IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 889

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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People aim to achieve balance between work and other activities of their lives,but few are able to do this. Suggest problems in balancing and some solution for over- coming such problems.

A lot of individuals intend to have an equilibrium between work and other recreational activities in their lives but a little proportion of people are able to do this. However, one of the difficulties associated with this, is the inability of humans to prioritize their activities and the solution is to make a list for things to be done on a daily basis.

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Some people believe that the experience children have before they go to school will have greatest effect on their life. Others argue that experience gained when they are teenager have a bigger influence. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Certain group of individuals consider that the encounter that youngsters have during preschool age have a significant impact on their upcoming years. However, others think that their experience after school have substantial influence on them. I believe that, what children learn during the adolescence stage is what really matters because this will either make or mar their later life.

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Some think that it is more important for children to engage in outdoor activities instead of playing video games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this tech-savvy modern world, children are addicted to video games rather than outdoor exercises or playing sports. Some parents claim that physical activities should be made mandatory for children instead of video games. Although some people do not agree with this, I completely support their viewpoint as physical activities improve health and cognitive development.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In earlier days, there are choices available in terms of food items. However, as times are changing so many changes can be seen in almost every field. Nowadays, it is common that humans are consuming items which contain high sugar levels, which in turn causes myriad issues related to health. It is believed by some people that these products should be made expensive to encourage the nation to consume less sugar whilst others oppose it. This essay will shed light on both views in the upcoming paragraphs before stating any opinion.

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Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. What causes obesity and how can it be solved

Nowadays, obesity has become a serious and extensively existed problem in numerous countries, especially in some developed nations, such as America or United of Kingdom. In this essay, the causes of obesity and approuches used to handle with this problem would be discussed.

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6. Why are some people who leave school early more successful compared with those who complete their studies. Provide reasons why they are more successful and what are the requirements for success?

In the modern world, within the current 21st-century scholars tends to finish from their learning institution much younger than in the past years. This new development helps to make them more successful than those that finished school at an older life. They as lots of important in leaving school young sure as early promotion, long working year's, improves smartness, acknowledgement by others both at workplaces and in the society. This essay will expose the contributing factors to early academic graduation and must of all actions that can make the young pupils achieve success after graduating from the academic institution.

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In some countries owning a home rather renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Some people believe that it is better to own the place they live instead of renting it. In the following essay, I will discuss the reasons for this, which, I believe, is a constructive development because it can help promote sense of stability and enhance competitiveness of the society.

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

Nowadays, the study can easily take a person out of their home country. This can be good because people can explore new cultures now more than ever. At the same time, world travellers may become disconnected from their own home countries. This essay will explore two of the benefits which have resulted from these changes and propose examples.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

It is true that people in different parts of the world told their children that there is nothing impossible to achieve if they give their best when they work or study. It offten seems like enthusiasm or intriguing to work hard for young people but it comes along with some drawbacks and benefits and I will describe them and give some reasons for them in this essay.

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Some people feel that equality between the genders has already been achieved while others feel there is considerable progress to be made. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Gender equality is a battle that started long ago.Some believe that it has been achieved as there is no field which lacks representation from both sex and the modern world gives utmost freedom to women.But some believe we have not reached the desired goal and need more effort to achieve it.This is true with regard to the sickening gender division still practiced in various developing countries.

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Do you think businesses should hire employees who will spend their entire lives working for the same company? Do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary era, there is a heated argument over the issue that organizations ought to appoint workers who would spend their whole lives working for the same firm. A lion's share of society favors it, however the rest averse to it. The following paragraphs would elucidate my personal perspective.

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In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles would be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Technology advancements will lead vehicles to be automatically driven in the next generation, and everyone onboard will be passengers. Although there are substantiated arguments on both sides, I believe this is a positive movement where the merits outweigh the drawbacks.

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Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agAll children had different actions which may lead to them to pleased or wrong one differs them reprimanded.

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In many developed countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water quality from both Industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this.

It is (an) undeniable fact that air and water are been polluted from industrial activities mainly in undeveloping nations. Relocating those sectors to (the) rural areas and using robotics is(are) the principal ways of curtailing this menance. This essay wil expatiate further.

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Some people believe that women and men possess different traits, making them unsuitable for certain jobs. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?

In today's world,most people argue that selecting jobs only have depended on gender. However, other people consider the opposite idea. In my point of view, I totally disagree with this opinion for the following reasons.

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Some people believe that every human can create art. Other people think that art can only be created by people with special talents. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is irrefutable that art is an integral part of the modern world. It is often argued that whether all people create a work of art or it requires special abilities. I am of the opinion that art needs special talents. To clarify, both points of view should be elucidated.

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In many developed countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both Industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?

Nowadays, the decline in air and water quality in urbanized countries is alarming due to the advancement in technology and activities carried out by companies. There are plethora of measure by which this can be regulated, by posing levy on these firms, the use of solar energy and provision of laws by the government.

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In many developed countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both Industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this

Nowadays, the decline in air and water quality in urbanized countries is alarming due to the advancement in technology and activities carried out by companies. This can be regulated by posing levy on these firms, the use of solar energy and provision of laws by the government.

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in this modern world, average life expectancy is increasing. what problems will this cause for individuals and society? suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.

In this modern epoch, the average life expectation of an individual has increased because of the latest development. This article will discuss the increasing number of retired and the ageing population as problems then describe extending retirement age standard and strengthening the healthcare sector as solutions.

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Many people try to balance work and other parts of their life. However, this is very difficult to do. What are the problems associated with this? What is the best way to achieve a better balance?

A considerable number of people are increasingly concerned with individual happiness and work-life balance. This essay will discuss extra working hours and suffering from mental health as problems and also describe raising salaries by enterprises and extending holiday by companies as solutions.

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