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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university to work or to travel.Do the advantages of this outweigh this disadvantages.

It is believed that having a gap year before attend to colleges would be better than direct attending to there without it. There are both merits and demerits and I think the benefits would greater than the drawbacks.

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

higher education recently has become more critical than ever before. While some students may prefer to study at local universities, others do take the abroad colleges choice. In this essay i will discuss both sides' benefit although i do find myself belonging to the latter group.

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Some people argue that because the internet makes it so easy for children to access facts, schools should not focus on teaching facts. Instead, they should focus on developing children’s skills and potential, and their relationships with other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, the total access to any kind of information is able through internet and anyone could get any kind of information that he or she needs. Therefore, there is an opinion that schools have not to teach students to know the fact but to teach skills, communication and realize their potential. I mostly agree with that opinion but I think that learning of facts is an important part of education.

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some people think the internet has brought people closer together, while other think it has isolated the community members. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nobody would dispute the fact that the internet today plays a significant role in uniting people across the globe. With the immense advances in technology these days, individuals can use the internet and be in touch with their near and dear ones. However, there are some society members who believe the internet is isolating a part of the society. In my opinion, I strongly advocate the idea that the internet has brought people closer together, but, it should be used judiciously.

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According to one survey, the life expectancy of people is increasing in developed countries. What problem will this cause for individuals and society?

According to one study , it is shown that in developed countries people are asumed to live more than before .in my opinion, this situation have bothe disadvantages and advantages that depends on how they use thier lives. It has some drawbacks ,namely people have to deal with more dificulties and sadness in life , society force with more problemes in taking care of ealderly individuals . However, this has some advantages that will be discussed in the following essay.

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in the past,most people worked for small businesses,while more people now work for large businesses. what are the advantages and disadvantages of working for large businesses?

There is no denying the fact that the phenomenon major number of individuals are working for small industries from the last few years ,while in the present multitude of folks are prefer to do jobs in large industries.One school of thought opinion that it is worthless ,however others consider that a couple of problems also occur because of the same.Although this has a plethora of merits yet numerous demerits are also there which will be elaborated in upcoming paragraphs.68

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Nowadays in many countries household waste e.g food packaging is increasing day by day. What are the causes for that? How can this problem be solved?

The amount of extravagance used by people is increasing alarmingly. Roughly 50 tonnes of household waste is being produced every second, and this number is projected to double by 2030. I think that household dissipation is rising due to the growing number of population and this problem can be solved by awaring people about its drawbacks.

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Some people believe that Art gives our lives meaning and purpose. Others believe that it is merely a distraction from real life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are those who feel that art enriches the lives of those who engage in it. In my opinion art has important cultural lessons to teach us ,however it does cost a great deal of money.

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Today more people are traveling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

The majority of people decided to travel in many eras. They believed that travelling is the way for ran out of their problems. So, there are many advantages and differences between travelling in the past and now.

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Opinion Some people think that family members are more important than friends, what extend do you agree or disagree?

Family is our first shelter and love, but we inevitably meet some new people later, that are friends. What part of our life should we appreciate more? I reckon that both points have their own arguments, hence, we finally find ourselves in a circle of family and mates. But let us expatiate over these disputable points.

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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this modern era, the education system has changed in many different aspects. Looking into homework ,for example, there is always a debate whether given by teachers is useful or letting kids reach home without school-related work. This essay will discuss both views.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this obesity? How could it be tackled?

In this modern world, health becomes crucial to live in harmony while the number of diseases and the rate of occurrence are rising. One of the hazardous diseases is obesity which can be found on both adults and children. In this essay, i will present the reasons affecting this rate to rise up dramatically and how can we handle this.

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Some people think secondary/high school students should study only literature from their own countries.Others however believe students should study literature from all around the world. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In the modern era, the teaching literature is very vital part of our society. Literature is important part of every country. In this context, some individuals believe that student must be encouraged to study literature such as novels, play and poetry from their own home country; while other believe that it is important for every pupil to learn literature from other country. This essay will discuss why studying literature from their own country has its benefits, but why working on all over the literature is ultimately superior.

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Today, many people do not have time to spend with their families in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

It is unfortunately very common and even normal today, that it is difficult for people in urbanised areas to allocate enough time to spend with their beloved ones. Sadly, this situation creates a literal pandemic of unhappiness and dissatisfaction in life. Despite that there are too many root causes of these negative factors to fix all of them, it is possible to change the scheduling habits, which would help improve the mental well-being of inhabitants of large cities.

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ome people think that the main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as television, friends, and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion

The above line chart provides information about four different cafes in terms of revenue over a twelve-month period in New York.

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Recent figure of youngster's crime rate has increased in many cities of the world. Give reasons and solutions to this problem.

It is undeniable there's a high rate of crime exhibited by the younger ones in the recent past years. This essay will elaborate on the reasons and consequences, discuss the possible solutions to such outbursts.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is widely considered that homeschooling is the right strategy to child education, while the essentiality of going to an actual school is also a belief that is common. Even though undoubtedly some succeed in creating a stress free and highly efficient learning program tailored for their childs’ needs, I believe that there is no alternative to proper socialization for the children and group classes that only the schools can offer.

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Salary is the main consideration when choosing a job.To what extent do you agree or disagree with that idea?

It is true that the amount of salary is a necessary factor in considering a job. However undeniably, the size of the salary offered is not exactly the most important. While I disagree with this idea, I also think that salary may be an important motivating factor for youths who are lazy at work.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own

Some people are of view that that they should embrace a difficult as it is, others argue that they should strive to improve their condition. I believe in latter opinion because no matter how hard the situation is, we should always find a room for improvement. This essay will discuss both point of views.

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Topic: some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play\ with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the children of having a large number of toys?

It is true that most parents buy a huge number of games for their offspring.It has many merits as well as demerits.

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