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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend?

The proportion of obesity in children has inclined by one-fifth in the previous decade. This essay will highlight the reasons associated with overweight children and will discuss the possible consequence of it.

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While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem now, others believe that deforestation has a more detrimental effect. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

While it is widely claimed that global warming is the most urgent environmental issue that we should face at the moment, some argue that the over-exploitation of forests has caused a more negative impact on our world. Both points of view and the reason why I believe that deforestation can lead to more severe damage to our environment.

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As major cities around the world are growing, so are their problems. What are these problems for young people living in cities? What are possible solutions for these problems?

Over the past decades, the world has evolved and changed substantially in many ways. Nowadays, overpopulation at major cities has become a problem. There are various forces that drive this trend, and several solutions should be adopted to solve the thorny issues that have arisen. However, this essay will seek to examine the complex issue.

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Some people think that only the government can make significant changes in society, while others think that individuals can have a lot of influence. What is your opinion?

It is thought by some that the authorities are the only responsible pillars for making amendments in a community, while the other group believe that the individuals can generate significant changes in the society. I partially agree with these statements, and in my opinion, a hand in hand contract between the government and the individual is the generation of a peaceful population. Let us discuss these viewpoints in detail in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?

In this contemporary era, due to various human activities deforestation is at its peak, which eventually results in many environmental issues. There are a number of ways to reduce these activities. This essay is an attempt to highlight some viable solutions to cope with environmental problems caused by cutting down the forests.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

In the 20th century, countries become globalisation. People's need to communicate with foreigners become normal compared with decades. Thus, languages are important tool, which makes people to be connected.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is true that most of the authorities in most countries have a goal for improving economy of their countries as it is very important from their perspectives. However, some citizens point out that other various categories are as important as economic progress. From my opinion, I strongly believe with the latter and discuss both of these views in this essay.

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Online shopping is significantly increasing. What effects does this have people, what are demerits and what are the job opportunities.

In recent years, e-commerce became extremely popular among society and creates a lots of job opportunities for people. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of online shopping.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is sometimes argued that information should be shared as much as possible in various areas such as in scientific research, business and the academic world. However, some other people oppose that opinion and think that some information should be kept confidential as they are too important and precious. In my opinion, both views are right in their way and we should decide whether specific information should be announced to let everyone know.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Museums play a vital role in spreading knowledge and educating people. A great number of museums charge people for admission while others are cost-free. From my point of view, in long run introducing the entry fees for museums has many upsides, even though it has a few downsides.

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Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of online courses?

In recent years technology has rapidly evolved and as a result, one can get subject knowledge with a help of online courses.While it has some merits,it has got several demerits also. I will discuss more in detail in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this day and age, music is considered one of the most popular means of entertainment around the world. This leads to the claim that music plays an essential part in connecting people of different backgrounds and generations. In my opinion, I strongly agree that music is a great way of bonding people of dissimilar cultures and ages.

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Museums and art galleries should show local history and culture instead of work from different countries. Discuss both views and give opinion.

Some feel that museums and art galleries ought to primarily focus on showcasing local, rather than international, works. In my opinion, despite the importance of domestic pieces for national cohesion, there is greater value in international items.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views regarding environmental issues that people are facing nowadays whether it is caused by the extinction of certain types of plants and animal species or other factors which are more important. While in some ways it is true that because of human activities, environmental problems arise, I agree with those believing there are other crucial problems to lead environmental changes.

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All education and health care should be funded by the government and free for everyone

In some countries, citizens have the right of getting free education and health care services. This availability will make unbalance the governments’ budgets. However; the limitation on who can afford will deprive the poor population of being healthy and well-educated. I believe authorities can make proper policies of having equal distribution of the access to these services. Therefore; the majority of the world will apply social justice.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important Discuss both sides and give your opinion

A few individuals are of opinion that workout is the foundation to remain healthy whereas, others opine that proper diet plays a major role. This essay will discuss the contrasting views on good health and will present my opinion before conclusion.

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Currently children have less responsibilities than they had in the past some say this is a good change some argue that it had negative effect on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion based on your personal experience.

Children nowadays have fewer responsibilities than they used to have in the past. In the past, children used to support their parents with household activities, do some earnings, and look after their siblings whereas it is not the case these days. While some people argue that this is a positive change, others believe that it affects children negatively. This essay will compare and contrast both of the opinions along with my opinion which is in the favour of latter view will be discussed in a sensible conclusion.

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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems does this cause? What can be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, many youngsters tend to move to urban areas instead of living in rural areas. I believe exploring the causes of this problem can assist in finding suitable solutions to resolve it.

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In the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching a large number of students, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

In this tech-savvy modern world, everything is available online including sessions for academic courses. Some people claim that teaching a large number of students in a classroom should be replaced by online technology; However, I disagree with their point of view as the classroom trainings leads to better future and education as they are interactive, and also provides the human touch.

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Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

It is commonly argued that diligent and consistent work seems to be important for accomplishing goals in their life. On the contrary,a few people assume that owning valuable things and an excellent outlook are prime factors for leading a successful life. This essay describes both the conflicting views along with suitable illustrations.

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