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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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some people believe that studing at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after graduating from high school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

After graduating from high school, people have different views to get the best job, between studying at university or college and getting a job straight. I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believes that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both of the view points and give your own opinion.

In today's world, it is believed by some part of the population that it is crucial for a successful career to finish academy or college while others claim that it is more beneficial to get a job straight after school.From my perspective, deciding to work is beneficial in the field of business, whereas completing university coursework is the most useful in an academic career.

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Students should spend time working before begining their university studies To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that pupils should not begin their high-education without take time to labor. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement and will demonstrate some compelling reasons why during the essay.

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Student should spend time working before begining their University studies

There is an argument that student be allowed to have a job to gain experience before they go to the university. I absolutely agree with this view and will explan the reasons about my opinion in this esssay.

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student should spend time working before beginning their unniversity studies.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people said that going to university's door is the best way to a successful career.In my opinion, I totally disagree.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Many cultures persistently encourage their children with the belief that they can conquer any aspiration with unwavering determination and relentless hard work. Such an ethos undoubtedly has its merits, as it fuels ambition and resilience; however, it can also potentially lead to negative repercussions. This essay will elucidate both the positive and negative implications of instilling this philosophy in young minds.

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Nowadays,there is moral requirement for the prosperous countries to assist the needy countries develop in terms of providing food for population,education and medical treatment.

Nowadays,there is a moral requirement for the prosperous countries to assist the needy countries develop in terms of providing food for population,education and medical treatment. Personally, I totally agree with this statement and I briefly explain it along with examples.

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Many people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places such as libraries, shops and public transport. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over the fact that it is advisable to prohibit cell phones in public places namely libraries, shops and public transport. In my opinion, I would contend that I do not have a consensus with this statement.

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Technology is being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly common for teachers to use technology in their classes. Some people believe that it is a positive trend, while others think that it will bring negative effects. In fact, I side with those who think that technology brings positive impacts.

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There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is commonly argued that more workers and students work and study from home because computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Personally, I can neither completely agree nor disagree with this statement for a variety of reasons.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

In several countries, people are becoming overweight, and also the quality of their healthiness and fitness is declining due to obesity and unhealthy lifestyles that occur due to many causes. This essay will be explained in more detail about the causes and solutions to these problems.

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Obesity is an increasing public health problem in some parts of the world. Explain some possible reasons for this problem,and suggest some solutions.

Obesity is an alarmingly increasing global health issue. The fundamental cause of obesity is an imbalance of calories consumed and colories expanded. I think drastic public policies such as levying a significant tax on unhealthy food and subsidizing healthy food are crucial strategies to prevent obesity.

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Some people feel that governments should take a large portion of people's salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A large part of the population holds the view that the government should invest a large portion of people's earnings in public services, but others might not agree with this view. I will be discussing both views and state my opinion on this matter.

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In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I strongly agree that as children are becoming overweight and unhealthy the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. The below information describes to what extent I with agree this.

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Some people think that all university stsudents should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are different views about what university students should study whether they should choose a subject based on their preferences or study a subject that will benefit them in the future, such as science and technology. While there are some advantages for college students studying science and technology, I believe that students have a right to choose subjects they like.

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Some people think that sports prepare children for work life while others think they do not. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

One of the social concerns today relates to preparing sports for children's work life. While it is widely believed that physical exercises train them to get ready for future work life, others believe it is not that important for training physical strength for children. In my opinion, doing exercises will bring them a lot of advantages in their life.

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Public celebrations( such as national days, festivals, etc) are held in most countries. Theses are often quite expensive and some people say that governments should spend money on more useful things Do you agree or disagree?

In most countries, public ceremonies ( such as national days, festivalsm etc.) are celebrated, respectively. Organizing these activities requires significant expenses, as well as, a group of people believes that money spent for festivity should be spend on other kinds of things which are more profitable. Personally, I disagree with it and this essay will discuss my point of view in the following paragraphs, including soe examples from my own experience.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this ? is this a postive or a negetive development ?

In some continents, numerous people are paying a lot to a personal fitness coach, rather than developing a habit to be sporty or attending some classes for exercise. This is because a personalised training creates pressure on people to follow that routine strictly, while it might create a negative effect as some sports can decline their popularity and personal trainers can not be affordable.

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Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but others believe it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A school of thought holds that the authorities should spend money on society's health facilities whereas the alternative stance asserts that it is not the government's function. In this essay, I will discuss two sides of this problem and describe my own opinion.

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Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since digital technology is now replacing they are function to what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is certainly true that nowadays internet is serving the purpose of public library since anyone can read any page or content of any book sitting at home. Though some people think that preserving libraries where mass people can go and study has become meaningless, what I strongly believe is no matter how fast and convenient electronic technology has become, we must look after and save public libraries.

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