IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 955

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Many people belive that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies . Others claim , that men are just as good as women at parenting

Undoubtedly, society thinks that a mother is a better person when it comes to the parenting process, while some people argue that a father has a similar qualities as mother does in taking care of their kids. This essay will explore both ideas and explain why I believe working together on raising children should be done by women and men together.

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Multicultural societies, where people of different groups live together, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the development of globalization, some people think that a group composed of diverse backgrounds and cultures who live together have more positive outcomes than negative impacts on a country. I personally agree with the statement and present some points in favour of it.

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Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

A part of the community opines that schools should select youngsters according to their academic achievements. However , another part opposes this fact by claiming ,it is better to allow students with multiple abilities to study together . although , when young students with a good academic background studying together can increase their knowledge by stimulation , it can be negatively affected their minds as well . On the other hand , when students with multiple abilities are grouped together they can share their abilities . however , this writer believes, that both these views have pros and cons and we have to select the ideal way very carefully.

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Some people believe that is is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

There are those who hold the view that it is better to endure bad circumstances, like being unhappy with your work or having a financial crisis. Some think that it is much better to indulge in the problem and deal with it to improve such situations.

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As global trade increases, many goods including those we use on a daily basis are produced in other countries and have to be transported long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

No doubts that the globalisation process spread over the world, especially in the sphere of transporting goods. And now citizens of many countries are consuming these products. But the question appears, does it more beneficial to the country or not? I think that isit most beneficial, because it develops trading, diplomacy and fields in the country, although it makes weak the field of producing goods.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Today, individuals can not imagine their life without medicine, because the most crucial conclusion of the developed medical upbringing is that, society is living more and the life dimension is rising dramatically. The proof of these sentences that we have been witnessing during the lockdown, doctors have been the protective shield for preventing diseases and no matter what we did, we were not able to stay safely in the absence of clinicians.

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The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

The number of individuals is increasing dramatically. One consequence of the rising community causes society in modern life. I totally agree that it is the greatest trouble faced by society.

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Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons.

Sending their children to boarding school is a controversial subject for many people, some argue that it is a great choice for their children but others may contradict that opinion. This essay will discuss both sides and I will state my mind that boarding schools are beneficial and important chance for students for being well prepared for their forthcoming lives.

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The use of mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries and shops. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary world l, people have become addicted to cell phones and it is really difficult for them to love even ten minutes without their phones. It is often said that its usage should be prohibited in local places like libraries and local markets. I partially agree with the statement and I will elaborate my views in the subsequent verses.

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the alteration of the layout of a university’ s sport centre as it is now and the plan in the future.

The given maps illustrate the alteration of the layout of a university’s sports centre as it is now and the plan in the future.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

High-level sugar products have gained more attention from the public for their detrimental effect on people's health. Someone even argues that the price of these products should be raised to discourage people from purchasing them. Personally, I disagree with the idea because there are more viable ways to reach that.

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Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

There are controversial perspectives heating a debate over crucial factors sporting games to getting success. While people hold a strong view that mental strength plays such a most paramount vital role in this path, the opposite makes a statement that being strong and fit is more imperative. Although each has its own perks, I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned elements.

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nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

These days knowledge, and experience, both are crucial parts of one’s life. I believe that experience plays more important role than knowledge all over the world, thus the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.

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Nowadays more and more older people who need employment have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are the solutions?

Currently, the job market is influenced by the development of technology. Hence, several jobs disappear, while there is also a lot of new jobs that are different with many educational backgrounds. As a result, the competition in getting new occupation is also increasing. It does not matter how old someone is, everyone should compete with each other to become an employee. In my opinion, to solve this issue, we need to manage our education system to adapt to job demands in society.

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nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

These days knowledge, and experience, both are crucial parts in one’s life. I believe that experience plays more important role than knowledge all over the world, thus the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.

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Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

In choosing the course, Master of Education; firstly because of Thai educational system required an enhancement such outdated teaching methods such as corporal punishment or even more tragically with poverty that have to enroll in public school that sponsored by the government as cheapest in learning fees will certainly learn in the Thai wording. Accordingly, Thailand's English proficiency ranges have decreased consecutively for the last three years as I am one of them who pursued English f...

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the alteration of lslip town as it is now and its plan in the future.

The given maps illustrate the alteration of Islip town as it is now and its plan in the future.

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People today can use the internet to learn about lives and cultures in other countries, so it is necessary to travel anymore.Do you agree?

Nowadays many people believes that internet has all the information for them to learn the culture of different country just as travel does, so they choose to stay at their home and not travel. However when I look at the information on internet it doesn’t provide the latest information or practical experience, therefore people still need to travel to learn about different culture.

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More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is generally acknowledged that youngsters tend to increasingly use electronic devices such as computers and tablets in this contemporary society as their parents permit this trend in order to increase children's technological ability. Regarding this, I strongly believe that the benefit of this trend overwhelm the drawback.

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Reasearch indicates that the charactoristics we are born with have much influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influencer?

It is stated that one's character is more influenced by birth traits than the experiences in life. However, while I believe in my opinion, birth traits do have an effect, I agree that experiences in life have a greater influence.

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