IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 961

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Young people do not spend their holidays and weekend doing outdoor activities like hiking and climbing in the natural environment. Why? And how to encourage them to go out?

Youngsters often do not spend their vacations and weekends doing outdoor activities in the natural environment because of several reasons, however, there are some beneficial actions to encourage them to go out.

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Being celebrities such as famous sports person or celebrities bring problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

In this cosmopolitan world, it seems that everyone wants to be famous in order to live a luxurious lifestyle. However, despite the financial benefits, I still believe that the drawbacks of being famous outweigh the advantages.

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You don’t need a teacher to learn English. All you need are a dictionary and a grammar book. Do you agree with this? If not give reasons. If you agree give reasons.

It is believed by some people that English can be learnt by just using the grammar book and a dictionary to give meanings of unknown words that they may come across while learning and they are also of opinion, that no assistance of a teacher is required in this entire language learning process. I have a partial agreement with this idea, as in my opinion, a person who knows the language well is always needed to help people intending to learn the language with their mistakes.

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some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some infomation is too important or too valueable to be shared freely.

Some people think that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, corporation and the academic industry. Others believe that some knowledge is too critical or too useful to let everyone knows it. I will discuss both statements and give my own opinion.

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Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, should all youngsters be required to do volunteer work outside of school times to support their local community, and would this be beneficial for both the individual teenager and humanity as a whole is still a subject of debate. In my opinion, I firmly believe that it’s compulsory for young people to take part in charity work.

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Some people believe the purpose of education should be helping the individual to become useful for society, while others believe it should help individuals to achieve their ambitions. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is undeniable that the education system helps to cultivate individuals of high calibre. While some people argue that education should aim to raise adults who are valuable for society, others believe that education ought to facilitate learners in realising their dreams. While I concur that education should make it easier for individuals to achieve their goals, its priority should be serving society.

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some people believe that air travel should be restricted becouse it causes serious pollution and uses up the world's fuel resources. do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that air travel causes pollution and uses a lot of fuel, but I hardly agree that air travel should be restricted. I believe that restricting air travel would solve some problems, but it leads to some other pervasive problems.

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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

Nowadays,the number of eldercare homes is increasing rapidly all over the world. In the UK majority of the elder population are living in eldercare homes and the staff including nurses are taking care of them. In some special cases the government has to pay for this service but the family members have a responsibility to pay for their parents.

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In many countries around the world, young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples.

Nowadays leaving the parent's house after finishing high school is becoming more prevalent among the young generation around the world. They might rent an independent flat or rent a place with their friends. Although this phenomenon has its own two sides, I believe that its positive side clashes with the negative part. I will discuss two reasons for my belief in this essay.

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Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

Crime is unquestionably one of the most prevailing and worrying aspects of any society, and its prevention should be taken seriously. atrocity prevention can be executed in various ways, firstly through a sustained honest presence in the community and secondly through international aid.

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Living In A Country Where You Have To Speak A Foreign Language Can Cause Serious Social And Practical Problems

The fact is that, when people live in a country where they must to communicate in a foreign language, it can cause some social problems, like practical. I agree with this view, but iI also have some thoughts about it.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Technology is developing rapidly day by day. Because of that, people who live in one country can enjoy the cultures of all other areas without considering ages and nationality. I totally agree with this statement and I will discuss further it within this essay.

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Some people hold the opinion that children should obey certain rules made by teachers and parents. Others, however, feel that these rules only limit children’s growth and impact their adult life later. Discuss both opinions and provide your own view.

While some people believe that strict upbringing is good approach to raise a child, others feel that firm rules can influence children negatively. I believe that only a fair amount of rules are needed to keep kids within the frame. In this essay I will discuss some examples were kids should be limited along with areas were they should be given a freedom.

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some people say tht the main environmental probles pf our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are a lot of environmental problems that are engaged in our times that are due to losing particular species of vegetation and animals, and also because of other reasons. Going forward will discuss the reasons for these topic and also my view on this.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own.

The debate around whether it is a good idea that children attend group activities in their leisure time or play by themselves has raged on recently. I, for one, approve of the former belief, and I reckon it would be more beneficial for them. This essay delves into the issue and provides logical reasons before drawing a conclusion.

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Some people today believe that it is acceptable to use physical force to discipline children, but others feel it is completely unacceptable. Discuss this view and give your opinion.

Many opine that exerting physical forces to monitor children is a suitable method and this should be accepted. However ,some people claim that this is extremely wrong as well as unacceptable. From my point of view ,I believe that these ways can not be effective.

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

According to the measurement of a comfortable life, job fulfillment is also included in the researched elements. As a result, finding satisfaction in a job is really such an imperative factor of individual wellbeing.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots, what is your opinion?

It is believed that artificially intelligent robots will eventually replace the entire workforce. While it is possible for mundane work to be carried out by robots, I believe certain jobs requiring human touch will still be performed by people. This essay will discuss some of the tasks that will and will not be taken over by automation.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on the computers?

In this day and age, there are more and more people counting on advanced technology in life. I contend that the future would witness the upward trend in this situation, which bringbrings about drawbacks rather than benefits to the society.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Everything has both sides, the way we teach our kids has no exception. Many people believe that parents have the ability to teach their daughter/son by themself, but others think that the learning process should be done by professionals.

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