IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 543

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that children should do what their parents tell them to do; others think children must learn to think for themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that children must follow the advices of their parents, while other suggest that children should decide by themselves. In my opinion, I agree with the point of view that children need to listen to their parents because they are not able yet to choose the right decision.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balance diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Compared with the past, lifestyle such as daily food has dramatically changed all over the world which means people eat fast food as much as before. In my opinion, the benefits of having a balanced diet are more important than exercise to have a healthy life.

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Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this era,opinions have been divided as to whether reading book is the most effective method for youngsters to gain observation,compared to watching Tv or playing computer games.I completely agree with this phenomenon and this essay dealt with the matter in detail to come to a logical conclusion.

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These days, an increasing number of people in many cities know little about their neighbors and do not have a sense of community. What do you think are the causes and what solutions can you suggest?

The role of communication in this present world is inescapable.Several folks are motivated by their family members to live in urban areas in their daily life.This essay will discuss both causes and solutions prior to reaching a personal conclusion and I believe that mankind should have relations with their neighbours because they have a full souls to live.

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The widespread use of the internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems connected with using the web? What solutions can you suggest?

The internet has revolutionized the modern world,Also a myriad of folk believes that the internet has brought many problems which are detrimental to society. On the one ,hand we can find some solutions to the problem.

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In Britain ,when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them .sometimes the government has to pay for this care. who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

The statement is that in Britain,when someone gets old she often goes to live in a home with other old folks where there are nurses to look after them.

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Some people say that school education is not useful and the essence of study can be acquired at home. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

For a long time there has been a debate that school education is not as effective as compared to home tutoring and that study can be attained at home. I do not agree with this that study can be acquired at home. In the following ,paragraphs I will discuss how sending children to school is important and how it outweighs home tutoring.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Students learn many subjects in school and some of them are really important subjects such as History or Science and Technology. Many people agree that History is one of the most necessary school subjects while others think that Science and Technology are more needed currently. In my opinion, Science and technology are the most important subjects in school if we estimate the global situation that changes rapidly.

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With growing populations in cities, more and more people live in homes with little or no outdoor space. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, there are massive developments for new residences in my city where their homes are sold for simply just having a tiny backyard or no space at all. Admittedly, this phenomenon is rather positive in terms of building a simple life.

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Today, many mothers take care of the family and do not go to work. Some people believe that the government should pay them their salaries. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, most of females after their maternity period leave their careers to nurture their children and families. It is often argued that they should be paid remuneration by the government. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement and this essay below shall explain the reasons for my disagreement.

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Most countries allow 18-year olds to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow at this age. But others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

Thanks to cars people can be at the wished place in a few minutes. And to have your own car you must have a driver’s license. But getting it is more difficult than driving any transport. Every country has difficult laws to get that important document. If in one country you can get it from eighteen years old, in another one you can drive from twenty-five.

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Most societies value being competitive. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative quality?

A large amount of people value being competitive. Indeed, competitiveness has both advantages and also disadvantages. I believe this character can bring positive impacts into someone’s life but it all depends on the true objectives of having such a competitive character.

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As major cities around the world are growing , So are their problems

The world is a better place to live however, it is evolving day by day and the norms just keep changing. Although, big cities around the world are flourishing their frustrations are also growing. In this essay, I will discuss the problems of these young people living there and how can these be solved.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Countries which have better economy often help poor countries by financial support; however, it may not solve the oringin problems. Besides, instead of giving money to the poor countries, I believe there are still many ways to help and I will express my opinion in this eassy.

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Government should focus thier spending in public service rather than on arts such as music and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In this contemporary epoch,it was always debatable topic of administrative should distinct their expand in benevolences.A majority of society favour that government should have to spend on sculpture such as music and painting.However,I partially with this mention phenomenan and i will discuss with logical conclusion in the upcoming paragraph.

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Young people who commit crimes should be treated the same as adults by the authorities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently the issue has been brought into focus is young people should be treated the same punishments as adults by the government. Personally, I would argue that the authorities do not have to treat teenagers like adults. In this essay I will discuss about why the government should not do that.

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An increase in consumer goods has damaged our natural environment. Why is this the case? What are the solutions?

The contemporary world experiences a hike in consumption of all products and it has impacted the environment in a negative manner.there are causes for this development such as increased population making high demand on consumer items which deliberately cause environmental pollution and improper displacement of waste by both individuals and the community.I believe these issues could be handled by the Government ,by introducing a new lawsuit as well as by understanding the dramatic outcome of harming nature ,as individuals .

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More and more families are choosing fast food over home-cooked meals. What are the reasons for this and how can they be addressed?

In the modern world, some people prefer to eat outside, because it cooks fast and costs cheaper while cooking at home. Most families may work whole day and do not have enough time, or they think that ordering delivery fast food is easier while cooking at home and shopping for groceries for cooking. This is mainly because of the lack of free time. There are number of solutions that should be implemented to deal with cooking at home.

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Many countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era there is heated argument over the issue that nowadays number of nations suffering an economic downturn.A majority of society is favour that it is better for each country to focus on its own difficulties rather than giving hand each other.I disaccord this mentioned phenomenon.However,I will discuss with logical conclusion in upcoming paragraph.

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In country where there is a high unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who will have no hop of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some places where there is a high percentage of unemployment, people receive support from the government. However, there are limitations in applying for this support, causing many problems for residents. Based on the facts in some countries, there are many difficulties, and I partially agree that some people cannot receive support due to their education. In this essay, I will express my thoughts on the subject.

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