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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Wealth does not necessarily guarantee happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give your explanation using some relevant examples from your experience.

Mostly, money is a very essential need for human beings, but there is no assurance of joy. Because people are suffering from many other issues where money is not connected. However, people are required funds to have these basic needs such as their own house and food.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphone. Why is the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent days there is an increased rate at which technology is growing in society and in the country at large. Teenagers tend to spend most of their time on the internet. This is of great advantage and it also has some added disadvantages.

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Childhood obesity has become a serious problem in recent years. What are the primary causes of this? What measures should be taken to reduce childhood obesity?

A growing number of children are overweighted these days. It is a concerning issues because it has an adverse effect on their health conditions. This essay will consider the main causes of obesity problems among children,before proposing two possible solutions.

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Should the government pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university?

Governmental duties such as free university education are controversial issues. Some say that it is one of the duties of all governments to spend money on it because it is a priority for the society and some say that free education should only be provided for beginners to high school students and the money for university education should be devoted to other critical issues such as healthcare system. In this, the essay I am going to discuss both sides' opinions and give my own.

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Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or not?

There is a tremendously controversial perspective heating up a debate that the rules and laws are the basis of each modern societies and the societies could not function properly if individuals were free to do as they wished. From my point of view, I fully consider myself a supporter of this opinion.

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Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or not?

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over whether principles and regulations are major factors operating the society. Since this thinking is valid to some extent, I would contend myself as an advocate of it.

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With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globaly, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.

It is undoubtedly true that a distance between family members has brought prominent problems to mankind's life in recent decades. What is significant is the fact that divorce rates and family breakdowns have increased significantly. The following essay tends to explore two primary causes and solutions (such as) (regarding these issues such as) social media and being too busy as well as listening to an expert relationship counsellor.

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Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or not?

There is a tremendously controversial perspective over the fact that society will not function properly providing people can do anything freely without legislation as well as set of rules. In my opinion, i consider myself an advocate of this statement.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinio

An immensely vexed curiosity in the contemporary epoch today pertains to whether education institutions are based on gender or not. In this discourse, I am going to expound on the stated question from both points of view and then interpret why I reckon that co-education proves to be advantageous in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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In many countries, the crime level is increasing, and crimes are becoming more violent. What is the reason and what can be done about it?

the rate of offence is emerging rapidly severe in numerous nations and countries. Although criminals threaten myriad societies and species, their devastating consequences can be combated triumphantly. This discourse appraises some of the troubles caused by high crime rates on the entire planet and nominates some viable remedies to curb the grave concerns.

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Some people argue that the government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and should make sure they have access to the Internet. They believe this is the best way of using public money to reduce the problem of unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that every unemployed individual should receive a mobile phone from the government including a connection to the internet. I completely agree with the statement because the usage of technology is constantly on the rise including emerging search engines for a career or scheduling interviews via audio-video conferencing which may provide a variety of opportunities for seeking work.

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Some people think that the best wat to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative wats or reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Capital punishment is one of the main ways of penalty given to crimes . Many people state that it is the perfect way to diminish the crime rate while others suggest there are so many other ways too to decrease the crime rate. This essay discusses both ends. In my opinion, should go for other better ways to reduce illegal activities because there occurs a violation of human rightsas well as no any ethical value other than witness is valued there.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

Nowadays, many people agree that education has a significant impact on the next generation. However, how do we define the teaching responsibility that should be belonged to parents or schools? Let us illustrate my perspectives in the below paragraphs.

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In some cultures, children’s are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Mostly, many parents often used to convince their children by saying that, if they start working hard and keep focusing, they can achieve goals in their life. This message can be an advantage for the children in motivating themselves and sometimes negative impact, such as over-confidence.

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It is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing or medical research. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the past, animals are the most important and one and only resources for humans. We get food from them and make clothes with their fur and feather. Moreover, some animals contain a certain amount of substance of medicine. But nowadays, there is no longer to use animals for that, humans find new ways. This essay will discuss both sides.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Learning is a significant element for children's progress. Many argue, home schooling is a better option, while others believe that attending a school helps a child to do well. From my perspective, going to an academic institution is beneficial. In this essay, we will look at both sides of the arguments and I will shed some light on my viewpoint.

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Many famous sports players advertise sports products. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Since the development of the television program, it has been mainstream that sports brands marketed their products through sports players’ endorsements. While it seems to be a great chance for athletes to have more income, I assume that the drawbacks are far more than the advantages.

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New parents should attend parenting courses to ensure the growth of their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When people start a family, they may not be experienced and need to attend some parenting classes to deal with their children correctly. In my opinion, these courses are beneficial for new parents to up bring their children.

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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion.

It's a smooth transformation phase towards the digital world, especially in the last decade, we have seen some enormous changes. In upcoming years, people will hardly buy newspapers, as any and everything is available on the internet, with just a click away. I don't agree with the statement completely as there are people who still love to read news from the real newspapers rather than from mobile phones and tablets.

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Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Over the last two or three decades, sports are being fascinated by the young people. It is commonly believed that competition in sports posses several advantages on the studies while others think that those are being effected adversely. However, in my point of view, students must have to participate in sports and discussed in further.

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