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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Opinion Some people think children should have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Some individuals believe minors should be given the ability to make errors, while many think that older persons should avoid children from making wrong decisions. I support the first statement. In this essay, I will be discussing both sides.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In numerous countries, a number of people believe it is crucial to use a lot of money on building new railway lines for quick trains among cities. Others think the money should be used on improving existing public transport. In this essay i will be discussing both statements but i opine the latter.

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Some people think that increasing communication usage of computers and mobile phones by young people has had a negative effect on their reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Few believe that the surge in the utilization of computing machines and smartphones has adversely impacted the reading and writing skills of the youth. With the advent of technology, the traditional methods of grasping information have been exacerbated.

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Some people believe that team sports are very important for children to succeed in their career, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often argued by some that there are many advantages for children to play team sports to prepare for their future jobs while others do not agree. From my point of view, I do agree with this idea. In this essay, I will discuss both sides in detail.

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Every year several languages die out, Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, there are many different kinds of languages that people are using them, but it can be said that there are a few languages that are incredibly popular than others. If people are connecting by one language, the living will become more convenient and comfortable. In this is say, I will delineate this notion and then come up with an opinion.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.

Nowadays,information is paramount for our life.Some people think we should share information as possible we can.While other people think some important information is not convenient to be share.In my opinion,I think we should keep some personally or some valuable information.

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Some people think that the Olympics is no longer important in the 21st century. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that Olympics have been losing their importance along the centuries, until becoming irrelevant nowadays. In my opinion, I disagree that Olympic games lost their importance in the world where we live in. I support this point of view for two main reasons.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some countries, it is essential for people to have their own home instead of renting one. I totally agree with that state of mind and in this essay I am going to describe the reasons why.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects . Other people think that , in today's world , subjects like Science and Technology are important than History . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In this modern era, schooling is compulsory for each individual. All the schools around the world, either college or university have these subjects: history, science and technology. History is considered one of the major school subjects apart from science and technology. However, the later generations think that Science and Technology are more important.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, due to the increase in popularity of social media, many people prefer to get informed there free of charge rather thanin newspapers and books. To a certain extend, I agree with that statement and some main points will be addressed in the following paragraphs.

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one of major issues facing world today is over population. What problem arise from this situation? What measures can be taken to deal with it?

The number of people is increasing unprecedentedly in all over the world. This situation will might constitute some problems like inadequate sources or more challenging life conditions if it is not undertaken the control. In this essay, I will discuss some potential problems stemming from this issue and suggest some ways to tackle this complex matter.

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social media or the internet promoting communication are you with or against ?

It is undeniable that internet plays a pivotal role in todays world . there are some people who propose bonds and communication between each others are strengthened by the internet innumerable applications , I agree with this notion . In the following essay some ideas that support my opinion will be discussed thoroughly .

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5. Some people think the government should ban dangerous sports, while some others think everyone should be free to choose whatever sporting activities he or she likes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that some sports are too dangerous to establish in our life. Therefore, while some people want the government to ban those kinds of sports, others think they have rights to choose what sports they like.

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Ethical Issues involved when patients refuse treatment for life-threatening conditions

Among the contents of the right to self-determination, it is not clear whether the "treatment method" includes the right to determine what treatment to receive in terms of the patient or not, and the interpretation of whether such authority can be viewed as a right to demand a decision that harms the patient. In the case of emergency patients whose lives are in danger, it has been judged that the doctor's obligation to protect the patient's life takes precedence over the patient's right to ...

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Ethical Issues involved when patients refuse treatment for life-threatening conditions

When a patient requests the discharge of a patient, the medical staff must first check whether the patient is capable of making decisions on his own. The patient's decision-making ability means the capacity to understand the patient's condition and necessary treatment procedures after receiving sufficient information related to prescription from the medical team, compare the benefits and risks of each medication method, and make reasonable decisions according to the evaluation results. The ...

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Friends can you please check my essay. Topic is - Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world today, faces a threat to its existence due to environmental problems of grave nature. The rise of such issues might be attributed to the rapid industrialisation led by technological advancements in the last century. Nonethless, I strongly believe that these threats will be neutralised too, by technology itself. Inventions in the areas of energy, transportation and industrial waste management will lead to an improved climatic condition.

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nowadays, many schools find it profitable to sell unhealthy food and sugary drinks to students during lunch breaks. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

Many public schools find that they are inadequately funded by the government and must resort to other ways of raising money. Selling food provides a source of revenue as well as a service to students but, in my view, the sale of junk food and soft drinks or ‘energy’ drinks is a worrying development.

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These days, too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine, rather than by following a healthy lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the recent world, a numerous individual are chosing to maintain their health by following on the doctors opinion or taking a medicine more than changing their lifestyle to become healthier. From my point of view, I disagree with the idea that people rely only on doctor or medicine rather than changing their lifestyle to become healthier. In the following paragraphs, the reasons to support my opinion will be outlined in detail.

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Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries. Do you agree or disagree ?

It's undeniable that globalization is the trend of today's world . There are some people who think developed countries should allow recruitment offers for the skilled workforce from underdeveloped countries , l completely agree with this notion . In the following essay , some of the ideas that support my opinion will be explored thoroughly.

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Some people say that mobile phones should be banned in public places such as libraries, shops, and public transport. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that some electronic devices, such as mobile phones should be prohibited in public spaces, like libraries, stores, museums, and public transport. In my opinion, I disagree with the fact that the mentioned devices should be completely banned in such places, since this will be an extreme choice. However, I believe few rules have to be established to assure an appropriate usage of these tools.

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