IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 951

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.To what extend do you agree or disagree?

These days,everyone desires to become a famous person whether it is in an optimistic or pessimistic way because they are influenced by renowned personalities,but nowadays,many individuals become famous without having any knowledge.however,beautyness and financial background are also used to become superstar.as a result,it will be badly affected on youngster's life,so I accord this statement.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Today, human beings are facing a huge amount of advertisement either in internet or in their routine life. Actually, it means that advertisement is becoming as the main strong “weapon” in business industry. So companies in order to gain more attention and high profit trying to highlight their products showing that it is something new among other similar goods. However, boosting the products by this way might also have demerits. So in forthcoming paragraphs I will give the main reasons and discus both sides.

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Some people believe that today’s world is a better place for old people. However some argue that they had better lives in the past. Agree or disagree?

Human beings always have plenty of concerns and fears about their old ages. While, there is an opinion that today’s world on the whole lead to more difficulties regarding the process of ageing, I, among others, hold that the elderly nowadays enjoy their lives more than they did in the past.

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People aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problems? How to overcome it?

These days, balancing between work and life is a serious concern among society. People have to work hard so that they can afford the costs of living for themselves and their families. However, the primary purpose of working is to have a normal life and spend time with families and friends. This essay looks at the problems of this issue and suggests some solutions to this matter.

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Today, wordly corona virus widespread become every nation problem, including education sector and it make many educational officers and experts suggest the government to spent more budget for free internet access. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In our new era, nations have been gripped by many issues, especially the education part of the government, and lots of authorities advocate that it is better to pour more money on accsessing the internet for the purpose of free usage. I beleive it would consider as one of the notions, and I totally agree with this statement.

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Some people believe that using animals to test the safety of human medicines is cruel and unwarranted, whereas others feel it is a medical necessity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

Every life is precious and should be treated as such. However, when a new disease appears on the scene, finding the right medication might mean experimenting with animal life as a means for testing. There are arguments for and against this idea of using animals for this purpose with many suggesting that it is unnatural to do so while others concur with it. Personally, I agree with the use of animals as laboratory rats. This essay will discuss both of these views and reflect my opinion.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, prevention is a high-priority agenda to reduce the rate of chronic disease that emerges because of risky behaviour. Some people argue that encouraging people to work out by providing exercise facilities in public will support the idea, while others believe there are other strategies that will be more efficient to be applied. There are valid opinions on both sides which I will consider now.

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Some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best way to decrease crime while others believe that there are alternative ways to decrease crime. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Crime is a serious problem rising in today’s world. To tackle it, some argue that offenders should spend longer time in prison, while others feel that there are other ways to reduce crime activities. This essay will look at both views and explain why I think shorter prison sentence with psychological treatment is a better way to address the issue.

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many manufactured food and drink products contain high level off sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Currently, there are a number of foods and beverages that consist of high sugar that is responsible for a lot of illnesses. As a result, some people think that sugary goods should have higher prices in order to motivate folk to eat less sugar. I personally disagree with the idea because there are better ways to persuade people to consume less sugar than increasing the price of sugary products.

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Some people think sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a tremendously controversial perspective heating a debate over imprisonment does not get an efficient solution to cope with offenders and instead of this, the better one is education and training. In my opinion, while each has its own merits, it is ideal to combine both mentioned elements.

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Some people think the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,many academics are thinking about their profit which comes from student's fees rather than quality of education systems.some individuals claim that academics have the privilege to turn scholars into knowledgeable citizens as well as well educated.I strongly accord with this view.

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest?

Recently, some students behaves badly in many countries. In my childhood, some students act worthy of my teacher. I thought there are some reasons that they act like that. Furthermore, here are some solutions to respond to it.

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, advances in technology/technological advancements have allowed governments and the police to keep the public under constant surveillance. However, sometimes this is done without the person’s consent. The use of security cameras and other technology to monitor is certainly advantageous, but there can also be some drawbacks and concerns derived from this development which we should not overlook.

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An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Human beings are living in an era where there are many tools that exist to make people's lives much easier. Many observers have witnessed that many educational centres are using tablets and laptop computers instead of using printed resources. This essay going to examine what are the positive and negative outcomes from this sort of advancement.

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Students should choose an university major that the prepares them for high-paying careers. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement

To have a good prospect of a better future, students need to focus on majoring in courses that prepare them for high-income jobs. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this sentiment. This essay will highlight how this can motivate one to work even harder while at the university as well as how it can culminate into a guaranteed job.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

At the moment it's very important what kind of job do you have, and people try to find the better type to be able to have more time for themself and fewer hours if is possible.

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A knowledge of maths is not important for most jobs nowadays. To what extent do you agree ?

People are divided in their opinion regarding maths plays povital role in professional life. Although some argue that this subject is no longer crucial for current jobs, I personally considered that maths is important because it builds problem-solving skills and will bring you to many job opportunities in the future.

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Some people think that young people should choose their professions themselves. Others believe that their parents should choose for them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Choosing a career is one of the hardest choices that every one of us has to make at some point in life. Some may argue that parents have the right to decide for their children, others that everybody has to choose on their own in order to become what they want in life. In my opinion, sometimes parents can be helpful to decide our future ,however , they should not force their children into pursuing a career that doesn't really fit them.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poor countries to work in developed countries. what problems does this cause? what can be done to deal with situation.

Living in a third world country is difficult for those professionals who are eager to succeed in their profession and as well as with their own lives. Most the young professionals or even some old ones strive to be in a country that offers more to them. Does your own fellow countrymen deserve to experience a shortage of professionals, because of the lack of support from your own country?

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

It is true that new technologies have had an influence on communication between people. Technology has affected relationships in various ways, and in my opinion there are both positive and negative effects. Technology has had an impact on relationships in business, education and social life. Firstly, telephones and the Internet allow business people in different countries to interact without ever meeting each other. Secondly, services like Skype create new possibilities for relationships be...

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