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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that it is important to spend money on family celebrations such as weddings and birthdays, while others think this is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Commemorating significant events is a highly trended global phenomenon. Whilst many people believe that spending a fortune on family events is advantageous, others state it is a burn of money. This essay discusses both views and I personally believe celebrations should be done in a meaningful way.

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many people work long hours , leaving very little time for leisure activities . does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages ?

Numerous humans around the world work a long time of their lives , so they allocate less time to entertain themselves . in this essay , some pros and cons of this matter will be explained and a logical conclusion will be proposed .

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Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree?

As society progresses by the years, it leans towards empowering the youth with the goal of creating strong capable young adults. Teenagers have more control over their lives than what they used to in many aspects, one of which is their education. When it comes to study-time and leisure-time, though, it is agreed that students should not manage their own schedule entirely. This statement can easily be supported by analysing how the maturity level of a teenager affects their priorities, and also how the lack of experience could become an obstacle.

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In many cities,problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common.Some governments are now encouraging businesses and individuals to move of cities to rural areas.Do advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantage.

Problem regarding overpopulation are widespread more common in many cities.Therefore,businesses and individuals are suggested by the government to move to the outskirt of the city.The advantages of this do not outweight the disadvantage,in which businesses will experience a large decline in customer number and individuals will be lack of chance to access advanced technology.

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some people think that it is a waste of time for high school student to study literature such as novel or poems.To what extent ddo yu agree or disagree

A section of society asserted that learning literature such novels and poems by high school-goers it's waste of time.because they believed students also can learn literature after graduation l. I completely disagree with this statement owin of, they can enhance their vocabulary and mushroom their theory to learn literature.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs for example, working for charity, improving neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most parents thoughtout the world normally focus on their children’s education. It is undeniable that knowledge is the most important thing for young people. However, there are additional factors in other dimensions that contribute to the development of their offspring into good people. This essay will explain why I think that schools should have unpaid community service as part of their programs.

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Many people think that zoos are not good enough for animals and they should be improved or animals must go to natural life. Do you agree or disagree?

Well, I guess most people believe that for animals the best environment is natural life instead of zoos , moreover there are no good opportunities for them in cages.

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Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible. To what extent do you agree with this?

Tariffs, a particular type of taxes implied on imported consumables, help to keep local farmers of a nation protected from world-level competition, therefore, I find it required in today's society. However, thoseareas should be exempted from its execution where starvation is a major issue.

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The number of children that read for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years. What are the reasons for this? How can we encourage children to read more?

Technological advancement has acquired the life of children and it leads to a decrease the reading time. In this essay, I'm going to evaluate the reasons for the dropped in reading among children in recent years while identifying the solutions to encourage more reading.

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Now a days, many families move overseas for job opportunities. Some people think this is beneficial for the children of these families, while others think children will find it difficult. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In today's present era, Everyone is chasing name, fame and money and to fulfil it more and more families are migrating to the other country. According to some groups of ,people their children face many problems settling in the other country, while other say it is very good for them. We shall discuss both views in the following paragraphs.

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Air transport is increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to other countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say this is good but other believe the use of air transport for this purpose is not justified. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Producers tend to deliver products by using air transport due to their higher demand. Some people believe that this transportation method of fruits and vegetables can not be justified whilst others do not. In this essay, I will discuss both views in detail and provide my own opinion at the final.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Nowadays environmental issues cannot be ignored across the globe. Some people argue that the extinction of certain species of vegetation and animal creatures is currently the top priority of environmental matter. However, according to other Individuals, there are more significant problems that are related to the environment. Although dying out of particular species of flora and fauna is detrimental to society as they can be used as natural resources for ecotourism, I believe that other problems, especially the rise in sea level, are more important because these affairs directly hurt our daily life and immediate actions can prevent them from becoming worse.

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In today's very competitive world, a worker has to possess multiple skills to succeed. Among the skills that a worker should possess, which skill do you think is more important, social skills or good qualifications? Explain the reason and provide specific examples to support your answer.

In this progressive world, one has to be multitalented to be successful. These days not only an educational qualifications but other efficiencies are also foremost to be competent in the workplace. My inclination is, eventually some jobs require social traits whilst others require good academics depending on criteria or the nature of the job.

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Some people believe that studying abroad is important because it expands a person’s knowledge and understanding of the world. Others feel that it is better to study at home because that is the best way to prepare for a career in the student’s own country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There appear to be different views on whether it is good for individuals to study in other countries. On the one hand, people argue that those who study abroad get useful information about the world, while on the other hand, others suppose that it is significant to prepare for working in home country.

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Gone are the days when children dreamed of becoming doctors and nurses – today’s children want to become YouTubers or vloggers. According to a survey of 1,000 children aged six to 17, more than three quarters of them say they’d consider a career in online videos. It is dangerous for kids to aspire to become a YouTube sensation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has become highly trending among youngsters to build their full-time career in vlogging, youtube streaming channels, and other social media platforms as an influencer. Nowadays, when you question a child about their dream jobs, their answers are more inclined towards social media sectors, because of which most people believe that it is risky for the future of the upcoming generation. In this essay, I am going to discuss why I partially agree with this idea and I am also going to present reasons for the other aspects too.

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Some people say that parents have the most significant influence in a child's development. However, other say that things like television or friends have the must important influence on them. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

It is often argued that parents are playing an integral role in minor development. Few people think that technology and peer group has a more impact on their growth. This essay will intend to analyse both views along with my perspective.

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In your opinion, what incentives could be offered that would persuade more people to embrace electric cars?

Nowadays, society already has a wide range of environmental problems such as global warming and deforestation. Pollution is one of the most severe issues people face nowadays, and vehicles make a huge impact on its increasing. Electric cars can become one of the solutions to this problem.

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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fastfood. It is, therefore, necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree?

In some countries, That citizen is suffering from the ailment due to consumption many fast foods is increasing day by day, which is concerned. But I firmly disagree with which governments require to boost a tax on this kind of food.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Due to the personality differences between people, some individuals choose the monotonous lifestyle, performing some tasks repeatedly thus they are unwilling to change while others are of adventurous nature and always likes change in their lives. The essay will discuss both sides of view before I present my own opinion.

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefit

Many people and children in Particular, love playing video games on their computer. Playing games can be benefitial to think in a complex way. In this essay, i will explain why i believe that there are many disadvantages that can outweight the benefits.

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