contend that younger leaders bring fresh perspectives and innovative thinking to the table. In my opinion, both age groups possess unique strengths, but a blend of youthful vigor and seasoned expertise can get the most effective leadership outcomes.

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Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides ang give your opinion.

Some people emphasize that getting a high degree from university is the best way to get a guaranteed job, others think that going straight into work after school graduation and getting experience there is better for anybody. Although these two statements seem to be reasonable, I would argue with the latter group of people.

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Poverty is a problem that affects the majority of children these days. Discuss the effects of poverty on society and suggest some solutions to this problem.

Most of the people assume that poverty exerts an increasingly negative influence on children and society these days. There are some impacts can be shown due to poverty and there are several solutions to alleviate this issue.

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what should young people do to contribute to the harmony and diversity of school environment?

As the future generation, students are pivotal in exploring the large world. Improving cultural diversity and inclusivity is crucial now more than ever. To create a better future, we can instruct the students on how they can contribute to improving the progress of integrating diversity and inclusivity in educational environments all over the world.

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Nowadays, more and more people choose to do their shopping online instead of going to physical stores. Why is this so? What are the disadvantages of this trend?

The internet is changing our world at a dramatic pace. It is quite common nowadays, that people are more inclined towards buying things on online platforms instead of going to supermarkets and malls. This essay will explore the main reasons for choosing online applications, as well as the potential drawbacks of this practice.

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