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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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it is important for people to take risk, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. do you think the advantage of taking risks outweights the disadvantages?

In modern society, it is a common belief that it can get a quality of life when some people encounter a crisis in their everyday lives. I contend that it has a positive effect on individuals owing to a number of reasons that will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.

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The growth of online shopping will one day to all shops in town and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

The number of online shopping is increasing dramatically, so according to some, it would cause to close regular stores in towns or cities. In my opinion, I totally disagree because there are some reasons that traditional stores retain their business.

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With the rapid advancement of communication technology: smart phones, tablets and other mobile devices, some people believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The evolution of technology makes communication easier by incorporating multiple devices and applications rather than by old-fashioned dial phones only. Many people think that this is a negative development and I disagree with this notion because the modern way of communication is affordable, accessible and make life easier.

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The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

These days, one of the most important humanity problems is overcrowding of the planet which is caused by a range of factors. I definitely agree with that statement and I think that issue may be really dangerous for people’s future in this essay I will set out to explain why.

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Reporting of crimes and other kinds of violent news on television and in newspapers can have adverse consquences. This kind of information should be restricted from being shown in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

News agencies in recent times have started using loud language with very disturbing contents broadcasted over the air and using uncensored photos in the print media. This creates a negative perception in viewers’ mind and changes his way of thinking. I strongly advocate to stop such kind of communications and the wrong publicity done by these agencies.

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

In the modern world only, theoretical education will not help to grow, kids need to be taught games which will increase their interest and they can develop a liking towards them. In this essay I will discuss with examples of

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It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays , people prefer having well-designed and luxurious clothes instead of a lot of low-quality and out-of-shape clothes.Generally , I think it depends on people's lifestyle and their preferences.In my opinion , clothes play an important role in your appearance and your image in society so I would rather have some brand dress.

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In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Because of competition in today's world, a lot of parents prefer to go for work. Some people agree with the statement as they think that children will get more benefits from the extra money earned while others believe kids don't get parental support. This essay will discuss that although children get a feeling of loneliness, l believe it's necessary for them as they will get a good future.

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The most important decision that young people have to follow is what career to choose. do you agree or disagree?

It may be true that the most crucial issue for teenagers is selecting their career path. This essay will examine this controversial topic and then give supporting ideas to the disagreement of this statement.

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University education should be free for all students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought that fees for university education should be paid by the government instead of by students. I totally disagree with this idea, as I believe that tuition fees will be a burden on government coffers, which are used to develop countries.

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Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at school. To what extant do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently, a vast number of education policymakers brainstorm that foreign student exchange programs could be beneficial to educatees at modern schools. As this stands to be a debate based on some adverse effects, I believe that the upside outweighs the downside since it creates great opportunities for exposure and cultural exchange.

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University education should be free for all students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought that fees for university education should be paid by the government instead of students. I totally disagree with this idea, as I believe that tuition fees will be a burden on government coffers, which are used to develop countries.

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Some peop/e think it is no longer necessary /'or children fo go fo school because ffiey can do all their learning on//ne. Others gei/ev’e learning in schools is essential. Discuss both views and give yot/r opinion.

Nowadays, people indeed have conflicting views about the place to learn for children. Some people believe that their offspring can learn all lessons from learning online. Others, however, think school is the best place for learning. From my perspective, I totally agree with the latter view.

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Some peop/e think it is no longer necessary /'or children fo go fo school because ffiey can do all their learning on//ne. Others gei/ev’e learning in schools is essential. Discuss both views and give yot/r opinion.

People hold conflicting views about children not needing to go to school anymore because they could learn everything online . While a number of people believe that studying in school is foremost, I would agree that children should learn in school.

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In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits.

In recent decades, there has been considerable debate about whether or not individual achievement is greater in egalitarian or more hierarchical societies. In my opinion, despite the benefits of egalitarianism as a political principle, it should not be pursued as a social ideal.

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Unemployment is a serious issue throughout the world. A number of changes need to be made to reduce the problem. What should a government do to solve this issue?

It is unquestionable that the growing population of the world and the advance in sciences and technologies is making unemployment one of the pressing problems in the most countries. This essay will suggest ways of reducing the unemployment rates.

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Directors of organizations receive higher salaries than the ordinary worker, some people think it is necessary while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Directors of organizations get more compensation and money for their work. It is supported by some people as it is the result of their hard work, while some people consider it unfair as it harms the equality of the organization. In my opinion, it is obviously necessary for directors to get paid more than ordinary workers.

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both side individuals and companies to shopping online ?

Many people prefer buy items rather online than do it by offline shops. In this essay, I am going to discuss about pros and cons both customers and sellers.

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In many countries, people wear more western-style clothes (suits and jeans) than their traditional clothes. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or negative development?

In the present day, people prefer western- style of clothing (suits and jeans) over their traditional clothes. This essay will outline its causes and according to my viewpoint its positive side outweigh the negative side.

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The best way to solve the traffic congestion in the city is to provide free public transport for 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Increase in traffic becomes a grave concern for everyone these days. Some people often think that government need to maximise free public transport regardless of days and time. I completely agree with this viewpoint. This essay will underline some supporting statements with this point of view.

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