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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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The spread of a ‘global language’ such as English will threaten national languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is undeniable that English has become more popular around the world and similarly there are other languages popular in many countries. The Term 'Global Language' is used to represent these languages and is considered to be useful learning based on one such language.In my opinion, I would strongly agree this will threaten the national languages.

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Most countries believe that international tourism has harmful effects. What problems are caused by international tourism? What are the solutions to address these problems?

There is a longstanding debate over whether tourism is beneficial or not. Though it is true that travelling industry can be one of the most certain factors in raising the level of GDP of a nation, there are also some negative aspects brought about by international tourism. In this essay, I will examine a variety of demerits of touring and suggest some solutions to these disadvantages.

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Traffic congestion are a serious problem in the city. What are the problems and solutions of this

Traffic build-up is a major issue that is common amongst cities. This essay will first suggest that the biggest causes of this are commuters travelling to work and individuals opting against public transport, and then argue that a rise in the proportion of carpooling as well as giving workers the option to work from home are the most viable solutions.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting universuty studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Many students around the world have the opinion that working or travelling a year before starting academic study is a good option. This essay will discuss the experience gained and how saving money are the biggest advantages, however, reducing motivation to study and delaying careers are the main disadvantages.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some contend that animal testing should be prohibited, while other people believe that using animals in a trial experiment should be allowed as long as it will be used for imperative discoveries. From my perspective, it is crucial to allow animal testing in any experiments since usually it is hard to find another option that has similar qualities to an animal as a subject in trial research.

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In recent years, people in many countries have been able to afford more material possessions such as electronic kitchen appliances, computers and vehicles. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this increased level of affluence, and give your opinion about whether this is a positive or negative development.

People in many countries have been able to afford more material possessions in recent years, such as electronic kitchen appliances, computers, and vehicles. Some people believe that this is an advantage because it helps people lead an easier life, whereas others believe otherwise. Even though these advancements can produce more methane and fossil fuel consumption, I believe that it is an advantage because it brings people an easier life, less amount of chores, safety, and easier communication techniques.

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Some people believe that developments in the fields of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, worry that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, the field of artificial intelligence has rapidly progressed. Economic studies show that the global AI market size is growing at a rate of 37% every year. There are individuals who hold the view that advances in artificial intelligence are advantageous given their potential to significantly aid human beings. Others are opposed, arguing that computers being more intelligent than humans is detrimental. Despite its increased speed and convenience, AI has the potential to cause unemployment and impede the advancement of humanity.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the dynamic landscape of modern business, companies often prioritize highlighting the newness of their products in advertising campaigns. In this essay, I will explain why this trend can be seen as a positive development and I will explain the reasons.

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Nowadays more and more people have access to the Internet. But constant availability of any information worsens people’s memory and critical thinking skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Opinion is divided when it comes to the negative influences of the endemic access to the internet have inflicted on people's memory and critical thinking. With my standpoint, I partly disgree with this statement and this essay will give further information.

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Some people believe that schools should teach foreign languages for primary children. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern world, linguistic knowledge is important for many people. Thus the school should teach foreign languages subjects and some people suggest that they should insert them into primary school lessons. From my point of view, I believe that the pros of teaching another language to small children outweigh the drawbacks and I will discuss this in the following essays.

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.

Nowadays, employers often prioritize occupations with substantial wages over job satisfaction. From my perspective, I tend to agree with this notion, particularly in meeting basic daily needs. However, it is essential not to disregard the benefits of finding joy in one's work for future career development. This essay will delve into why it is imperative to simultaneously pursue both a high salary and job satisfaction.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population is decreasing in the countryside. Do think this is a positive or a negative development ?

Nowadays many human beings have an increasing affinity to living in cities rather than in rural areas. There are many reasons such as career and academic opportunities for better life conditions. This essay will discuss the positive consequences of moving to cities from rural areas.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days, there has been a dramatic increase in the number of researches about the methods to improve public health. Some people believe that the effective way is to increase the number of sports facilities, while others feel that this has little effect and other things should be involved. In this essay, both views will be discussed with examples.

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People are surrounded by advertising. Advertising can influence what people think So it has negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, advertisements are everywhere and they influence people's thinking and it has a negative impact. I agree with this statement because advertisements make people buy products they do not need and spend more money.

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In the modern world, many employees lack soft skill such as communication and working in the teams. What are the main causes of this problem? What are the effects of the lack of such skills ?

There are many qualifications regarding a well-rounded worker, such as getting a degree, and having enough work experience in the field. However, many employees lack essential soft skills to be efficient in their work. This essay will cover the causes and effects of the skill shortage in employees.

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Some people suggest that sport champions should be banned from television, meanwhile the others say it is allowed. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Several people propose that sport competitions ought to be banned being broadcasted on television, whilst some argue that it should be allowed. This essay disagrees with the notion that television channels should not transmit sport championships as it is a form of entertainment for the majority of people, and because the athletes that are telecasted are role models for many, especially the youth.

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Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There are growing beliefs that spaces for graffiti should be allowed by the government while others argue that it should be forbidden in cities. Some citizens believe that graffiti can make the city look dirty and community belief in the criminal records involved will add to the claims; however, I stand on the same side as those who allow graffiti space for creativity and the government supports to make regulations about the locations.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. What are the advantages and disadvantages of charging people for admission?

People are expected to pay a fee for admission in many museums, but some museums have no such policy. While charging museum-goers a fee has some clear benefits, it is not without its downsides.

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Giving children and adolescents pocket money is common throughout the world. Do the advantages of this practice outweigh the disadvantages?

Pocket money has become a ubiquitous practice globally, serving as a fundamental aspect of financial upbringing for children and adolescents. This essay will explore how the advantages of this practice often outweigh the associated disadvantages.

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As a part of their education, many students work at a company for a short period of time without a salary. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to this?

In the education scale, there is a moment when the student is willing to do an unpaid internship in a company for a short time as a part of the completion of their course. However, in this essay, I strongly disagree with this issue because I believe there are more disadvantages side and I will explain below.

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