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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Computers and A.I technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience ? Is this a positive or negative development ?

The technological advancement of computers and A.I in the modern world have remarkably supported the online education. From the writer’s opinion, integrating artificial intelligence would definitely develop the wide range of experience in learning aspect due to its beneficial innovation which plays an indispensable part in our life.

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Computers and AI technology are increasingly used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

In many recent years, AI and computers have been gradually evolved in learning online. It is the writer’s opinion that artificial intelligence provides a faster and easier access to relevant materials than traditional way, giving more conveniences in learning experience; despite the fact that it can significantly decline the learners’ curiosity as well as easily make them get lost in that massive references’ space without a proper guide.

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AI technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

AI technology and computers are being utilized for virtual education more frequently. The writer believes that artificial intelligence is a tool for both teachers and students that assists them in educating and learning process. This leads to a positive development in education

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Computers and A.I technology are increasinglybeing used for online education. Can artifical intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive and negative development?

In recent years, A.I and computers have widely been used for learners to learn online as they enhance students' experience with various entertainment and information sources. This writer believes that this is a positive development bacause students are flexible to thir study schedules.

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Computers and AI technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

Gradually, artificial intelligence seems to be applied under high pressure for teaching and learning by using the internet. This author believes that robots are one of the effective ways to improve learning experiences and will be referred to as positive development.

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Social media enable people to keep in touch with each other and learn about news events. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages？

Use of various online platforms for connectivity and staying updated with the current affairs is the new normal in todays world. While every new technology has its pros and cons, this essay with outline how these platforms are a boon to the mankind.

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nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

In recent years, although computers bring about various benefits, it has emerged as one of the vital threats to children lifestyle. This essay will exert detrimental ramifications of playing computer games and propose strategies to alleviate these adverse effects.

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Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?

Indulging children has become a prevalent parenting issue in many modern families. From my perspective, this practice may have both immediate adverse impacts and long-term consequences for children.

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Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In our fast-paced society, many people in developing countries die because of the lack of access to medicines. Some societies have a notion that drug companies should make their products less expensive to ensure that everyone can obtain them. I believe that it is important to discuss this issue comprehensively, and in the forthcoming paragraphs, this essay will elucidate the reasons for why l partially agree with this idea and provide a logical conclusion from my standpoint.

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The goverment should sometimes infringe on people's freedom for the security of society. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is common belief that the idea of intruding upon individual liberties is abhorrent. However, I firmly believe that one's freedom should be violated by the goverment when the flimate purpose is to prevent potential dangers and to ensure that safety regulations are being observed.

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Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In the realm of education, the question of whether students perform better under a system of rewards or punishments has long been debated. While some argue that rewards serve as better motivators, others contend that punishment can effectively deter undesirable behavior. This essay will explore both perspectives before presenting my own viewpoint.

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People today are surrounded by all kinds of advertising. This both affects what they think is important and is a negative influence on their lives. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

Advertising on mass media is becoming all-pervasive in this modern world than ever before. However, there remains certain discrepancy as to whether the total impacts of these forms of product endorsements have been advantageous or disadvantageous to the sustainable growth of civilized society. Whereas many put forward opposite proposition, I hold to the belief that the imperfectness of these advertisements is far outweighed by its practical benefits.

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What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is thought by some that present times are the best times in history to be living. I completely agree with this statement as these recent years have been the most progressive years of humankind in terms of technological developments.

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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as Men in a country's police force or military force, such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for this kind of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is whether the role of women in the army will remain the same, as the current discussion about the army calls into question. Whereas there are people who assert that only men should join the military, I strongly disagree. A woman should be given equal opportunities at the army, navy, as well as air force wherever men are. They actually become the factors that chase increase in expertise and cognition for armed forces alongside of the achievements of a myriad of diverse skills and points of view. There's something within us that allows us to ignore sex as the defining trait for strength.

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Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there are different forms of educational activities are provided to students in school including some group assignments and tasks that have to be done on their own. Some argue that working on school tasks with other people is preferable, while others feel it more difficult than completing tasks individually. I personally find it easier to work it by myself than with a group. Firstly, there are some advantages of working with a group when students have to complete some assignments or reserch projects. One of the reasons is that a variety of ideas can be generated from the group members and the project would be more creative than only one's ideas. Another benefit is that discussing with other people can bring a strong sense of bonding and create a better relationship with other fellow students. For example, I have done a big reserch project at university last year. It was a extremely challenging experience for us and it took us 6 months to finish it. However, in the end, we ...

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These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In the contemporay era, many people tend to shift jobs from one place to another frequently during their course of lives. This essay will delve into merits and demerits of the phenomenon.

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In some cultures elderly people are highly valued, while in some other cultures youth are more valued. Discus both views and give your own opinion.

Human life is a secred blessing that deserves to be valued at all cost irrespective of age or racial differences. However, in some other parts of the world we have realised that there is more attention given to elderly community than the youth. This matter is debatable, in this essay, i will discuss both sides and explain why i think the elderly deserves more value than the youths.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academy world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared free .

A group of people believe that free academic publishing is beneficial in research,

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans illustrate that a society garden was opened in 1920 and it has been replaced some things in the same park now.

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Too many historic buildings are in danger and destroyed in many countries. What are the main reasons? How to protect them?

Monuments of historic significance are damaged or even attacked in several countries. It is caused by a plethora of reasons. These can be protected by authorities and general public by following various means.

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