IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1591

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subject like Science and Technology are more important that History. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Studying different topics at school is widely offered in many countries. Although history is considered as one of the most vital subjects by some individuals, others believe that school children should learn science as well as technology rather than history nowadays. In my opinion, based on living in a fast-paced era, learning science and technology is much more important to be considered in school curriculum.

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Many animals are endangered.So me think that the government is responsible while other think that individual should act.Do you agree or dis agree?

There are many animals are critically endangered, due to humans’ activities. There are some people who think that the government is responsible, the opponets consider it is the responsibility of individuals. I, firmly, believe the governmental authority needs to take necessary actions to counteract the issues effectively.

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in some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think are the causes of this ? What solutions can you suggest?

n the modern social young generation is considered as one of the primary issues in human’s life. In connection to this, some share the view that in some nations, it is common for a teenager to work hard, resulting in not having much free time and are facing extraordinary pressure from their study.

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It is a fact that a lot of Vietnamese students go abroad to study every year. However, studying in a foreign country has both advantages and disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, an increasing number of students choose to go to another country for their higher education while studying abroad only has goodpoints, but also badpoints. In this essay, I will explore the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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do you agree that the advantages of cars outweigh the disadvantages?

cars plays a prominant role in daily life as we see almost people have their own cars. although cars have some concsequences but according to me cars advantages can outweigh the disadvantages.

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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?

Always have been existed those parents, who put their children under more pressure than it would be necessary, but in these days maybe it is even more common. We might guess what could stand behind this behaviour, however, a psychologist surely could give a better explanation. As I see, it has a negative effect on the development of the children in many ways.

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Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most of the people believe that it is the responsibility of government officials to take care of the environment just because of the reason that a person has no power to protect the environment. I fully disagree in this statement.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Museum is a historical and educational place visited by people of all ages, some of which are opened to the public free of charge while some ask visitors to pay entry fee. I agree that charging museum visitors have more merits than demerits.

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In many countries schools have severe problems with students behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Schools are the center of learning and the assemblies for children and teenagers. One of the numerous problems of schools is students behavior, which are very common and we have seen for a long time. This essay is going to state the causes and the solutions of this problems.

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Rising University fees and limited employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and should only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. (To what extent do you agree or disagree)

Although increasing educational fees and unemployment is a major concern for an enormous number of students and fresh graduates, it does not mean universities should give up on arts related subjects, as this issue can be solve by the government and universities together. Therefore, I wholeheartedly, disagree with the statement, and subjects like philosophy and history must be teach in universities.

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It is important for children to learn the different between right and wrong at an early age . Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children ?

The more children learn right and wrong at an early age , the more successful they can be in future . Also , punishment can be profilablte for them in this way . Without any doubt I agree with this idea . In the following essay , the reason for my agreement and the best punishment for children will be discussed .

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People today still greatly value artists even in this age of advance science and technology. why do you think this is? are the arts as important to people's lives as science and technology?

Although, there has been great success in the improvement of science and technology the importance of artists among the group of people have not been lost, and I think they even value them more than the technology itself. The reason behind this can be because of the creativity of the artists, and the emotions that their work can bring out in people.

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Some people think that children should not be given homework everyday, while others believe that they must get homework everyday in order to be successful at school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In school life, some scholars believe that kids should take homework every single day, This is because that extra study makes children recall information easily and digest those materials smoothly. In contrast, others consider studying is a part of the daylight and a child shouldn't receive such tasks regularly so he can have some time to play, relax and enjoy his life. In this essay, I will share both points of views and highlight why teachers shouldn't give the students educational duties every day.

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The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is true that many older people believe in traditional values but often seems that compatible with the needs of the younger generation. While I agree that some traditional thoughts are outdated, I believe that many traditional ideas are still useful.

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many people believe finishing university education is the most effective way to get a good employment while others believe having certain experiences and soft skills is more essential. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of views and express my own opinion.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Getting little to no workout during the day or free time can result in having health problems due to the fact they work they can't find the spare time to put into working out. And some steps can be taken to prevent this from occurring.

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Many People Believe That Social Networking Sites Have A Huge Negative Impact On Both Individuals And Society

Nowadays, internet has revolutionized the world. It is considered by many that social networking platform like facebook has many negative effects on both people and society. While I agree there may be some drawbacks of social networking sites to the society, I believe it comes with many beneficial impacts to people as well.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

It is true that punishment do not always deter criminals from committing more crimes. There are various reasons why offenders repeatedly break the law, but governments could certainly take steps to address this issue.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In the modern era, the population is increasing rapidly which leads to bringing a huge amount of natural disasters like wastage of fresh water, global warming, different kind of pollutions and health issues. Some people believe that the reduction of wildlife is the biggest problem in the present time while others argued that this is not the main concern and we have to deal with other major natural barriers. I tend to believe that retaining of flora and fauna is the most important field of the current time.

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It is seen that older adults are not given enough respect and facilities in many countries. What could be reason for this? What are the effects of this?

In a number of countries, the elderly are not treated with deference and not afforded suitable living accommodations. This essay will elaborate that this may be attributable to the poor upbringing and lack of awareness of the younger generation and will likely result to the neglect and deteriorating health of these geriatrics.

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