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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It is often argued by some that music can have positive impact on gathering individuals with various ages and cultures.I firmly agree that melody is on of the ways to bring a large number of different people together also there are some ways which can bring them together as well.

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«Some people think that governments should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes. Others argue that this money should be spent for sports facilities for ordinary people. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.»

Many people opine that the governments ought to spend payment on sports facilities for the best sportsmen and sportswomen. But others think that this money should be spent on a simple player. In my opinion, it is normal to have different views, but we should choose one right opinion. I think the ministries should spend this money on ordinary sportsmen or sportswomen, for their development and becoming the top athletes.

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Some people believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Few individuals incline to think that some employees such as mentors and healthcare practitioners ought to paid more vis-a-vis sports athletes as well as celebrities. I, partially agree with this notion. My position is justified further with reasons and examples.

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Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but its disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In a set of countries, tourism has become an income-producing service, but its drawbacks should also be taken into consideration. However, the benefits surpass the disadvantages. I agree with this idea to some extent, and in the upcoming paragraphs, I will express my take on this.

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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. Do you agree?

It is argued that a companies should provide a significant value on women acquiring a higher position because it is usually dominated by men, even though half percent of the staff are females mostly in richer countries. This essay agrees with the statement mentioned above because of equality and some bigger achievement belongs to women.

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In the future there will be a higher proportion of older people than young people in many countries. Is it a positive or negative development?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over the aging population in abundant nations in the upcoming years. Without a shadow of a doubt, this phenomenon has both pros and cons. Nevertheless, I would contend that the benefits of this trend still cannot outweigh its counterparts.

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The global demand for oil and gas is increasing. Some believe that we should therefore encourage the exploitation of remote areas. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

With increasing population, there has been an increasing demand among people for petrol and gas. While some think using rural areas for more production would be a better idea, others opposed it. This essay will state both the advantages and the disadvantages it offers.

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Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education is so important to young people if they are poor or rich, they have to get knowledge. I completely agree that the government should be paid for the education and therefore free to students. In this essay, I will explain to what extent I agree and provide some examples.

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Some people say that playing games can be bad for children. Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whereas some individuals believe that video games are devastating for children's improvement,the opponents are of the notion that it is beneficial for them.Although in my point of view,its positive footprints surpass in multitudes aspects,different sides are uttered here.

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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The majority of people prefer traveling to other countries for pleasure while others claim that it can have a contrary influence on the place traveled to. From my point of view, tourism leads to deteriorating consequences such as contamination of the environment and depletion of resources.

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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Without a doubt, travelling stays one of the most impressive ways of having a pleasure. Besides the pleasure, some people believes that having a journey might be harmful to the countries those welcome tourists, which is nonsense. The essay is going to discuss how the enjoyment taken by tourism and what are the negative sides of that.

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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by fast food. This has a negative impact on families, individuals and societies. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The modern realities of today's world drive many people into the framework. Most of them have to work full-time and allocate very little time for lunch or dinner. Accordingly, in many countries, traditional food has been replaced by fast food, which negatively affects the health of each of them.

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Some countries pay extremely high salaries to people. Some people believe that the country must not do that and make a limit for the salaries. Do you agree or disagree?

In the times of today ,there are high-paid jobs in the market . Some tend to take a standing government should impose upper limits on higher-paid jobs. I completely disagree with the stance and would enunciate vivid reasons for the same in the discourse ahead followed by my opinion. Higher post designation leads to higher pay.

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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial heating a debate over whether the fuel cost hike is the most effective way to tackle this issue. While this statement is valid to some extent, I would contend that it may do more harm than good.

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In many workplaces, online communication is now more common than face-to-face meetings. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Communication has been an important part of society for many decades. Some workplaces are shifting online rather than in office work.There are some advantages regarding the issue at hand; however, some disadvantages also exist.

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Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nature's design and thousands of years of evolution have made women better at childcare than men. Even though this might be a scientific fact, in today's world the work life of women is equally important as their personal life. Therefore, I completely disagree that women should spend more time on raising children and sacrifice their work life. Many solutions can help women balance their work and personal life. A few examples are: Flexible working hours and a Joint family system.

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Some people believe that is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that information should be shared as much as possible with the public in scientific research, business, and the academic world, while others think that there are figures that ought to not be published. This essay agrees with the former, rather than the latter view. Information should be public which has potential damage to massive people, and some data can be not published because of the business competitor.

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Although there are a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era, it is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that despite the fact that translation programs have been developed, people should learn a language. Regarding this, I strongly agree with this assertion since learning a language is beneficial for a long run.

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People who travel to another country to live, work or study for a period of time often suffer badly from homesickness Why is this? What are the best ways to reduce this problem?

It is true that some people can have some bad feelings when they need to go abroad to work, live or study in long time. In this essay, the causes of this phenomenon will be analyzed and the solutions to solve this problem will be provided as well.

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Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that a big metropolis is not an adequate place to live in as the environment of it is harmful to dwellers' health. Regarding this, I strongly agree with this assertion, and there are certain reasons.

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