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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people say that the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be useful to society. Others say its purpose is to prepare individuals to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss these views and give your opinion.

Some say that the aim of education is to prepare people to be helpful to community. Others say its objective is to prepare people to accomplish personal aspirations. In my opinion, the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to become beneficial to society.

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It is important for people to take risk, both in professional lives and personal lives. Do you think advantage of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, there has been significant growth of modern startups In metropolitan cities, and mostly the younger generation is coming up with these new models. Because of this development professionals are taking risks in their careers as well as in their personal lives. Although, there are drawbacks of choosing a complete different path in life, but i believe that advantages are even more significant.

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Percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last 10 years discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing Trend

Over the time period of a decade,their has been noticed the rise of 20% in the count of chubby juveniles in the Western society .This essay will discuss about both the reasons behind inclination of number of overweight children as well as examine the consequences of this concerning topic.

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Organized tours to remote community and other countries are increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and environment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Package tours to distant areas and communities have gained popularity in recent years due to the beautiful natural landscapes and unique flora and fauna. It is argued that this trend benefits both local residents in terms of increasing financial resources and stimulating employment. However, I believe it can jeopardize the natural environment and the conditions of local people.

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Nowadays people live longer after they retire. How does this affect individuals and society? What can be done about this?

Recently, it was noticed that people started to live more after their retirement. It affected to a lot of individuals' life, since they realised that there will be more increased expenses in future. It will make the retirement period harder and more expensive for people, so, in my opinion, there should be accepted some advantages for older.

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Many people nowadays live in societies where consumer goods are relatively cheap Do you thing the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent times, a lot of people are residing in places where consumer products are not expensive. Although, the quality of these items may be reduced because of low prices, almost everyone will be able to afford all the goods that they need. I believe that the drawback of producing less quality goods far outweighs its benefits.

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Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem.

With the increasing complexity of society, more young people are becoming susceptible to engaging in criminal activities in urban areas. This essay will outline some of the reasons behind this issue and propose possible solutions.

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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Obesity has become a protracted conundrum globally. Certain individuals believe that raising the cost of fast food is the solution. This essay totally disagrees with this view because depriving people of fats can lead to other dangerous illnesses. Furthermore, sometimes, obesity is the product of lifestyle, unrelated to fatty products.

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Living in a country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems to what extent do you agree or disagree

At present, people migrate mostly due to study and job-seeking purposes. In most situations, people who migrate will face the problem of a language barrier due to their poor adaptability to the native language. This can lead to many serious social and practical problems and therefore I agree that this issue can cause serious practical pitfalls as well as communication difficulties. Hence, in this ,essay I will focus on concrete problems like communication gaps related to poor services and misunderstandings that may cause mayhem.

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Many people nowadays live in societies where consumer goods are relatively cheap Do you thing the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Today's era is significantly advanced than that of the past and availability of cheap consumer products attracts people to buy things more frequently than ever before. Even though the living standard of people has improved with this, I feel that the demerits of this trend cannot be overlooked.

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There are many things that can motivate people to perform well in their work. These can include the salary, job satisfaction or the chance to help others. What do you feel is the best motivation to do well at work?

There are variety of reasons that can drive people to work well in their job, such as earn sufficient wage, satisfy with their job, have an opportunity to support others. I believe that the best encouragement to boost worker performance is to fulfill their basic needs based on their level employement.

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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is sometimes argued that technological advancements may ultimately contribute to the decline of traditional cultures, given their perceived incompatibility. While I agree that modern devices and online entertainment can diminish people’s engagement in cultural activities, I believe that technology can also play an important role in preserving and promoting traditions.

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The number of people who are fat and overweight are much higher than previous generations. What are the reasons? What can be done to solve this problem?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is some countries have problems due to the deprivation of resources and abilities. Now people are beginning to realise that wealthy nations should support poorer countries , providing them with quality educational and medical centres. Personally, i tend to think that if one republic has the ability to help others , then it is necessary to themsupport.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to leam how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

According to me both is important encouraging children to take part in organised group activities in their free time as well as it's even important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. My view point is discussed blow.

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somepeople said that it is duty of government of developing countries to provide their citizens basic amenities such as education and health. give your opinion.

Some individuals opine that education and physical health should be free of cost in developing nations. The cost of these facilities should be provided by the government of the counties. An explanation of this statement along with my opinion, is going to discuss in upcoming paragraphs.

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In poor families, teenagers may have to work part-time as well as study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this for these teenagers.

Working part-time while studying has been a topic of heated debate in recent years. Although this appears advantageous in a number of ways for teenagers, especially for those in poor families, there are some major flaws needed to be considered.

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Some believe that students should begin learning a language very early in school while others think these subjects should be taught later. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that importance of having a language nowadays. While it is a commonly held belief that, schools have to focus on children's language skills. There is also an argument that skills can be improved by adults themselves once they need it. this essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Every one of us should become a vegeterian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this era, most people prefer to be non-vegetarian as they find it tasty. However, I agree with the statement that people should become vegetarian as medical issues are rising due to the consumption of meat but, I will mention some of the benefits of being non-vegetarian.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In several countries, some people say governments should spent large amount of money to prepare new railway tracks for fast types of trains between cities, others think it is better to focus on developing the existing public transport. I personally agree with the first view because trains can create many advantages for society.

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Many people play sports when they are young but the stop doing physical exercise when they become adults. Why do so many adults stop doing physical exercise? what can be done about this problem?

People are losing interest in physical outdoor games these days ,especially grown-ups. There is an ongoing argument in society that individuals tend to play only during childhood and start avoiding it as they grow. In this essay, I will discuss the main reasons behind this and will suggest some solutions.

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