IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 939

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

5.5

band

It is often claimed that electronic devices will soon replace paper books. Do you agree or disagree?

Despite the fact that technology plays a crucial role in the present day. Nevertheless, the majority of normal book will be transformed to the electronic platform. In this essay, I absolutely agree with this statement and will provide samplers from my experience.

5.5

band

A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans. On the other hand, other argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various need, including uses for food and research. What is your opinion?

Some communities around the globe may opine that animals should not be used by people for various purposes since they have the right to live on this planet as humans. On the other hand , another part may oppose this opine by claiming , animals should be used to complete their various needs. Although these living creatures may need some capital requirements of humans , this writer believes that we have to guarantee the protection of these animals in the world .

5.5

band

Some people think that children nowadays have too much freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, young children have more free time and space than before. Although they have more freedom in some aspects, I believe that they should offer more free time and space.

5.5

band

Some people think that only the government can make significant changes in society , while other think that individuals can have a lot of influence . What is your opinion

It is a common belief that just the government can make dramatically change in the country. However, I firmly belive that people can have a variety of influence in society because people is the one who make up almost a society.

5.5

band

Some people feel that boarding schools(where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

It is often said that boarding schools are an exquisite choice for pupils, however, other people consider that it is not a good idea for some reasons. This essay will discuss both sides of this very controversial topic and conclude. On the one hand, supporters of this idea say that pupils live with their peers and can spend their leisure time effectively and be funny. These range from preparing for formal examinations, to doing sports that can build a healthy body. Some experts announced that spending spare time in productive ways has a positive impact on a child’s brain. They also say that pupils who live in dormitories can get academic assistance from their tutor anytime they want, rather than regular schools. Guided learning enables students to practice and learn with the teacher. On the other hand, opponents of boarding schools cite disadvantages that harm children’s character, discipline, and personality due to poor parental monitoring and supervision. Communicati...

5.5

band

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that the majority of inhabitants would like to waste their time by doing familiarity while others would prefer to have changeable life. Personally, I firmly agree with the second thesis, people should spend their time on different kinds of doing activities rather than doing the same job.

5.5

band

Some teachers think that international student exchange programs would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweight the disvantages?

Nowadays, many teachers think that it is advisable for teenagers to join international exchange programs. In my opinion, not all exchange programs are suitable but I believe that the advantages are still more significant.

5.5

band

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now `one big traffic jam`. How true do you think this statment is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

Automobile possession has risen so fastly along the previous thirty years that a plenty of cities in the earth are now one big traffic congestions.

5.5

band

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a debate about spending a lifetime doing similar actions and things between pessimistic people who focused on doing familiar acts that give them satisfaction, while optimists that try to discover new sides of the world. In my ,opinion both of these views have their own interpretation which will be discussed below.

5.5

band

Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home,leisure and work activities. To what extend do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

At first I would like to begin with advantages of information technology. In our society our life depends on new technologies. Let's talk about examples, even simple shopping is changed in this century . In the earlier life people had to go to the malls and and buys things that they needed in cash. Fortunatelly , in our sentury we do not have to go to any malls or borrow any money , even credit cards are not necessary . We can order everything on the Internet and they deliver products that you ordered to your home . You can get things with a just one click without going your home.

5.5

band

Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is anticipated that in coming years global nations would not only suffer from environmental issues but also related to population as well as educational. I think in my country, Indians might face pollution and obesity related problems in a coming decade. In this essay will discuss such challenges and possible solutions for them.

5.5

band

Some people think that the teenager’s years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There are 4 stages in life : Childhood, teenage life, adulthood and old age. Many think that teenagers' time period is the joyous time of most people's life. However, there are voices giving the opinion that adulthood means more happiness despite the responsibilities. In my perspective, I strongly think that teenage years are the happiest moment.

5.5

band

Strength and Weakness analysis for the scholarship analysis

My name is Sri Hernita Barus. I graduated with a Bachelor's degree of Accounting in 2012 from the University of Indonesia, with a Cum Laude predicate. Since graduating, I took several roles around Accounting such as external auditor, accountant specialist, and tax. Other than doing regular job tasks, I have been involved in several operational finance projects, initiated the improvement projects of the accounting and finance process, and composed the Company's financial performance for mana...

5.5

band

Some people believe that students should be taught international news as a subject at school. Others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is believed that students should learn at school a new subject like international news. However, there is also another view on this. Some part of the community says that it would be no more than a waste of their time at school. In this essay, I will look into both sides of this argument. To my mind, it would be very useful for kids to study what is happening in the world they live in.

5.5

band

Counties such as China, India and Japan have unsustainable population growths. In fact many experts are of the opinion that the population ‘explosion’ which is now a very worrying concern, is the most serious threat to life on this planet. Give some suggestions to address this problem.

There is a growing discussion across the regions that the skyrocketed birth rate has adverse impacts on a community, while a few countries such as China, India, and Japan undergo the retention of population growth. There are a number of reasons for this statement, but several measures could be taken to minimize this problem.

5.5

band

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a thought that there will be no need of buying a paper book because it will be totally replaced by an online one and people will be able to read it for free. I totally agree with this statement and in this essay, I will give reasons for this.

5.5

band

In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

Instead of buying, A lot of people are still considering renting a house. In some countries with high housing prices, this practice helps new families to at least have a place to stay. However, because of some reason, people are also preferring to buy them. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of rather buying or renting a home.

5.5

band

some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss both view and give your opinion

Certain individuals think that it is best to accept an inadequate condition,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money .Some others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.In the majority of ,cases people think that fate cannot be changed and we have to go along with the situations ,But others believe they have to change their fate and they stood against fate and work hard until they build a career better way.I will discuss both the statements and also give my opinion in the below paragraph.

5.5

band

As a part of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate whether students should utilize their time to settle down in another nation to widen firm grasp related to the distinctive language and culture of this nation. While this statement is valid to some extent, I would consider myself an advocate of this notion.

5.5

band

Nowadays, many people change jobs quite regularly, rather than working in the one company for their entire careers. Why do you think this is happening? How can companies keep their workers?

Job markets are rapidly changed because of employees career progression. Recently, the most workers are changing their employer annually however few of them stay with their company. I believe that this is happening because of salary increment and career growth. But if company provide salary increment religiously and take care of their staff, they may stay with their firm forever.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.