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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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''Prevention is better than cure''. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree.

Recently, there have been arguments that care of body is better than cure due to getting illness is too expensive thus, it is better to spend money for a protecting body. I totally agree with this statement because of two reasons.

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University education should be free for all students. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is often argued that authorities must support universities to provide education free of cost for everyone, which would be led to a better literacy rate in the country. However, few folks believe that it would decrease the quality of teaching. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both notions followed by a conclusion with my opine.

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Some people say that we do not need printed paper newspapers. Do you agree or disagree?

Printed newspapers had been the main way of transmission of information in the recent past. But, some people say that we do not need printed newspapers anymore. I strongly agree with the above view and I am going to explain why in this essay.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.

The aging population is known as the global dominant demographic trend in the advanced economy. This tendency creates detrimental impacts on society and individuals, some possible solutions could be adopted to tackle the problem.

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Some people believe that the development of artificial intelligence will make human labors obsolete, others think that work performed by humans will always be important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions

It is a common belief that by developing artificial intelligence, humans are superseded by robots in the workplace. However, I support the idea that people will always play an essential role in many occupations. This is because machines will never be able to perform at the same level as humans do in most jobs.

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Some people believe that parents should devote more time to helping kids with school work, others think that they should allocate more time to play sports with their kids. Discuss the both these views and give your own opinion

It is a common belief that parents should invest their time in assisting kids with their school work. However, I support the idea that spending more time on playing sports with children is more important.

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Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly discussed whether international companies are supposed to increase income to leaders compared to other employees. This essay agrees that paying leaders more is rational. Firstly, this essay will discuss that top managers are more experience in people management. Secondly, they spend more resources on education.

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The increasing of private car lead to high level of pollution. Do you agree with this statement and what can be done to solve this problem?

With improving technology has made cars affordable for many people to buy in recent decades. Thus, many people possess their own cars, and this situation can give rise to go up air pollution. I strongly agree with this statement and I will explain some reasons about this problem, as well as a few ideas to solve it in the forthcoming passages.

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Some people think that it is important to be physically strong to be successful in sport, however others think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different views about the significance of physical or mental strength in sport. It is thought that in order to succeed in sport we have to maintain physical strength, while others believe that mental health is more essential. I believe that a combination and maintenance of these two health is the best option to succeed in sport sphere.

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Some people think that it is important to be physically strong to be successful in sport, however others think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different views about the significance of physical or mental strength in sport. It is thought that in order to succeed in sports we have to maintain physical strength, while others believe that mental health is more essential. I believe that a combination and maintenance of two health is the best option to succeed in the sport sphere.

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Individual greed and selfishness has been the basis of the modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in.

Since nowadays’ society is based on individual self-interest and ambition, some people argue that people should put more importance on conventional ideals that value family and the neighborhood to make society a better place. However, I disagree with this idea because first, it is an inevitable natural process that traditional values fade into the mists of history. Secondly, even though people restore old-fashioned concepts that respect family and local society, there is no guarantee that the world will be a greater place to live.

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some claim that modern technology is giving people more free time, other thnik it makes them abusers

In this contemporary epoch, technological gadgets and their impact on adults' life have become a controversial argument. Whilst some proponents emphasise that internet has revolutionized the daily tasks, some opponents and I adopt a diverse stance. In this essay, both views along with my contention will be further explained.

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Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from TV as well as from international sporting competitions. To what extent do you agree?Find essays with the same topic

In this modern era, there are plenty kind of sports involving violence. Some individuals believe that violent sports should be prohibited from TV including globalization sporting competitions while others disagree with this idea and think that it should be publicized sports to society. This essay will be examined the reasons to support this idea in detail.

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some claim that modern technology is giving people free time, while others think it is making them abusers

In this contemporary epoch, technological gadgets and its impact on adults' life have become a controversial argument. Whilst some proponent emphasise that internet has revolutionized the daily tasks, some opponents and I adopt adiverse stance. In this essay, both views along with my contection will be further explained.

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There are different types of music in the world today. Why do we need Music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

There are various genres of sounds over the globe. The world is becoming a small village due to the area of globalization. Old-era music has more importance than the now days tunes due to its importance of connecting the youth with their roots. In this , essay I will discuss my point of view with some examples.

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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with statement?

People have divergent views towards whether both schools and parents have responsibility to shoulder the problem that nowadays majority of children have an unhealthy lifestyle.Some people firmly believe that schools and parents shouldn’t since there are still any other factors which will lead to unhealthy lifestyles formed like the rapid development of internet.However，some other people who hold the same opinions with me deeply believe that they certainly should.

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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays,with large amount of entertainment device being produced and more different kinds of food being imported and exported,people,especially children,are more likely to develop unhealthy lifestyle since it is very easy for them to be enticed by junk food and computer games.While admitting that parents should take responsibility for solving the problem and the number of children who have unhealthy lifestyle is large,I do not share the opinion that schools should also be responsible for resolving this problem.

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Nowadays more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent years, there has been a new trend toward virtual communications and most people prefer to interfere with each other face-to-faceface. As far as I am concerned this is a negative development due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In certain cultures, if children pursue their aspiration by making enough hard efforts, they can obtain anything they want to have. In this essay, the advantages and disadvantages are discussed, coming to a conclusion at the end.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be case ? Do you think this is a positive or negative situtaion?

For students, newspaper reading is essential and is usually helpful. One of the most beneficial habits is reading the newspaper. To know the world's current affairs, one should read the newspaper daily. We are getting information from a reliable source to know about the latest events. We also get to know about the different entertainment industries, sports, politics, economics, and much more.

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