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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic.

In many regions of the world, some people believe this is undoubtedly advantageous for reducing crime by setting criminal's life in prison. While others concur that this punishment needs to be alternated by many solutions.

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The marketing strategies used by two companies

Cell phones have become a very important device for people. Apple and Samsung have a lot of fans, so these brands have a high level of competition with each other. But people choose their technology based on what meets their needs. In this essay we will talk about marketing strategies, specifications, customers, and prices.

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Many people are using credit cards or loans to run up huge personal debts that they may be unable to repay. It should therefore be made more difficult for individuals to borrow large amounts of money.

It is true that many people suffer from financial problems due to being unable to clear a huge amount of loans in recent years. Some people think that banks should tighten the process for large loan approvals. Personally, I disagree with this view.

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawback

Study is essential as a human being. As a person, of course most of them wanted to go to the best colleges or universities to gain more knowledge. As the result, most of student choose to study overseas. This essay will elaborate what are the advantages and disadvantages regarding study abroad in the following paragraph.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Whether the advertising is strongly useful to persuade us to buy things or just a normal picture that isn't very important to us. I will present both sides of this issue and conclude by giving my own point of view.

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world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?

It is undeniable that population is booming around the globe from the last few decades. Being so, people are buying more and more vehicles for various needs which create unnecessary traffic in the city.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, people living in industrial Era start to think seriously about the environment and the issues which start to appear related to besides how to solve and manage them. People argue on the most environmental problem facing our planet recently. Most of them believes it is the loss of certain types of plants and animal, while others see there is more important issues to handle. This essay will argue both views and reveals how loss of these species is entirely important to solve.

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many people spoil natural beauties like sea ,beaches ,mountains and lakes .do people responsible for that ?what should be done to stop people to spoil natural beauty ?give the reasons and examples for your answer.

Humans have done many bad things without thinking. But the worst thing we did is, exploiting nature. In this essay I am going to share my views about the exploitation of nature.

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments can tackle these problems.

There is an ongoing discussion regarding the community's faces in the urban range. Many folks are complaining about the government's management of urbanization. There are various reasons that the public faces but the main problem is traffic and fewer public amenities for children. Both the reason elaborates on in this essay.

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Some people think that men and women have differnt qualities, therefore ,some certain jobs are suitabel for men and some jobs are suitable for women.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some people argue that stereotypes of women and men are different ,consequently, some jobs are offered based on gender.I completly disagree with this point of view as gender cannot represent people's qualities and its not the main factor to get a job.

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Some people think that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines or other products intended for human use. Others, however, criticize this as animal cruelty. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable fact that the animals cruelty raise in this modern era, because of performing numerous test on the creatures. But the inp of animals was always debatable and has now become more controversial. many people claim that it is used of animals is not consderab and others believe that the new medicine and product such as vaccine, capsule are vital for the illness. The impact of carnal appears to be more rational. In my, opinion i strongly claim that it has terrible effects on the wild animals. In this essay we will further elaborate on the position and negative effects of this trend and This will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Advancement in technology has undergone a drastic change in the education system. Computers are widely used as a source of learning in the field of education. it is considered by Some people are that the computers used for schooling are positive behavior, the other portion of citizens says that it has negative impacts. In my point of view, I believe computers have distributed several successes in humanity's education as its role cannot be replaced. That said, we cannot ignore the negative impacts that it brings along. In this essay, I will discuss both the views and I will provide mu opinion with a logical conclusion.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to the social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer including any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

We live in an era where technology gives us the opportunity to see a person’s life and social condition. A person’s worth is presently valued based on social dignity and material possession rather than the old-fashioned for instance honour, affection, and other things. Despite the truth seeming true, I am disagreeing with the statement because the outdated value and good behaviour still matter and are urgent to be seen.

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People aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it. what are the causes of this problem? How to overcome it?

It is common these days that people struggle to balance their work and daily lives. Although some are lucky enough to get their lives together, other people still find it hard. This essay will discuss the causes and suggest a possible solution.

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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

Some people argue that company just give a chance of a specific prestigious position for a man at workplace rather than women. While I agree that companies also have to give the same opportunity for women to work at high-level positions in a workplace, I do not agree that company should provide a certain percentage of these positions to women.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

Society believes online broadcast will replace traditional publishing in the future since readers are more interested in modern publications. I completely agree with that statement because old publishings are more expensive. Moreover, preparing papers to print books requires cutting trees which can be harmful to the environment.

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car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. how to do you think this statement is? what measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars.

There has been an incline in ownership of car which has become a necessity for people ,especially the ones living in metropolitan cities, thus there has been a surge in four wheelers that has been owned by the population leading to traffic jams in most of the countries. I personally agree with this statement which would further be explained in the proceeding sections.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Many people believe that experts such as doctors, and engineers needed to serve their country where they got an education, while others argue that they have the choice of where they want to work. Each problem also includes advantages and disadvantages. From my point of view, I completely agree that specialists should have an opportunity to work in another region.

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The recent popularity of online shopping will result in the end of high street shop. To what extent what do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the trend of shopping through e-commerce platforms is getting popular and it is argued that it will ultimately end high-street shops. In my personal perspective, though online purchasing is gaining popularity, the significance of physical shopping malls will still remain the same and the essay below discusses the views.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

It is true that house holds garbage is not recycled adequately. While some individuals argued that imposing strict roles is the main method to enhance recycling, I strongly disagree with limited lows until people would access to right infrastructure fairly.

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