IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 956

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behaviour. If sporting events cause antisocial behaviour, can team sports really be good for us?

In our new age, whereas sports are integrated with our fugitive life and play a vital role to keep us fit, there are some pieces of evidence that they have been gripped by violence these years, and maybe spread vandalism among the community. I presume that it would be like a two-edge sword, and could bring both benefits and drawbacks to us in terms of disparate subjects.

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Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an undeniable fact that free-time hobby has great impact on our quality of life, whereas it is widely argued that making most of the pastime is by being mentally engaged with activities such as solving puzzles or reading books, others assume that having rested in our time of pursuits, ultimate productivity in our regular basis can be achieved. However, I partially advocate the idea of participating in more challenging recreations rather than remaining in rest mood.

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Online classes make conventional classrooms unnecessary. To What extent do you agree/disagree?

Over the last two or three decades, technology has been flourishing by leaps and bounds in every fields, especially in education. As a result, virtual learning has been rising tremendosly at present, therefore, some think that traditional classroom teaching method is unnecessary due to online education. I strongly disagree with this statement and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people think that Children should be taught to be competitive in school. Other, however, say that cooperation and team working skills are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many people share different views on whether children at school should be taught to be competitive or cooperative and team workers. As both of these perspectives aim to increase the output of students, however, they have different thought processes , so this essay will discuss both philosophies and give an opinion.

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Some people are making new friends by using socializing network website and Internet chat rooms. Some people say that this is a good thing. Other people say that people should make new friends by face-to-face chat. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,technology is increasing by leaps and bounds with a lot of amenities,so some individuals are creating many friends through social media like WhatsApp,facebook and other apps,therefore people think that it is a best way to introduce companions.In contrast,Others claim that it leads to many crisis,thus people should meet friends by direct chat only.I strongly recommend that both statements are equally imperative as discussed as follows.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are too many people around the world that are thinking about emigrating to another country, seeking a better life. But only a few of them really think about the complexities to living in a country of another language and culture. The fact that living in another country changes your social life and also causes you many problems in practical terms to a great extent, cannot be overlooked.

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In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays obesity has become really widespread among young children which puts their life in danger. I completely agree with the argument that the responsibility of tackling this issue falls on governments since they have enough power and funding.

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With increasing populations and ever growing urban centres, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

It is a fact that people connected with nature and their beautiful views tend to be happier for the generation of positive emotions. Besides the association of the environment with good responses of mental health, there are a bunch of benefits that are possible to list and prove how important it is to make urban plans to properly distribute population, which the number of humans is rising fast, without destroying nature and take advantages of the natural beauty places.

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Some people think there are not many things individuals can do to resolve environmental problems, while others believe that in order to tackle environmental problems individuals also need to take action. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Earth's biosphere is experiencing serious damages due to overpopulation and exploitation of natural resources. If appropriate steps are not taken to address and solve this issue then, it may lead to apocalyptic events. Some people feel that on an individual level there are only a few things that could be done to resolve environmental problems whereas, others think it is crucial for every person to take action to overcome this. In this essay, I will explain both points of view and also give my opinion about why a combination of approaches is better.

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you recently e on a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in an exhibition. Invite your friend for the exhibition. Please describe Competition and prize About the photograph Invite your friend.

I hope you have radiant health and the best of spirits. Today I am writing this letter to inform you that, I have won a photography competition and my photo is going to be displayed in an exhibition.

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should criminals be sent to prison or should they do something else as a punishment? Explain your opinion and give your reason.

Throughout history, Crime has always been a danger to society. According to the development of society, many people think that we should put criminals in prison and let them do other things as punishment. But in my opinion, depending on the crime of the offender, the appropriate punishment can be given to them.

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Nowadays, many people change jobs quite regularly, rather than working in the company for their entire careers. Why do you think this is happening? How can companies keep their workers?

In the present scenario, the majority of employees are switching their jobs very often instead of associating with an organization throughout their career. This essay will look at the reasons for such an attrition rate and propose some solutions.

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In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. what are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

Traffic congestion is becoming a global problem and, in some arias this lead to a major drow back of the economy. Most of the time, rising urban population and shooting level of private vehicles on road are the main problem but, improper development of the roads is a rising cause . Although the development of proper road system and introduction of good public transport facility among the main solution , we can't forget about the development of small towns to prevent migration of their population. In the following essay, I will discuss these matters in detail.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects . Other people think that, in today's world , subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both views and give your opinion .

Some people that one of the most significant subjects at school is history. However ,many opine that this is not more important than science and technology. From my point of view ,I believe that this is exactly crucial and studying it should be increased.

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Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many ideas, which have been creative by artists, must have the freedom for presenting to a community in any way such as words, pictures, music or movie. Moreover, a government should control with an equal standard. In my opinion, I completely agree about this idea however the idea should be illustrated with reality without a fake news.

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THE FOREST AND THE NEED TO PRESERVE IT. WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THAT?

In recent times, a lot of attention has been drawn to the need to protect the forest. Although, some persons argue otherwise, however, I believe there are benefits in preserving the wildlife. This essay will discuss in detail some of the advantages of securing forest life.

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Some people believe that countries should produce food that population eats and import food as less as possible. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

In my opinion this can not be realistic as most of the countries in west does not have agriculcural environment. Due to which they are unable to plant food on the own land, thus they have to import food from the counties where climate is suitable for the agriculture.

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Some people think that competitive sports have a postive effect on education of Teenagers while others argue that effect is negative. Give your views and opinion.

Competition is rising day by day in every field to a great extent. People are divided over whether motivated sports have an adverse or useful outcomes on the studies of youngsters.Admittedly,there is an element of truth in having a good effect of games on learning, but we also have to consider a few negative effects of business on schooling.

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Television programs and movies have become saturated with violent content.What are some resulting social problems and how can we deal with them?

These days many of us become more aggressive and impatient and i can agree on this is happening because of the violent entertainment we consume. In the below ,passage i will try to justify this statement

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Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in the cities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this day and age, people start being more conscious about their health. While the majority of people believes that countryside environment is conducive to living healthier, a school of thought seconds that people could gain health benefits in the cities. From my perspective, I strongly agree with the former belief that life in the countryside is much healthier.

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