IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 938

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, However, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Change, whether it be the natural environment, international relations, or rough patch in life, is the law of nature. Some people always regard changes as opportunities in life, while others tend to avoid alterations during their lifetime. The essay will argue that humankind who are yearn for challenges is superior to those who desire to be simple.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people generally believe that advertisements are conducive to providing information of a new arrival to the public; while others consider advertising to be a medium that motivates us to buy something we actually do not need. For me, I agree with the latter that I am going to explain my viewpoints in the following paragraphs.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

For long time, advertising is used as a tool for businesses to sell their products. Today the method of advertising is quite different from the past. However, some people argue that the benefit is still significantly successful to attract buyers. On the other hand, others argue that advertising is not very special thus people tend to ignore it. In my opinion, advertising is still an essential tool to attract buyers through the right media.

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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. What are the advantages for a company having a uniform? Are there any benefits of having a uniform for their staff?

In this contemporary era, a large number of organizations strictly ordered their employees to wear uniforms at all times. This essay will firstly, discuss the benefits of having a particular attire for a group and secondly, its positive effects on workers will be analyzed.

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Many Governments think that the economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many governments believe that economical growth is the most important criteria for a developed country. On the other side, some people think that other modes of progress are as valuable as economic progress. In my opinion , paying attention to all aspects of a country equally sounds more logical.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing…. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Nowadays, the population of many countries is becoming fatter and their health quality and fitness are declining. This essay will first suggest that the biggest problems are caused by cheap fast food and a sedentary lifestyle, and then argue that increasing the price of junk food and opening more gym centers even in the workplace are the most viable solutions.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message.

In this contemporary era, kids are often advised that they are able to attain anything if they work hard. Controversy exists as to whether providing this advice to the children is advantageous or is an impediment to society. Although it might have some adverse ramifications, I believe that the upside of this situation far outweighs the downside since it will motivate adolescents to work intensely in order to achieve their aims în life.

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Some people think that to be successful. you need to get in a university education. whereas others say it is not true. Discuss both ideas and give your opinion

Success is derived by potential integrity of persons immense power of mind. This eassy put forth vivid rationales to discuss both the views and will etch out a reasoned conclusion followed by my opinion. individuals ability would create great success.

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Problem: Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country and give your opinion.

In the modern society, it is widely accepted that people migrate to another country either to work or settle with the family. Whilst, other groups may oppose this new idea. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will examine the benefits and drawbacks to this argument.

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Some people think spending a lot on birthday celebrations and weddings is a waste of money. Others think that it is important to the young people and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, it has been seen as a trend, especially among the youngsters to celebrate different occasions and events like birthday parties and weddings on an extensive scale and with great pomp. ,,However some people have this view that spending a lot of money on these celebrations is merely nothing but a waste of it. While others think it is paramount to society ,especially to the youths. This essay will discuss both views and later give an opinion.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

It has become a trend for students to prefer to have a one year break between high school and tertiary education. The advantages of this are firstly, It is considered as a chance for students to decide what career they will choose, and secondly, working in this year will give them the opportunity to save some money to continue their education. However, the drawbacks of this are losing the interest to continue studying, and may stuck in casual work their whole life.

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Some people believe that money is the major source of happiness in life. do you strongly agree or disagree?

Currently, a large part of population thinks that economic prosperity is the main key point of well-being. In my opinion, this statement is fundamentally wrong, exposing my principal supporting statements nextly. Demanding jobs are directly related to physical health problems and some of the most reach people have depressive conduct.

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Today, many young people spend too much of their free time at shopping malls. This can be considered negative for young people and society generally. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In our society today, most youths spend their leisure time at shopping malls, which is often considered bad for them and society in general. I totally agree with this statement, as there are many negative outcomes as a result of this. Which includes; a decrease in productivity and promotion of laziness amongst the youths.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is said that countries are becoming similar to each other because of the global spread of the same products, which are now available for purchase almost anywhere. I strongly believe that such modern development is largely detrimental to the culture and traditions worldwide.

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Some people believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Currently, It has become essential to learn more than one language. However, the age of beginning learning a new language is negotiable. Some individuals argue that it is better for children to learn a new language in primary school, while others think that it is better to postpone it until the secondary school. Mastering the new language, and the good memory among young children are the advantages of this, while confusion between the original language and the new language, and the overwhelming home tasks are the drawbacks. I will elaborate them more in the next few lines.

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The key to solving environmental problems is for the present generation to sacrifice their convenient way of life for sake of future generations. Do you agree or this disagree with this statement?

These days, confronting environment issues is a individuals moral responsibilities in whole world. There is a common belief that solving environmental problems is in charge of current generation to spend their life to save it for new generation. While, many say that future generation is responsible to protect it. Although there are arguments on both sides, I strongly disagree that present generation sacrifice their convenient life for sake of new generation.

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Some people believe that children are given 100 much free time. They feel har this time should be used to do more school work.How do you think children should spend their free time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Children need free time to do various useful and fun activities but they feel under pressure which makes them feel bored due to their parents who think that significant of the academy. Although they want the best for their offspring, parents don't keep pace with the fast-developing world. they should allow their scion's wishes what they happy.

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Workers often retire at the age of 60 or 65. However, some people say that they should be allowed to continue working as long as they want. What is your opinion on this?

as can be seen, people who are between the ages of 60 and 65 generally obtain to be retired in many countries because they come to their final years. with increasing ,age their health is slowing down so old individuals catch any diseases. but some individuals think that they should continue working if they want to.

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Some people prefer to develop a large social circle, whereas others prefer to have a few close relationships. Discuss the advantages of both. Then state which situation you prefer and why.

Relationships are an important need in our society. Some people have the ability to create many connections whereas others prefer to build strong friendships with one or two people. Both are magnificent options and developing one or another depends on how people interact with others and how they act back with them.

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Some feel that cities shold be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

People think that towns must be constructed in the way for proper functioning than to appear pleasant. I will elaborate this essay by discussing the both sides and why proper functioning is more important than looking pretty.

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