IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 835

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some employers offer their employees subsidised memebership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Consider the arguments from both aspects of this possible debate, and reach a conclusion.

There is no iota of doubt about the fact that employers want to improve their employee's productivity. To achieve that goal some gym owners provide subsidies to their workers, Few people are in favour of it, while others oppose it. this essay will shed light on its pros and cons of it.

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Nowadays, the population density of adolescents is much higher than the other age groups, especially the older people. This essay will first discuss about the advantages and, secondly, state some disadvantages of having less experienced people in a country.

Recently, the population density of adolescents is much higher than the other age groups, especially the elder people. This essay will first discuss about the advantages and, secondly, state some drawbacks of having less experienced people in a country.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken?

In some parts of the world, while people are gaining more weight, their physical health is exacerbating. This sensation can be comprised of two focal factors: what they eat, and how often they exercise. Measures can be made, as long as governments and individual dedicatedly play their part.

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All natural resources are limited. It is therefore important that all companies make products that can be used for many years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, natural resources are not only decreasing more and more but also becoming limited due to human beings activivites. Therefore, some people believe that if people want to improve this phenomenom, it is necessary for all companies manufacture products that consumers can use for a long period. From my perspective, I am not convinced by this idea and this essay will point out some reasons for my opinions.

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Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government , while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many folk believe that pivotal positions in the government should not be filled by youngsters, while others assume that it is a good movement for putting young people on these duties. I would discuss both statements and my personal point of view.

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In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

With the advancements in technology,security and artificial intelligence, few nations have been successful in alleviating the number of serious crimes. Citizens, however, still feel unsafe than earlier. There are plenty of reasons to cite. Down here, I will elaborate on those and suggest a few measures that could be taken to solve it.

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SOme people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. they say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it legal requirement. to what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Many people think that governments have to make it obligatory for the people to recycle their waste, because there are not enough amount of waste being recycled. However, I tend to disagree completely with their point of view of making it obligatory for several reasons.

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26.In many workplaces, online communication is now more common than face-to-face meetings. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Communicating by using technology is enjoying an upsurge of popularity among young individuals in recent years. This situation has surely brought about benefits and drawbacks and these are discussed in this essay.

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ome people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

The world is bedeviled by monstrous environmental hazards such as pollution. There are conflicting views about whether increasing tax on various industries would be an effective remedy to reduce pollution or other alternative measures can be taken to address this problem. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the idea of increasing tax, as there would be consequences of this idea and also, there appear to be more constructive solutions. In the forthcoming paragraphs I will expound my thoughts in details.

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Some people feel that social media encourages antisocial behaviour, such as bullying and cheating, while others disagree that this is the case. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, part of individuals believes that such as bullying and cheating type of antisocial behaviour stimulate by the social media, while on this point some others do not agree. However, I think social platform have many advantages rather than disadvantages and this essay will analyse the reason for both views in the following paragraphs with a reasonable conclusion.

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

In our modern society, online shopping is one of the most popular topics that is argued by people. Despite the number of offline buying is still high, the trend of online shopping is rising dramatically. There are a lot of positives of shopping through the marketplace, most importantly it convenient both for individuals and companies. While, the biggest drawback of buying what they need online is the delay in delivery and consumers’ complaints.

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Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

Many today argue that the environment can be best protected by heavily taxing various industries. In my opinion, though this has worked in certain cases, taxation is not as effective as more positive reforms.

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In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Today there are so many advanced technologies available for farming . with that technology you can easily achieve the expected harvest . but still there is so many people who do not have anything to eat . they are a can be various reasons for that , like poor countries do not have access to them and they do not have enough money to buy them. Anyhow these problems can be sold with some steps. I am going to explain the rest below.

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The best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask drivers to take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a good step and in fact beneficial in order to control the fatal road accidents, which are occurring on a daily basis, due to the reckless driving by many truck operators, that is to retake the driving test every year. While this procedure is challenging on practical grounds, I am in strong favor of adopting this approach. This essay will discuss my point of view in detail.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of healt and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the cause of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In several countries, the average weight of individuals is growing and they are not healthy and fit like before. In my opinion, this problem is due to globalistation of refreshments and technology.

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Prison is the best punishment for criminals. How far do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In today's world, there has been more and more emphasis on penalties. But what is the most effective method for dealing with the rising rate of committing offences? Some people believe that prison is the best penalty for offenders. I completely agree with this statement and this essay will support my opinion with examples.

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The benefits of computers in modern society far outweigh the disadvantages. What do you think? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

It is a common belief that using computers were advantages more than disadvantages .I support this opinion because electronic products are an ever-changing world. People can use computers to work or study.Actually,it is a double-edged sword for us.

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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

Characteristics have been gone with us when we are born, so researcher indicates that it has more influence on our personality and development than any experience we may have in life. In my opinion, I think the experiences might be the major influence.

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It is better to learn English from a non-native English speaker in your own country. To what extend do you agree?

In recent decades, English has become a majority language to use in the world. And mostly people learn it from a non-native speaker in their mother country through the educators at the beginning. However, learning English from native speaker is more beneficial compared to non-native speakers.

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It is better to learn English from a non-native English speaker in your own country. To what extend do you agree?

Nowadays, English is widely used to communicate and share information. There are many institutes teaching the language around the world. Studying English with native speakers is often preferable.

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