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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extend d you agree or disagree?

There is some argument that it is more beneficial for children to read tales or novels than to watch TV or play computer games. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this idea because reading stories has more remarkable merits for boys and girls than watching TV or playing electronic games.

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Some claim that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Everything has two sides and competition between men and women is not an exception. In the ,past it seemed that most people besides men in everything but today many people criticize it .

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many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar,which causes many health problems. sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

Everything has two sides and food and beverages containing a large amount of sugar are not exceptions. In the past, it seemed that you could feel happy while having them but as some negative facts about them have been appeared, some people realized that they were not heathy and then claimed that the price of this kind of food and drink goods should be higher in order to discourage people to consume less

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Mobile phones have brought both benefits and drawbacks to phone users. Discuss both sides and state your opinion.

With the development of technology and now we have more types of phones and incers the people who use this phones because the life is doelopment ,but with this improve we have some benefits and drawback and we will draw your attention about some citzens dide the reason is mobile phone.

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The use of corporal punishment (physical hitting students) in schools is in decline, yet it should be used to improve behavior. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The use of physical punishments like canning and flogging in institutions is declining .However,a section of society concord that it should be used to discipline students.I totally agree with this view because it will deter pupils from disobeying rules and regulations.The essay will explain in detail the reasons for my stance as well as examples in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companies. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

In recent times, small trade companies have become backward compared to large industries, it is a devastating issue to self business owners, large multinational companies play a crucial part of its society, it has advantages and disadvantages, in this essay, I will discuss both sides.

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Some people feel that young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others, however, believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that the young generation should follow the traditional social standard while others argue that they should have their own liberty to behave as they desire. In my opinion, children shoul be free acient notions so they can show their own ative and behaviour. The essay will analyse follow the tradional society will create a good environment for people and free also bring many benefit before clarify the conclusion.

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In the past, when students did a , they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In the last few years, students had more opportunities to attend foreign universities .On the contrary, students in the past were admitted to universities in their hometowns for higher education. In my opinion, the positives outshine the drawbacks of studying abroad. In this essay, I am going to elaborate on the upsides of studying in a foreign country.

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks

Nowadays, more students choose to study abroad than ever before. There are benefits in studying in a foreign country; however, there are some negative factors as well.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, we are witness to the burst of the world’s population; consequently, the major population of many countries is consisted of youngsters rather than elder ones. I reckon that the advantages of this happening will outweigh its disadvantages because of many reasons which I am going to elucidate two of them in the following paragraphs.

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Some people consider that the education which is come from school is more important than learning in the family. Other people think the opposite way. Discuss both sides and give examples.

Some people think that the education which comes from schooling is more important than the education which comes from family. Both of them have negative and positive sides and these will be discussed below.

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More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

Before as now, emigration from the countryside to the city continues apace worldwide as people seek a better standard of living. However, life in the big city is often hard on new immigrants. There are several reasons for this as well as solutions for governments to handle them.

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While international tourism offers many advantages a lot of places, it brings about several disastrous effects on both people and environment there. Do the advantages of international touriIsm outweigh the disadvantages?

with the development of traffic technology, passenger' convenience and effectively shorten time have gradually been enhanced so that the rate of international tourism has been increasing at just a few years. there are both merits and demerits to tourism. However, I think that the demerits are more huge than the merits.

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Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too clostly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree?

In the past few years, people developed medicine very well. Now is much easier to get high quality treatment. Since prevention is much better and cheaper than treating, a lot of people agree that spending money on researches and cure is unnecessary and it would be better to invest money in preventative measures. I strongly agree with this view, because people can avoid dangerous diseases.

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Some people believe that school children should be made to wear a uniform. Others feel that children should be free to choose their own clothes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The opinion that school children should be made to wear a uniform is based on the belief school administrators hold, who see wearing a uniform as an important way for students to build an identity sense in the school. Furthermore, wearing the uniform can improve students' obedience to school disciplines, which will reduce the cost of management in school. All of these thoughts may be supported by a psychological theory that already is applied in the armies of every country. Thus they may require the students to wear uniforms in school.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract more local people to these museums?

Many museums and historical sites have become an attraction to a large number of tourists, however, they fail to increase the number of local visitors. This essay will analyze some main reasons for this as well as measures to encourage more local people to exhibit.

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Some people feel that young people face more pressures today than in previous generations. Others think that they have a much easier life than their parents did. To what extent do you agree? Give reasons and examples to support your points.

Nowadays, It is true that the social growth is very fast. Young people have to face more stress than their older generation. While there are might be some reasons to support this existence. I am of the opinion that their parents have a much difficulte life than their children.

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Some people believe that school children should be made to wear a uniform. Others feel that children should be free to choose their own clothes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been a controversy about whether students should wear a uniform at school. Some people think children should be free to choose their own clothes; some have the opposite opinions. I think the advantages of wearing a uniform outweigh its disadvantages.

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Some people think that male leaders always lead us to violence and conflict, but female leaders are better than male leaders to gives the better governed and more peaceful society. Do you agree or disagree?

fighting and conflict are the most topics to discuss among a number of people that have been created by boss men more than boss women, and they allege females are more suitable choices to manage the organization and reach peace and hope, however, I disagree with this statement that presumes men always run their own work atmosphere to more conflict and struggle, consequently, I will bring a number of pieces of evidence to clarify my opinion.

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Some people say that now is the beat time in history to be living what us your opinion about this. What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

There is a school of thought that now is the most perfect time in ages to be alive. I completely agree with this opinion and this essay will discuss why and further examines another golden age that existed in the 60s.

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