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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As the world is developing rapidly people are getting busier in their daily routines and in many ,countries people are working more than the given hours. As a ,result they have time to do household work, and sharing the chores is one of the logical methods to overcome the hassle at the home. I completely agree with the aforementioned statement and the following essay will elaborate on my idea further.

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Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

The rate at which students have so many obstacles in their academic performance has become a global concern. This essay will be discussing both the reason and the solution to this problem.

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public libraries provide a large collection of books to read. Some people argue that they should also provide other hi-tech facilities like computer,internet,CDs,DVDs. do u agree or disagree with the statement?

Technology plays a major role in our life as it has taken control over our daily life activities. It is generally argued, that libraries ought to provide other means of information besides books such as computers, and CD players. I strongly agree with the latter statement on the topic as it has a wide variety of benefits. This essay will discuss the topic and will give a valid conclusion in the end.

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There has been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvement in people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The remarkable enhancement in the lives of men and women has been said to be as a result of great improvement in technology. Personally, I strongly agree with this statement because of its positive impact on medicine, also, the invention of household and mobile devices has helped in making our lives easier.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A notion had emerged in contemporary society, which is compulsive education should be taken to the young who are below 18 years old. Although it could not be suitable for all children, I am still convinced by the opinion, and the given view will be discussed in this essay.

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We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree.

Today’s world cannot be imagined without the use of technology because of the internet has come up with an obvious benefits but the safety and access limit of data covered up its avail. I completely agree with the opinion and this essay will show that people cannot control their privacy and that misusing information is dangerous.

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Some people believe that educational qualifications will always bring success in life. Other people say that educational qualifications do not necessarily bring success. Discuss both views and give your opinion

As educated people are highly respected in our society. But One group of people argues that high academic achievement equals more success while others disagree.in this 6essay I will discuss both sides of this.

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Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, team activities are being encouraged throughout the world as it is being seen that it can be a good approach to make people friendly and cooperative. In further paragraphs, I would shed my light on the advantages and positive outcomes of group work.

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Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished?What measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

It is true that loads of offenders will come back to prisons after be released to the society. There are many reasons to resulting this situation. I firmly believe that if these following steps could be measured, the problem would be solved to some extent.

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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country's police force or military force. such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this contampory era, women are considered as equal to men. Here the debate is about some group of people think that every women have a right to work in defence sector as equal to men ; however, others are considered that women are not suitable for it. I side with both statements and it will be discuss in ensuing paragraphs.

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Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the words, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem? Support your opinion with reason and examples from your own knowledge and experience?

In the last few decades, there has been a significant rise in deforestration across the globe. It, thus, becomes necessary for individuals to tackle multiple problems. Furthermore, I will explain why it has caused a plethora of issues in the recent past.

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games Outweigh the benefits?

In the recent computer era, the number of people who play online games has been increasing rapidly. In accordance with the trend, there has been continous debate whether or not the phenomenon is beneficial for men and women who spend time on it or, on the contrary, it is harmful for them. As such, I would like to list some expamples of advantages and disadvantages of playing online games and finally state my opinion that the drawbacks account more than the benefits.

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In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should recieve adult punishment. To what extent do you agree?

It is true that the crime rate is increasing among teenagers. While the government is trying to prevent such offense, many people believe that youth should be punished like adults. I strongly agree with the idea that teenagers must be punished for their offense. I will support this view with argument in the following paragraphs.

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Some believe that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today's world, parents are facing dilemma currently. There is much debate over whether money should be spent on better computers or teachers for education. Although, latest model computers assistant to increase success rate, ı strongly believe that teachers are more significant than the other thing such as computer beacuse almost every pupil takes their teachers as a role-model.

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Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some would argue that there should be severe regulations about noise pollution, while others say that they must be allowed to make the noise they desired. While some poeple believe they have the right to make strong sounds as much as they want, I believe there should be stronger regulations to monitor the amount of noise people are producing.

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Psychological illnesses may not be as obvious as physical disabilities or illnesses, nevertheless they are just as disabling in their own way. Society, however, is more accepting of those with physical than psychological illness or disabilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In recent times, psychological illnesses have shown exponential growth in our society. They may not be directly visible, but are as damaging as any other disablement. Over a period of time, people with physical disabilities have still found acceptance, however, this is not the case with someone who have psychological disabilities. This essay will establish that people with mental illness are being discriminated at professional and personal front.

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Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

The world is changing drastically with the development of infrastructure and technology, so developing and developed countries expand their construction building in vast areas. However, the construction is done in cities creating houses according to the flats method and building houses to spread around the land. I believe, building houses in taller buildings is the best solution for various factors such as environmental preservation and economic growth. The following essay will explain the aforementioned views with examples.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and wether they are married or single some people say that this information may be relavant and useful.Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your openion.

Some human resource hiring personnel inquire about personal data of job seekers and believe that this information is worth and useful for selections and others disagree for the same. I believe that asking personal information will have both positive and negative impacts on the selection process and this should only be useful and relavant for highly demanded jobs. My openion on this matter is elaborated below.

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Some people argue that the government should spend money only on medical care and education but not on theaters or sports stadiums. Do you agree or disagree?

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over whether the government should use the national budget for the schooling and medical system. While some claim that it is necessary for citizens to do so, the opposite makes a statement that the authorities also should invest money in the recreational industry.

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In the future, it may be scientifically possible for people to live for 150 years. This could be good for individuals but it may have negative consequences for society. What are the benefits and risks of people living to 150

Nowadays, people become older and older. Maybe in the future with the use of modern technology is it even possible to become 150 years old. Of course did can be very interesting for a singular person to become that old. With everyone becoming older that will be having an impact on the world.

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