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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Nowadays, some buildings such as offices and school have open space design instead of seperate rooms. Why is it so? Do you think it is a positive development or negative?

It is a very popular trend that of modern constructions replacing separate rooms with open spaces. Many schools and offices have implemented this design, and that is a development only for the good, because of the creation of much more space for people and more natural lightning. This essay will argue why those two are the main reasons for approving this mode.

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An increasing number of 18-year-olds are moving out of their parents' homes so they can live on their own after finishing high school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

In recent days, the rate that 18-year-olds are moving out from their parents increases after they graduate from high school to live on their own. There are many advantages and disadvantages of living on your own after graduating from high school. For example, the advantage of living on your own is that they can study on your own or bring friends to study together for university. However, the disadvantage is that they do not have enough money to pay the rent.

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Young people are often influenced in their behaviors by others in the same age group. Some argue that peer pressure is important while others feel it has distinct disadvantages. Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages?

In the modern society, adolescents could be maleable to the personality of those in their same age gap. While many people remark the importance of peer pressure, others may point out the downsides of this situation. In this essay, I will explain in detail why peer pressure could represent several disadvantages for people of young ages.

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Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To want extent do you agree or disagree?

As society advances, the question of whether criminal charges against a teen should carry the same penalty as that of an adult has sparked a considerable debate. While many advocate for it, others contend that because they are still kids under the guidance of their parents without any responsibilities and that their immature minds are too young to understand the gravity of such a crime. Examinng these facts will give a comprehensive understanding of this subject matter.

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today,the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not real needs of the society in witch they are sold. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the context of modern society, the industry of advertising have a considerable influence in the increasing and alarming consumism of generation nowdays. This essays agrees with the former statement, since the architecture of social plataforms allow and encourage this phenomenon, as well as the quality and fast-paced goods manufactured in the context of today.

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Nowadays people are not fit and active as before. These will have negative effect in the future health. What are the reasons and solutions to this issue?

It is thought that nowadays people are unfit and non-active compared to the bygone days which is detrimental to their future. This essay will delve into possible reasons and put forward some practical solutions to address this issue.

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In many countries, childhood obesity is a growing problem. What are the reasons for this and what can individuals and governments do to tackle the problem?

In many countries across the world, nutritionists have been alerting the society about the huge number of children with obesity. To understand the plight, this essay will point out some reasons which cause such public health problem and will give possible solutions to diminish the impact of this crisis.

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Food travels thousands of miles from farms to consumers. some people believe we should buy food from local farmer to protect the environment and support local businesses. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent times, some argue that because of the environment and local businesses we should try to buy food from farmers. The in-depth analysis in the following paragraphs intends to discuss why this essay explores the positive points outweigh the negative points.

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In some countries it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow vegetarian diets. Do the advantages of this outweighs the disadvantages.

There is a widespread trend of people who become a vegetarian in several countries. This essay will explain why I think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. Consuming more vegetarian diets will lead to high fiber consumption, it will not be as healthy as consuming balanced diets and vegetarian cuisines are relatively expensive as well.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

Choosing a profession has always been a challenging task for young students. It determines a student’s following 10 years. Some people suggest that university students should freely study whatever they are keen on during their academic years. Some rational people believe that students should only attend subjects that will benefit in the future. In my essay, I will explore both statements and make a conclusion with my personal point of view.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent times, data shows that the highest proportion of the population in many countries belonged to the elderly. Some consider it beneficial for societies, while some other lay claim that it could be difficult for governments to deal with this condition. The in-depth analysis in the following paragraphs intends to discuss why this essay explores the negative points of the ageing communities outweigh the positive points.

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The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in school programs?

In society nowadays, the arts (music, art, theatre) is still seen as crucial by the people. I believe that this is the case since many people are positively engaged in this related activity, therefore it should be taught in school institution.

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Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Immigrants that took decision to move out from their own country to a new one should adopt the local culture and assimilate with the local people. On the other hand, there is another perspective that support the immigrants to have freedom and established a minority community so that they can adapt well to a new environment better. This essay will elaborate this two contradictive point of views on the next paragraph.

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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

There is an argumentative perspective heating a debate over the notion that numerous individuals in society are using social media in place of in-person interactions. In my opinion, the demerits may overshadow the merits.

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Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

Nowadays, water pollution has significantly increased, particularly in rivers, lakes, and seas. Reasons for water pollution are that many industries free their wastes overseas, as well as urban and rural area residents pollute water. Consequently, aquatic species suffer from water toxicity and public health is decrease by several water diseases.

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Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

Biologists and environmentalists have been warning about the increasingly risks of extinction of some species around the world. Abrupt changes occurring in nature because of human activities have been causing damage in different ecosystems and their biodiversity is struggling with it. Considering the scenario, this essay argue some problems and possible solutions which can be done to diminish the situation.

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Governments should provide care and finance for retired people while others believe that people themselves should save money when they get older. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there are sorts of doubts and arguments that the retired community should be financially supported by the country, while

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Some people think the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Each government and authority gave funding to the art society; however, some people including me are strongly of the opinion that this is a type of money money and is not a profitable action that all social classes can use.

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Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books, while others think that paper books will never disappear. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There has been a never ending debate about the future of paper books. Some groups of people argue that e-books will subtitute paper books completely. On the other hand, the others think that paper books will be long lasting. This essay will elaborate further about these mindsets.

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In some places old age is value, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a belief that the old are more favourable than youngsters whereas other areas approve the opposition. It is the opinion of this writer that the youth should be the top priority rather than the old.

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