IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 895

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Over the past decades, childhood and adolescent specialists have looked for various ways to enhance children's performance at school. For instance, some experts mention that positive reinforcement is the best method to improve student performance while others mention that punishment is the only way to prevent from doing bad things again. In this essay, I will discuss whether beating or rewarding students can improve grades and overall achievement.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the modern century, people would like to eat such as fast food and cold drink, but it will harmful to our life. several manufacturing industries are producing many products with high sugar content, which is unhealthy for humankind. However, the government should increase the price of sugar. I strongly agree with this statement and I will discuss it in the upcoming paragraph.

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Over sugar consumption is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility of sugar intake. Discuss both the views and give your opinion?

It is commonly believed that excessive use of sugar is really harmful to our health and there are many arguments about who is responsible for preventing over sugar consumption. Many assume that governments ought to impose some regulations whereas others think that it's individual's duty to solve this problem. This essay will discuss both the views.

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Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, technology plays an important role to share an information with other. It is obvious that there is more chance that famous actors and celebrities can express their opinions on public occasions they have nothing to do with. In my opinion, I believe it is a negative impact to society and supporting reasons will be discussed in this passage.

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People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is being expounded that aged buildings should be demolished and replaced by new buildings. I also agree with this opinion. In this essay, I will discuss my opinion and views regarding the importance of the old buildings.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reason for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people are of view that it is uncanny to have a pre determined supperanutaion age for eveyone and few employees deserve a golden handshake and recieve pension at an earlier age. I strongly agree with this notion as certain jobs required physical wellbeing and also long term disassociation with family. In the upcoming essay strongs points related to my opnion will be discussed along with nature of workers who can get rewards from this.

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Some people think traditional games are better than modern games in helping children develop their abilities. To what extent do you agree?

It is argued, that some the individuals reckon that conventional games are more effective rather than today's games in order to cultivating a child's development. I firmly agree with the proposed statement, that classical games are more action-based that help to develop their knowledge and are more enjoyed in life than the modern ones.

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We have a mixture of people from different cultures and ethnic groups in a country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

These days every country provides extensive support for diversified culture as many people across the globe migrating to other nations better lifestyle.Individuals from variety of cummunities from different locations bring multiple cultures and traditions. Although some citizens oppose such mixture, In my opinion, it provides opportunity to explore many cultures and share knowledge.

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Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this ? what other time in history would be interesting to live in?

Some individuals say that in order to stay in history like an important person, now is the best time to do it. In my opinion, human beings have a plenty of opportunity for being well-known. In this essay, I am going to discuss a question what would be interesting to live in other history time.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some pople believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

Nowadays, new buildings are a necessary thing due to the fact that the population grows but, the proper place for the building is in the village. Some individuals would like to protect the rural area than build there. In my opinion that I agree with this statement cause the protection is more significant for our environment.

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The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the past, farmers engaged in husbandry in certain agricultural places to produce the daily necessities for every human being. Nowadays, more and more farmers emigrate to urban areas to get a better value of life. In this essay, l am going to explain how to settle such a problem.

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Many people feel that media coverage has become increasingly biased today. Why is this? What can be done to fix this problem?

The media house is a significant source of information. However, many individuals argue that they share opinions as per their own preferences. In this essay, we will explore the reasons behind this and find out ways to overcome this challenge.

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Many people feel that media coverage has become increasingly biased today. Why is this? What can be done to fix this problem?

Media house is a significant source of information. However, many individuals argue that they share opinions as per their own preferences. In this essay, we will explore reasons behind this and find out ways to overcome this challenge.

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with the coming of digital education, some people believe that trend of traditional studies may fall down. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is commonly believed that, trending of learning from online education, offline education might be drop down. In my opinion, traditional education never be matched with the digital education. However, I shall discuss both these notions along with a rational conclusion.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do shopping. Is it a positive or negative development?

It is pretty common that small scale businesses are now shutdown as the customers prefer to visit super stores for their purchasing. Although there are certain positives of this development yet I believe that it is a detrimental trend for local traders and cultures.

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Some people think parents should supervise their children’s activities closely, while others believe children should have more freedom. Discuss both sides of the arguments and give your opinion.

Doing the parenting is one of the hardest jobs ever. In this ,world few people say that they should have to keep eyes on their children whilst other think that they should provide more independency to their heir and I do not believe in the previous statement also I will discuss both the points and explain with relevant examples.

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Tanning salons are used by a wide number of people including teenagers. Medical experts claim that it causes serious diseases, while others believe that it is a personal decision of people to attend tanning salons.

One of the most controversial issues nowadays is that a vast amount of people tend to apply artificial tan even though of awareness of its significant impact on skin, however, opponents claim that each person is responsible for the decisions he or she makes.

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Governments should spend tax money on public libraries rather than public transportation improvements. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The tax collected from the public is fundamental such that it should be utilized well by the executive to facilitate better living standards of the community.Many folks are of the opinion that the state should utilize a levy stipend on citizen libraries rather than improving local buses and trains.In my opinion,i disagree with this assertion and i will elaborate more in the paragraphs.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age for everybody regardless is unfair.They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at easy age.Do you agree or disagree. Which type of workers do you think should be benefit for early retirement. Give reason and example.

The age of retirement has been one of a controversial topic in society for several decades. A number of people consider that it might be better for the community to reduce the age that workers retire,in contrast, others have a different thought that it is inequitable for some who might have the ability to work even if they age more than the retirement standard.

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.What do you think are cause of this?What solutions can you suggest?

Inappropriate interactions of pupils at school all around the globe have terminated to be a crisis for institutions authorities,which to me, stems from some other issues.However,not only are some probable radices behind that uttered here but a few remedial ideas are mentioned as well.

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