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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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An increasing number of large shopping areas,mall, and department stores are leading to decline of smaller corner shops,what advantages and disadvantages in shopping in large shopping centers rather than smaller, more traditional shops.

Nowadays, the increase in mega mall has led to a decrease in the number of street market . However, there are pros and cons to patronise supermarkets instead of procuring items from traditional stores. In this essay , I will discuss some if the reasons why shopping in shopping mall is so popular and and also the drawbacks.

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Governments should spend tax money on public libraries rather than public transportation improvements. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Tax collected from the public is fundamental such that it should be utilized well by the executive to facilitate better living standard of the community.Many folks be of the opinion that the state should utilize levy stipend on citizen libraries rather than improving local buses and trains.In my opinion,i disagree with this assertion and i will elaborate more in the paragraphs.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some experts believe that starting learning another language at primary level is better than at secondary level. I think the downside of this outweighs the upside because young pupils may have a great workload as a result.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Nowadays, in many ,countries there is an increasing number of people struggling to find a job after their graduation. This essay will examine the cause of this problem and my opinion will be given.

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Some people think environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, think that those problems cannot be solved unless individuals take some actions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are controversial ideas heating up a debate over who should be responsible for environment protection. While some claim that it’s a macro issue that can not be solved by individuals, the opposite makes a notion that to deal with this problem, the contribution of individual actions plays an important role. However, I think that protecting the earth is the responsibility of both governments and individuals.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

High levels of carbohydrates are the main causes of many health problems, which are often contained in good and drink products, especially manufactured ones. There is an idea suggesting that the prices of sugary products should be increased as a way to deter the public from consuming much sugar. However, from my perspective, I disagree with this statement for many reasons and I have other effective solutions for this issue.

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It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A group of people assert that pupils should be taught history predominantly about their place of residence rather than the global one. While it is an interesting proposal and has some merit, my own view is that it would be beneficial for schoolers to acquire the knowledge of the history of our world as well.

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Whilest a number of people assert that increasing in economic is the only solution to eliminate starving and poverty, others believe it will be demise the environment

Whilest a number of people assert that increasing in economic is the only solution to eliminate starving and poverty, others believe it will be demise the environment. There are rational arguments on both side of this continues topic which will be discussed in detail, followed by my own take on the matter.

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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There has been a firm belief that students need theory and practice to utilize their knowledge deeply. Some people think that more exercises need to be included after the class, others sustain their thought that homework should not be assigned to school children.

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Inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still ho hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays there are significant modifications in the methods of agriculture to produce the significant quantity by lowering the input costs. despite that, people around the world still won't get an adequate amount of food. I will discuss the possible points to point-out key problems with relatable examples.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is believed by people in various countries, that a huge proportion of money should be spent on constructing new railway lines, interconnecting cities through means of fast trains. However, another opinion is that, the same amount should be spent on public transportation. I strongly believe that public transportation should be upgraded as it is the most common way of transportation among people.

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Some people think that the best way to broaden young people’s understanding of the world is to encourage them to travel to other countries. do you agree or disagree?

These days people place a premium on expanding their knowledge. Especially about the world around them. Some people think, the best way to broaden your knowledge of the world is to travel, while others argue, that there are other ways. In my view, there are different methods to increase your learning.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In medieval times, people had restricted in making decisions due to their parents or religions. Nowadays, the world has developed which means we have plenty of opportunities to pursue what we want to do to adapt and enjoy our lives. From my perspective, I totally agree with the latter for the following reasons.

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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performace, Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

Every graduate has her own learning methodology and the availability of studying is changed compared to our generations. Assessing the performance of students needs a suitable method to confirm how to get an education and be ready to use their life. It disagrees that pupil performance will be formal examinations to assess their learning. It is difficult to check the student's knowledge based on only exams rather than workshops and practices.

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Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is obvious that violence in playgrounds is more common and common. However, it is crucial that parents should teach students or adolescents not to hit back at bullies. But others teach them to do that they can protect themselves. In my view, both the ways have a bit true.

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Car drivers and cyclists share the same road, and this causes problems for both of them. Why is this case? What are the measures to solve these problems?

Nowadays, cars and bicycles are sharing the same roads which have caused issues for both parties. In this essay, I will bring up why it is safer to keep cars and bikes separated on the roads and how the deadly accidents that keep occurring can stop happening so frequently.

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In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors and there is no sense of community anymore. Discus the causes and suggests measures that might deal with this situation.

In some ,cities there has been an increased number of individuals that do not have any social interactions with their neighbours or with any other person in the area they live in. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons for this and how this could be dealt with in the future.

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solution can you suggest

Schools in different countries around the world suffer from bad teenagers attitudes. From my point of view, I think the main cause for this is their age phases itself, it’s sensitive ,dangers and it's required an endless patience from school administrations and families as well.

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some people believe that the internet has a negative impact on society and people while other believe there are advantages to internet

Today, the world is highly exposed to the internet. Some people say that it has an adverse effect on society and the community. Whereas, others think that it has various benefits. This essay will discuss both sides of this argument.

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Some people believe that schools should teach foreign languages for primary school children. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

A new born child start learning mother tongue after his born this is because her mother introduce him with everything surrounding her. There are split opinions regarding, multiple language learning. Some believe that junior high school is the best to learn overseas language, whereas another group of thinkers support high school is good. However, both have their own pros and cons. Therefore, before commenting on my decision, both the opinion would be discussed.

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