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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that the population in many countries nowadays is ageing at an astounding pace, which imposes financial burdens on national healthcare systems. Therefore, some suggest that individuals should be responsible for their medical costs. Yet by considering equal access to the healthcare system for inhabitants from different backgrounds, I disagree with this idea.

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Employers should give their employees 4-week holidays each year so that they can do their job better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is suggested that companies ought to allow their workers to have a month of annual leave. I completely agree with this opinion and believe that offering these kinds of vacations benefit both the organization and individuals concerned.

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Should government make decisions about people’s lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions?

People have contrasting views, whether the authority must decide citizen’s plan or individual chooses their way of life in a particular country. This idea is debating nowadays. In my opinion, however, I think, if the former selects some of the important ideas of living and let the latter decide the rest of their lives. This essay explores abouut each party's responcibilities behind this matter.

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Some schools require their students to wear uniforms because they believe it helps the students focus on their schoolwork rather than on their clothes. Discuss this view and give your own opinion

Different schools believe that wearing uniforms are important for the development of many students helped there have focused on their activities. My opinion is that wearing a uniform contributes for learned for students, also, avoids bullying between them, helping generates a sense of equality and assisting in the safety and indication of the students.

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Some people believe that studying online is more effective than studying on campus while others disagree. Discuss both views.

With cutting-edge technology, nowadays many people prefer studying online more than studying on campus. But there are some who still believe in-person interactive sessions are much better than online-based sessions. This essay will discuss both the views in following paragraphs.

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Nowadays many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games. What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?

It is true that these days the majority of people have easy access to computers and children, unfortunately, prefer playing computer games rather than going out and playing with their peers. Since we live in a century of rapid technological development, we should be grateful and thankful actually to its opportunities, but still, there are some drawbacks to this.

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It is argued that the most important thing for governments invest in is education, and it is a popular opinion from people because the benefits such as short as a long time are very relevant.

It is argued that the most important thing for governments invest in is education, and it is a popular opinion from people because the benefits such as short as a long time are very relevant. This essay agrees that increase in spending public resources on the student population can make grow up the countries in several aspects.

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Nowadays people believe that governments should invest tax payers money in healthcare, others believe that money should be use in other areas. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a controversial debate that some people believed that the community should spend tax revenue in medical areas, while others argue that this income must be utilized in other places. the impending essay will discuss my view and also elaborate on both sides with a logical conclusion.

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Some people think that success is the best measure of intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion on that? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt that success in life has a different meaning among people. The question is, is the intelligence best way to determine success in life? In this essay, I am going to discuss this question and draw my conclusion.

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Friends have more impact on the academic performance of students than their teachers do. Do you agree or disagree? Use details and examples to support your opinion.

Education is a crucial part of a child's life and not only parents and teachers have an influence on the studies, but also friends play major part in child's education. Acedemic performance is considered to be the key to success and parents always want their children to perform the best in their studies. In my opinion, friends have more influence on the academics of students than teachers. I feel this way because of certain reasons which will be described in the following essay.

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In many countries, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do you think the advantages outweighs the disadvantages.

Nowadays, due to its comforts, many countries prefer plastic products instead of other options. Even food and drink companies like to pack their products in plastic. I believe that the advantages such as, easy transportation and economic benefits, will not outweigh the disadvantages.

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Most of the people in society enjoy watching crime movies and criminal TV programs. Why do you think people have more interest to watch them? What is the impact on society due to this?

Nowadays, crime movies are very popular among people and movies in the crime genre are best-selling. This essay attempts to explain the reason we enjoy watching movies about criminals, murders, and solving mysteries and the effects of it on society.

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An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree or disagree?

It is thought that individuals and society should focus on the future rather than the nowadays, but I disagree with this statement. In this essay, I will explain why we should pay more attention to the current day rather than the future.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondarySome school. What extent do you agree or disagree

According to a few specialists, it adds an advantage for kids if they begin learning a foreign language in the initial stage of their schooling rather than later and I completely agree with this statement as it is believed that children retain the knowledge which is taught at a younger age as compared to their later years. Also, international language helps in shaping a pupil's perspective about other cultures, habits and way of speaking which assist their interaction skills right from the beginning.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would be little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

To stay fit people need to play sports. While some people claim that building sports facilities is an effective way to improve public health, Others believe that this would not be effective and that other ways are needed. This essay agrees that more ways should be taken to upgrade public health besides sports.

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by some people that the number of male and female students being accepted by universities should be equal in all subjects.I completely agree with this idea.

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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Many students are working along their studies. It is true that the given trend affects students in variety of ways – one of which is difficulties with pressure due to a lack of time to study while having a full-time or part-time job. Firstly, I will dive into the reasons behind that fact and secondly, I will present my perspective on how to overcome the problems related to that issue.

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Doctors recommend that older people should excersice regularly.However many of them do not exercise enough. What are the causes? What can be done to encourage them to exercise?

General health is one of the most important topics that elder people should care about. Many doctors around the world advice elders to practice physical exercises to improve their health. Some times choronic diseases like blood pressure or diabetes prevent people from that. The governments should play an important role in raising awareness of elder people to encourage them to do exercise.

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It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specIt is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

There is a continuous debate whether or not it is good for children to spend their initial years in rural areas as opposed to in centre of metropolitan areas. I believe, from two key aspects, that they should grow up outside of busy big cities; namely, they can enjoy close and warm human relationships and also they can acquire significant benefits from the good natural environments and can grow healthier.

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Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the internet should be restricted for educational purposes, since it has a large number of negative effects on students. The majority of people may assert that the use of the net during studying in fact should be reduced, whereas many others claim that this kind of resource is vital for qualitative learning. I tend to believe that cyberspace is quite crucial in order to achieve a piece of higher knowledge and should not be restricted.

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