IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 940

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Few individuals claimed that money is a best present to give for adolescents. Whereas, others think opposite that money can affect their teenagers. However, in my opinion, I completely disagree to the first given statement, and there are some views that are discussed in the below paragraphs.

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Online shopping is replacing offline or shopping from stores.do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In this modern scenario,everyone is habituated to purchasing products from the internet instead of going to malls directly.I think this a optimistic trend in many views in terms of quality,durability and offers.

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Would you rather visit the moon or the sun? What would you do there?

If you ask me where I would go to, the moon or the sun, I would say that I prefer to tour on the moon as the moon can be realistic for people who dream to travel on the moon. There are many reasons that I choose the moon and dream to do a lot of activities.

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64.The tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?

In the past, it was common for a family to have meals together in a dining room. Yet, nowadays, that tradition seems to vanish. I believe the reasons are coming from today's trend.

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Today, food travels thousands of miles from the farm to the consumer. Why is this? Is it a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, it is much easier and more convenient for consumers to purchase various kinds of food, including some that do not belong to local areas. This trend depends on the development of the food travel industry. In this essay, I will discuss the reason for the improvement and its effects.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that advertising is considered as the key aspect that stimulates people’s desire to purchase items offered. However, advertising turns out to be something insignificant to some consumers since it is not special anymore. This essay will discuss both points of view.

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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely believed that newspaper stays as the most significant news media despite the dramatic increase in the number of people reading online news. I do believe that this statement is most likely untrue with some following reasons.

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The world is consuming natural resources faster than they can be renewed. Therefore, it is important that products are made to last. Governments should discourage people from constantly buying up-to-date or fashionable products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays there is a great concern over the unrenewable natural resources depleting. It is suggested to substitute the fashionable and new products by durable ones and the government was requested to oversee its happening with preventing the continuous new product purchases. It is noteworthy to bear in mind that this solution can save the remained resources; however, I believe it is not workable. The following essay will discuss two rationales that support my belief.

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Nowadays many people read the news online instead of reading newspapers or watching TV. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

there is no denying that these days are persons whom preferer to obtain their daily reports through online news, because they have rapidly access to updated data, also the report online brings convenience and diverse entries or search. However, exists important drawbacks such as fake news and a significant increase in unemployment in the mass-media field.

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Many people argue that zoos where creatures are contained in artificial enclosures should be banned in this century. Are you agree or desagree

Many people argue that zoos where creatures are contained in artificial enclosures should be banned in this century. This essay totally agrees with this statement because it is cruel to keep an animal in a confined space, and nature programs allow us to view animals without the need for a zoo.

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Nowadays more and more tasks at home and at work are being performed by robots. Why do you think this is happening? Is it a negative or positive development?

At this time, several tasks are being performed by machines and not by humans. Working with robots can have more profits and less cost than working with people, and this is a huge change for society, with positives and negative consequences for human life.

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Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is argued that leading team’s activities could improve personal competencies, even more than individual work. This essay agrees with that statement because working in a group could improve interpersonal intelligence.

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Many people believe that eighteen years old is the appropriate age to finish school. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been widely discussed for many people about the better age to complete the secondary education. Some people believe that the best age is definitely the 18. I totally agree whit this affirmation as I believe that people have more emotional and affective mature.

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Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney college of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible.

My name is Sofia Castillo a high school student from Bogota,Colombia. First of all, I am writing to request a copy of my reports and assignment from the course I took last year at the Sydney College of Australia. Also, I would like to know a way to get that paperwork.

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Some people think that single-sex schools are better than mixed schools. Others believe that mixed-sex schools are only way for children to learn. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

The argument about the importance of gender based studies over co-education tract of knowledge acquisition, has been on for a while. I believe that boys and girls should be encouraged to learn under the same roof. This essay will examine the view that one gender schooling enables students to be focused on their goals while mixed educational centres enhances team work.

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Nowadays many families are rarely having meals together. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Currently, the different members of the families eat separately and

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In some countries, the government is encouraging businesses and industries to move outside city centers and relocate to regional areas. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Nowadays, there are an increasing number of businesses and industries and because of that, the government is suggesting them to move in rural areas from urban cities. In this matter, advantages and benefits such as wider spaces at cheaper prices are coming together with difficulties and disadvantages like transportation problems for them.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

In recent times, the masses opt to work for themselves as opposed to being in full-time employment. This is usually due to a higher monthly income and flexible working schedules even though at times they face negatives in that a change to the economy of a country often results in a loss of business. In this essay, I will tackle this issue and offer a conclusion.

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Climate change is a phenomenon that affects countries all over the world. Many people strongly believe that it is the responsibility of individuals, rather than corporations and governments, to deal with this problem. To what extent do you agree?

Climate change is a very real danger that threatens not only our lives but also the quality of life of future generations. To combat this I strongly disagree that individuals need to take responsibility because governments, in cooperation with private companies have both a greater responsibility and capacity in this matter.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

It is always argued that some people think that students should study in their favourite field while others believe that students should study just in science and technology subjects that will be useful in the future.

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