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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people thing that more money should be spend on protecting valuable species ,While others think its is a waste of valuable money.What is your opinion

Capital is an important part of society .Many people do think more money spend on protecting endangered species.However many do think that that money should be spent on something more important.Therefore, I believe a balance must be between the two.

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Some people say patriotism causes problems and is negative overall. Others feel that it is beneficial for society at large. Do the advantages of patriotism outweigh its disadvantages?

People have different views about patriotism. Some people argue that the love with the countries can bring negative problems. While I partly agree with this argument, I strongly believe that patriotism may create a lot of benefits for the society in general.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

an increasingly advanced, and developed society also leads to problems affecting the environment due to industrial waste, dust from motorbikes, cars, and human waste leading to many environment problems such as climate change, ozone depletion, marine environment pollution, and especially the disappearance of several plants and animals species important to human life. Although I agree it is a serious problem, I still think that our Earth has more than many issues to worry.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the environmental problem is always an important issue in society that many people concern. Some people think that the disappearance of some species of plants and animals is the main cause of environmental problems. In my opinion, I do not agree with this statement. I believe that there are still more urgent issues about the environment.

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International tourism has greatly benefited many places. However, there have been major concerns about its impact on the local environment and inhabitants. Do the negative impacts of international tourism outweigh the benefits?

In the contemporary,advancement in technology has brought enormous effects on multinational tourism.Which is lucrative for many nations around the world.On the other hand, despite its monetary value,tourism has some detrimental consequences on local surroundings and residents.In my perspective,there are more positive impacts of transnational tourism that are elucidated in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages?

The formality to get promoted to the next level in an institution is to clear the examinations or annual tests globally. Apparently, there are more positive benefits than negative effects of exams in the educational area which will be discussed below.

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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amount of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brough up by wealthy parents. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A poority is a major problem around the world. While,It has been observed by many countries that,students who belongs from a poor families they have difficulties to an arrange money for studies.While,some people believe that, the education authorities can release some facilities for them.I agree with a notion to a large extent,my statement will be elaborated further.

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Some People Believe That Reading Stories From A Book Is Better Than Watching TV Or Playing Computer Games For Children. To What Extent Do You Agree Or Disagree?

When it comes to children, it is widely believed by society’s members that reading stories from a book is more beneficial than watching tv or playing computer games. Personally, I do agree with this observation.

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As a part of education, students should spend a period of time spending and living in a different country to learn language and culture. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that students should study and live abroad in order to gain language and cultural experience. I completely disagree with this idea that we should therefore force every student to go abroad for a while.

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

The President makes expenditures on train lines rather than boulevard. From my perspective, this proposition is completely true.

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Some people think governments should spend money in looking for life on other planets, while others think that there are many unsolved problems on earth. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Governments in the world have allocated a significant number of state funds to space exploration in contemporary society. Regarding this, opinions are divided over whether governments should use money on other urgent issues or not. This essay will outline why they support both sides.

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Schools should focus more on the STEM courses and less on the fine arts. Do you agree or disagree?

Education divides mainly into STEM and fine arts. Most people encourage more STEM courses which seem more beneficial. Beneath I will elaborate on focusing more on STEM and why I agree with this statement.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

There is high wage takes a crucial role than job satisfaction in life of some people. In my opinion, in modern life, it is important to devote your life for the job that gives you a sense of fulfillment. Nevertheless, if people concentrate only on making money, neglecting the interests, their emotional health will be hampered.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, fixed punishment is one of the most discussed subject. Some people think there are should be established penalization for every kind of crime. Other people believe that the decision for punishment is related to different situations and other elements, also punishment would be changeable due to evidences and various crime type.

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Some believe that nuclear weapons benefit the world at large. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people around the world strongly believe in the benefits of nuclear weapons. In contrast to their opinions, in my point of view, nuclear weapons are too expensive and too dangerous for people to use. Therefore, I completely disagree that nuclear weapons benefits outweigh the disadvantages.

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These days, people tend to change many jobs during their lifetime. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

In the fast-paced world, people tend to change jobs more than ever to learn new and trending things which they cannot get from their current jobs or sometimes the reasons for switching jobs could be a good position or a better salary. Considering this trend as we can see that there are more advantages when it comes to employees but there are some drawbacks for the companies.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can they research this?

It is natural that before selecting an accommodation people research into the information about a house or building. However, this essay will highlight it why people are interested to find out the history of the house or building. This essay will also highlight that how can they research this.

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Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefits students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There has been a discussion about whether the cost of studying at college and university should be fully borne by students. From my personal perspective, tertiary education benefits both individuals and society as a whole, so I do not feel that its tuition fees should be paid by those receiving the education alone.

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Some people think the technology makes life complex, so we should make life simpler without using the technology. Do you agree or disagree?

It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that due to the development of technology, the public's life is increasingly becoming complicated. Therefore, They believe that individuals should simplify their lives without using cutting-edge technology. However, regarding this, I strongly disagree with this assertion since technology has facilitated to fulfill basic human needs properly.

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional musicnowadays of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere ?

Music is appreciated worldwide. Indeed it is its diverse form which makes it to be enjoyed by all individuals. This esaay will elaborate why we need music and will further explain why traditional music is more important than modern international music.

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