IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 962

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds ? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to some individuals, there is too much focus and resources are given to the safety of wild animals and birds . In my opinion,these such animals and birds are important for our ecosystem and they are on verge of extinction. So ,that is why my views are at same wavelength with this ideology.

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Working long hours causes a great deal of stress and can be very bad for one's health. VinMec’s top management must find a way to reduce this type of stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowaday most of workers not only doctors must work all of the day and this can cause a lot of negative effects on their health. Solving this problem is the most importan for the management of the Vinmec director board. In my opinion, I totally agree with both views.

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Nowadays, internet and television has given ordinary people a chance to become famous. Is this a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and relevant examples

It is often said that social media and TV give the opportunity to many folks to become widely known. I would argue that this trend has both advantages and disadvantages.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other type of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and and give your own opinion.

Many people in leadership believe that economic development should be the most crucial goal, while others argue that there are also other things as important as this for a nation.

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In some Vinhomes areas, fast food, prepared meals, and sugary drinks are now sold in more shops and at lower prices than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

These days fast food get popular among people. Most of stores sell them at a reasonable price- at lower prices in the past. In my opinion, fast foods, prepared meals and sugary drinks have the potential to damage health are greater than the benefits that we receive to eat them.

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In some Vinhomes areas, fast food, prepared meals, and sugary drinks are now sold in more shops and at lower prices than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowaday, fast food, prepared meals, and sugary drinks are getting popular among people.Most of the store prepare them fast and sell them at reasonable price. In my opinion, developing in these fast-food industry can damage our health more than the benefits that we receive from it.

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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motor-bike. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Road safety is the one important thing for human's life security. Some people think that the best way to shift safety levels is to raise the age of drivers. I strongly disagree with this statement and the following examples will be provided in order to support my point of view.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Living in a foreign country with a different language brings the number of hardships with it like language barrier, cultural differences and social problems for the migrant and I fully agree with the above-mentioned statement will elaborate further in the next paragraphs.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views, and give your opinion.

Most of the students who are trying to get a good job or business right after their schooling is often failing. But the people who are choosing to study in the educational institution/university and take a little more time are easily getting a successful career.

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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Happiness is an indispensable element in everyone's life. It is very difficult to define exactly what happiness is because everyone has a different life situation, so their concept will also be different. In my personal opinion, the decisive factors in achieving enjoyment are good relationships with family and friends and good well-being.

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Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time? (

Someone thinks that spare time is much more for children, and they should consump it to conduct various home excercises. This statement is mentioned to alarm how children to use their time effectively.

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Children today spend more time watching television rather than they did in the past. Describe some of the Advantages and Disadvantages of Television for the children

It is often argued that compared to the previous times, today’s generation has developed a tendency of spending more and more hours watching a TV set. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of children watching television more than a limit.

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Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination,while other think that tere are more important factors such as money and appearance.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Several representatives of contemporary society deem that various achievements are reached by intensive and hard work whereas others argue with this position and claim that riches and appearance play an essential part in human life. From my perspective, it can not be denied that these statements are composed of a fraction of the truth. Therefore, I am going to reflect on this essay my own view of such an issue and to provide strong arguments, which confirm my core opinion.

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Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

As the world is going to be more globalized, more people decide to immigrate to other countries. These people need to adapt themselves to the destination country and integrate with local ones but this does not mean that they have to abandon all their own culture and histories.

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Many manufactured fod and drink products contain high level of sugar,which causes many health problems.sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many companies are producing products that contain high levels of carbohydrate. In recent years, many people prefer to have sweet foods. Although, of this, case many people are suffering from various health problems like obesity, high blood sugar and heart diseases, rising prices of these products are not a good way to control these diseases.

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Nowadays many people believe that children should be taught history in schools, however, others argue that children should learn subjects that are more helpful for modern everyday life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Today, some people argue schools should give history knowledge for children, however, others believe children should learn more useful subject in mordern life. Personally, I agree teachers should provide crucial subjetc that could help children with mordern life. In this essay I will explain both views and give my opinion.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation .why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self employed ?

Most contemporary economies allow such a model of employment as being self employed , which appears very tempting for many . However, still the vast majority of people oot for being employed in a company and do not set up their own business . This essay will attempt to look into the key factors as to why people may prefer entrepreneurship and major drawbacks to it .

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Because many children are not able to learn foreign languages, schools should not force them to learn foreign languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Learning many languages could bring lot of beneficial for children in the future. However there is a debatable view that believes when children cannot cope with the progress of studying foreign languages, then school should not do anything on it. Personally, I do not think so. I believe that school have to act as a leader in forcing children in a good way to develop more abilities in languages. Within this essay, I will explain more both views in pros and contras, and support it with examples.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the inhabitants of some countries embrace a considerable number of young adults in comparison with the number of older people. these circumstances can be detrimental. However, have a more creative Society increases country efficiency and consider as a great potential in the economic development can be pointed as its advantages.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals . Others says that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

Unrestrained exploitation of natural resources has squandered our planet beyond recognition. As a result, many different living organisms have become extinct. While some say that this is the biggest challenge staring at our generation, others opine that there are other issues which require more attention. For instance, climate change, global warming, and many more challenges require an equal amount of thought and concern.

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