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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is anticipated that in coming years global nations would not only suffer from environmental issues but also related to population as well as educational. I think in my country, Indians might face pollution and obesity related problems in a coming decade. In this essay will discuss such challenges and possible solutions for them.

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Some people think that the teenager’s years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There are 4 stages in life : Childhood, teenage life, adulthood and old age. Many think that teenagers' time period is the joyous time of most people's life. However, there are voices giving the opinion that adulthood means more happiness despite the responsibilities. In my perspective, I strongly think that teenage years are the happiest moment.

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Strength and Weakness analysis for the scholarship analysis

My name is Sri Hernita Barus. I graduated with a Bachelor's degree of Accounting in 2012 from the University of Indonesia, with a Cum Laude predicate. Since graduating, I took several roles around Accounting such as external auditor, accountant specialist, and tax. Other than doing regular job tasks, I have been involved in several operational finance projects, initiated the improvement projects of the accounting and finance process, and composed the Company's financial performance for mana...

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Some people believe that students should be taught international news as a subject at school. Others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is believed that students should learn at school a new subject like international news. However, there is also another view on this. Some part of the community says that it would be no more than a waste of their time at school. In this essay, I will look into both sides of this argument. To my mind, it would be very useful for kids to study what is happening in the world they live in.

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Counties such as China, India and Japan have unsustainable population growths. In fact many experts are of the opinion that the population ‘explosion’ which is now a very worrying concern, is the most serious threat to life on this planet. Give some suggestions to address this problem.

There is a growing discussion across the regions that the skyrocketed birth rate has adverse impacts on a community, while a few countries such as China, India, and Japan undergo the retention of population growth. There are a number of reasons for this statement, but several measures could be taken to minimize this problem.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a thought that there will be no need of buying a paper book because it will be totally replaced by an online one and people will be able to read it for free. I totally agree with this statement and in this essay, I will give reasons for this.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

Instead of buying, A lot of people are still considering renting a house. In some countries with high housing prices, this practice helps new families to at least have a place to stay. However, because of some reason, people are also preferring to buy them. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of rather buying or renting a home.

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss both view and give your opinion

Certain individuals think that it is best to accept an inadequate condition,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money .Some others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.In the majority of ,cases people think that fate cannot be changed and we have to go along with the situations ,But others believe they have to change their fate and they stood against fate and work hard until they build a career better way.I will discuss both the statements and also give my opinion in the below paragraph.

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As a part of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate whether students should utilize their time to settle down in another nation to widen firm grasp related to the distinctive language and culture of this nation. While this statement is valid to some extent, I would consider myself an advocate of this notion.

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Nowadays, many people change jobs quite regularly, rather than working in the one company for their entire careers. Why do you think this is happening? How can companies keep their workers?

Job markets are rapidly changed because of employees career progression. Recently, the most workers are changing their employer annually however few of them stay with their company. I believe that this is happening because of salary increment and career growth. But if company provide salary increment religiously and take care of their staff, they may stay with their firm forever.

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summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graphs illustrate the proportion of changes in electronic appliances of households, while the second graph shows the number of time spend doing housework in one country from 1920 to 2019.

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Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefits are in the world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The process of globalisation has brought a huge amount of benefits in many aspects. In my opinion, both environmental protection and global business benefit from the constantly growing cooperation across the border.

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It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?

Volunteering has always been considered a virtue to individuals and society. Although there is an argument that this should be compulsory for all young people, in my opinion, this compulsion would bring more harm instead of advantages.

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Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree?

Generally speaking, students often express the desire to organise their time as they prefer, so that they could choose when studying and when enjoying some free time. It is agreed that they should be able to manage their own time according to their preferences. Analysing the benefits in terms of organisational skills, as well as the increase in students' performance that this kind of time management could produce, will prove that.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). Do you agree or disagree?

In this modern times the issue of free services like working for a Charitable trust, social work in society giving education to poor children for games purposes should include in the social curriculum and make it a mandatory rule.undoubtedly this notion remains successful in keeping a majority in the favour.In the upcoming paragraph i would shed an argument related to very conception.

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Crime has been increasing in many cities around the world. What are the main causes of crime? How should these city governments deal with this problem?

Globally there is an unprecedented increase in the crime rate across all major cities. Throughout this essay, I will dwell on the reasons for the increased criminal activities and suggest possible solutions to combat the rise in crime.

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Some people believe governments should spend money in saving the languages of a few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

We live in a linguistically diverse world. However, there are several minority languages on the verge of extinction. While some people feel the government should fund the survival of these indigenous languages, others are against this notion. This essay will discuss both views and why we should conserve these languages. I believe it is essential for the government to safeguard languages.

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Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their parent. Other believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

It is believed that kids should always be near their parents in their leisure time. But, there is also an another point of view, that it could have a nagative effect on children. In this essay, I will discuss both statements and the probable arguments on them. Speaking about me , I am on the side, that it is not obligate for children to spend their free time with their mom and dad.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, advertising plays a vital role in society, and people usually have different views about commercials. Some individuals believe advertising is an essential industry as it increases people’s consumption of different products. However, others think that more and more people are not interested in advertising since it is not special. This essay discusses both sides of this argument, and I think good advertising brings advantages to people, and commercial industries should create high-quality advertising.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices

We are living in the modern era where we everybody know their good and bad nobody needs to correct them even they will not accept their suggestions.

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