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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graphs illustrate the proportion of changes in electronic appliances of households, while the second graph shows the number of time spend doing housework in one country from 1920 to 2019.

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Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefits are in the world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The process of globalisation has brought a huge amount of benefits in many aspects. In my opinion, both environmental protection and global business benefit from the constantly growing cooperation across the border.

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It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?

Volunteering has always been considered a virtue to individuals and society. Although there is an argument that this should be compulsory for all young people, in my opinion, this compulsion would bring more harm instead of advantages.

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Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree?

Generally speaking, students often express the desire to organise their time as they prefer, so that they could choose when studying and when enjoying some free time. It is agreed that they should be able to manage their own time according to their preferences. Analysing the benefits in terms of organisational skills, as well as the increase in students' performance that this kind of time management could produce, will prove that.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). Do you agree or disagree?

In this modern times the issue of free services like working for a Charitable trust, social work in society giving education to poor children for games purposes should include in the social curriculum and make it a mandatory rule.undoubtedly this notion remains successful in keeping a majority in the favour.In the upcoming paragraph i would shed an argument related to very conception.

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Crime has been increasing in many cities around the world. What are the main causes of crime? How should these city governments deal with this problem?

Globally there is an unprecedented increase in the crime rate across all major cities. Throughout this essay, I will dwell on the reasons for the increased criminal activities and suggest possible solutions to combat the rise in crime.

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Some people believe governments should spend money in saving the languages of a few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

We live in a linguistically diverse world. However, there are several minority languages on the verge of extinction. While some people feel the government should fund the survival of these indigenous languages, others are against this notion. This essay will discuss both views and why we should conserve these languages. I believe it is essential for the government to safeguard languages.

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Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their parent. Other believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

It is believed that kids should always be near their parents in their leisure time. But, there is also an another point of view, that it could have a nagative effect on children. In this essay, I will discuss both statements and the probable arguments on them. Speaking about me , I am on the side, that it is not obligate for children to spend their free time with their mom and dad.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, advertising plays a vital role in society, and people usually have different views about commercials. Some individuals believe advertising is an essential industry as it increases people’s consumption of different products. However, others think that more and more people are not interested in advertising since it is not special. This essay discusses both sides of this argument, and I think good advertising brings advantages to people, and commercial industries should create high-quality advertising.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices

We are living in the modern era where we everybody know their good and bad nobody needs to correct them even they will not accept their suggestions.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are people who give their whole lives to working only in one organisation. However, it is said by some part of a society, that a better choice is to work for varieties of companies. In this essay I will look into both views and I will express my own opinion about this.

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Opinion Some people think children should have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Some individuals believe minors should be given the ability to make errors, while many think that older persons should avoid children from making wrong decisions. I support the first statement. In this essay, I will be discussing both sides.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In numerous countries, a number of people believe it is crucial to use a lot of money on building new railway lines for quick trains among cities. Others think the money should be used on improving existing public transport. In this essay i will be discussing both statements but i opine the latter.

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Some people think that increasing communication usage of computers and mobile phones by young people has had a negative effect on their reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Few believe that the surge in the utilization of computing machines and smartphones has adversely impacted the reading and writing skills of the youth. With the advent of technology, the traditional methods of grasping information have been exacerbated.

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Some people believe that team sports are very important for children to succeed in their career, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often argued by some that there are many advantages for children to play team sports to prepare for their future jobs while others do not agree. From my point of view, I do agree with this idea. In this essay, I will discuss both sides in detail.

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Every year several languages die out, Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, there are many different kinds of languages that people are using them, but it can be said that there are a few languages that are incredibly popular than others. If people are connecting by one language, the living will become more convenient and comfortable. In this is say, I will delineate this notion and then come up with an opinion.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.

Nowadays,information is paramount for our life.Some people think we should share information as possible we can.While other people think some important information is not convenient to be share.In my opinion,I think we should keep some personally or some valuable information.

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Some people think that the Olympics is no longer important in the 21st century. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that Olympics have been losing their importance along the centuries, until becoming irrelevant nowadays. In my opinion, I disagree that Olympic games lost their importance in the world where we live in. I support this point of view for two main reasons.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some countries, it is essential for people to have their own home instead of renting one. I totally agree with that state of mind and in this essay I am going to describe the reasons why.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects . Other people think that , in today's world , subjects like Science and Technology are important than History . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In this modern era, schooling is compulsory for each individual. All the schools around the world, either college or university have these subjects: history, science and technology. History is considered one of the major school subjects apart from science and technology. However, the later generations think that Science and Technology are more important.

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