IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1566

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some countries, only few young people go to classical music concerts or play classical music. Why is it happening? Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more?

Nowadays, there is a downward trend of the young generation intention for classical music. In my opinion, I believe that can be explained by the appearance of different new kinds of music and instrument while a high level of musical required to be able to listen and understanding the classic one. However, youngsters should be equipped some basic knowledge about it and those who are talented toward classical music should be invested and developed well.

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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

It is being considered outdated to have a specific course. Study should never end throughout life; one should have many careers to make money, as per the new movement.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford.What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem

Some people can be extravagant spenders when it comes to shopping. They usually buy those items that are not useful and are seldom affordable. One reason for this behaviour is that they were spoiled by their parents when they were growing up. One possible solution is identifying this addiction and countering it through therapy and counselling.

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Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For years, reading books has been a dominated way of entertainment for children. However, with the popularity of various electronic devices, children can also spend their leisure time watching TV and playing computer games. I partly agree with the view held by some people that reading stories in books is a better use of time than watching TV or playing computer games.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

We are all familiar with the effect of fast food on our body. Eating ample fast food is greatly injurious to our health. Even it drastically increases our weight. We know that overweight is harmful to our body. Fast food may seem delicious to most of the person, however we should consider about having a healthy life.

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Major companies use sports events to promote their product. Some people think it has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Big businesses utilize sports competitions to let know their goods to people. Although ,I agree with the fact that these practices may have a bad impact on this field, I think that are fundamental to allow teams to grow.

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Newspapers are less important nowadays because we have up-to-date access to the news on the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, an internet has become more popular and most people are using day to day for many purpose and they can get news from the digital portal instead of newspaper as a result, the newspaper is less popular among society. I strongly agree with this statement for the following reasons.

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For many, shopping malls are great places to spend their leisure time and meet othe.People, however, in the past mostly visited shopping malls when necessary.To what extent do you think this is a negative trend.

In these days, shopping complexes are majorly found in many cities and they have served many purposes, more than just selling products.People in the past usually visited malls to purchase things, whereas now it has become a source of entertainment, fun and to spend spare time during weekends.In my opinion, I consider that these plazas have brought positive outcomes by serving masses in a range of ways.

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In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner. Discuss both systems and state which one do you think is better. Give reasons and relevant examples for your answer.

Marriage is an unforgettable event in everyone’s life.it is believed by some individuals that , all the arrangements regarding marriages should be done by guardians, while others perceive that individuals should have the right to select their companions. This essay will examine both the arguments and draws a logical conclusion in the end.

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Computers are replacing humans. Do you agree or disagree?

The advent of technology has brought machines into our daily life.Due to this, there comes a statement that human beings are being replaced by computers.Personally, I can only partially agree with this assertion. I will elaborate my reasons in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Other think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own safe, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer

There are people who believe that universities should help their students to developed the skills that they will need to start their careers, many others consider that the main goal of a university should be to provide their student with general knowledge without caring if that will be useful or not in their future jobs.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

It has become apparent in recent years that health problems among a number of people have been caused by getting little or absence of physical activities during the work time. This is mainly because of a long commute and lack of free money for doing sport. There are a number of effective solutions which should be implemented to tackle the issue.

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Nowadays more and more business meetings and business training are taking place online. Do the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?

We are living in the information age, the development of technology devices are helping all aspects of our daily lives, which is conducive for people to have access to the Internet. Recent days, many businesses and companies organize training courses on the Internet or online. Although this issue has both advantages and disadvantages, personally I believe the disadvantages of the development are less significant in comparison with the advantages

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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it so difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness ?

Happiness is a indespencable emotional factor that everyone usually persue in their daily life. Practically, it is very hard to define because the meaning varies from person to person. Also, there are many important factors contributes in achievement of this emotion.

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Language teacher should concentrate only on giving positive feedback when students do good work rather than on criticizing their bad work. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Language professor should focus only on good feedback if students do great work while other think that they have also give negative feedback when undergraduates do not good tasks. This essay agrees that observations are fundamental for the development of language skills. Firstly, to reach an high level of knowledge and good scores in language tests a person must be able to reduce all the small errors. Secondly, only when a scholar recognises mistakes can really improve and not repeat the errors in the future.

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Companies should encourage employees who work in a high position to leave at the age of 55 in order to give opportunities to the new generation.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples.

In this contemporary era, youngsters are considered as the future of the nation. It is believed by some intellectuals that, working organisations should motivate their workers who held companies top position to abandon at the age of 55 in order to provide more scopes to young employees. I completely agreed with this notion and reasons behind my inclination are articulated in trail paragraphs.

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Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which do you think is a better educational system?

Nowadays there are schools of which the proram is exclusively designed for student from age 15 while their friends just follow the general educational system. In my opinion, the former system could motivate well the talented student while the latter one allows teenagers to equip themselves knowledge of various fields of life. Therefore, it is necessary to parallelly operate two system while categorying gifted student depending on their potential and need.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some nations, children are often advised that hard work makes everything possible. Although there are a number of drawbacks involved this issue, the benefits of it are by no means negligible.

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is argued that earning lots of money has more significance to people than being content in their work.This essay totally disagrees with that statement.I believe that people are increasingly concerned about the risk of stress-related ill-health frequently experienced by people in highly paid positions and they care more about feeling fulfilled at work.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

The given chart compares the details of the underground rail network in major six cities.

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