IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1587

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In many country, a few young people read newspaper or listen news in TV. What are the causes of it? What are the solutions?

News is one of the ways to know and learn about things happening around us and in the world. Journalist are the people who summarise about all the events happened through a single platform like newspaper, web, apps and through television. It is certainly important for everyone to access one of the sources to read news. In the essay, I will discuss about the probable causes that why only a few young people read news.

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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

Even though many wealthy nations have more than a half of their workforce made up of women, it is common for companies to employ men in manager positions. It is argued that corporations should offer part of this opportunities to women. This essay totally agrees with that statement because diversity in the work environment results in more profits for the business and this practice avoid discrimination against women.

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Some people say traditional celebrations are getting less popular. What are the causes of this, and how can we make them become popular again?

It is undoubtedly true that modern activities are going to rival traditional celebrations. It is believed by some that a myriad of traditional events are losing their popularity at an alarming rate. In this essay, I am going to discuss some of the reasons why traditional festivals are becoming less attractive for some people and how to tackle this matter.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is always a conflicting view whether persons should go with bad situation or make efforts to overcome them.This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and express my view.

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Some people believe that smart phones are destroying social interaction today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the rapidly changing world, the mobile phones have become an inevitable part of daily routine. While some people argue that the usage of these mobile phones have deprecated the interactions between family and friends. However, others quibble from them. Even though, mobile phones are connecting distant people, but I somewhat agree that the smart phones continue to disturb the social gatherings,

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• Some people think that the internet has brought people together while others think that people have become more isolated now.” Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is true that people have different views about an effect of using the internet in our life.A number of people opine it has brought isolation , whilst others believe it has brought us together . Personally , I support the latter view.

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Most societies has its homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree ?

Every country, even a developed country, still has its homeless community. Some people believed that giving them a meal rather than cash is better. Personally agree with both sides because of their owns effect. The essay below will show the benefits and drawbacks in both aspects.

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Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings.Do you think wealth is the best measure of success ? What makes a successful person ?

When talking about success, we often think of people who are rich or affluent.Some believe that success is based on wealth, personally I disagree with the idea that opulence is the key measure of being successful,because I would argue that other factors are equally important.

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Some people feel that certain workers like nurses,doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. How far do you agree? What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

A number of people think that some low-level workers such as nurses, doctors and teachers make money in small quantities by government as opposed to other types of workers like actors or company bosses who are paid with big amount although their work's degree is not so significant. Thus, it is opined that the former types of workers are paid more than the latter. Even though I almost agree with the point, I believe that the latter sorts of workers are also important to live. In my view, the government must pay depending on the level of difficulty of working.

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some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a good job straight after school. Discuss both view and give your opinion

to achieve a good successful career, It is believe that going the university or college is the best route. While getting a good straight after school is also a good idea. This essay I would tend to studying at university or college

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In many countries, sports stars earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that sports stars earn too much money, while others claim that they deserve their high salaries. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The debate over the salaries of renowned sports people has been controversial hitherto. Whilst some consider them overpaid, I believe the amount of money they make is fully justifiable.

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Every culture, throughout time, has recorded its history in one way or another. In what ways can history be passed on to the next generation? Why is the history important to society?

Throughout decades, nationalities have created and wrote down their history as evidence its existence and activities. As we know It has been transferred in a lot of ways such as talks, engraving, parchment and books, but in last centuries the most common and convenient way is considered books. To be more educated it is essential for each society to save and learn its history.

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Every culture, throughout time, has recorded its history in one way or another. In what ways can history be passed on to the next generation? Why is the history important to society?

Throughout decades, nationalities have created and wrote down its history as an evidence its existence and activities. As we know It has been transferred a lot of ways such as talks, engraving, parchment and books, but in last centuries the most common and convenient way is considered books. To be more educated it is essential for each society to save and learn its history.

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Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Noise, which often leads to disputes between neighbors, is undoubtedly undesirable for many people who want to live in peace. Some people believe that the government should issue strict policies to regulate the noise produced by a single person. Despite the fact that it presents a myriad of benefits, the drawbacks are far greater.

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More and more people these days are traveling overseas. Do the advantages of increased international tourism outweigh any of its disadvantages?

Travelling abroad is one of most desired dreams of workers. To relish a good drink by the shore just to relax or to visit museums and know other cultures have rose the number of overseas visitants. In this essay, I will outline the drawbacks of these activities and explain why I believe that tourism should be done carefully.

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In the world of the internet, people write product reviews of products and services. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Over the past years, the internet has becone a decision maker for some people before purchasing their desired goods. They filter the information by reading product reviews both positive and negative experience from the buyers in the internet. In my opinion, this micro blogging trend in product review section builds positive impacts to the buyers and the sellers. I will examine my reasons in the below paragraphs.

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Some say that hostel life is a must for a child to learn most practical lessons of life, which it would never be able to learn at home. Do you agree? Would you send your child to hostel.

Hostel life is the best part of a teenagers life. In hostel, they can learn the most practical lessons of life, which are difficult to learn while staying with parents. I've spent 4 years of my life in a hostel and I love to send my child to a hostel for graduation.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on every day matters is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.

It is obvious that people do not recycle their household waste. Also i support this idea that the government should pass a new law which will obligate people to recycle their wastes. Moreover i believe that the government can also encourage people by giving them presents or discounts.

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Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Music has no barrier and boundries. It has been played all over the world by every society and culture. Some individuals opine that music has a lot of benefits to everyone. However, others opine that it brings negative effect on society and culture. In the forthcoming paragrahps, it will discuss both statements and tell my perspective.

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Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities.What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

Not surprisingly,nowadays,accountless number of adolescents are migrating their domiciles in the countryside for studying or working.This issue has become a major concern and the reasons are varied for this phenomenon.I wholeheartedly believe that this migration has more merits than demerits for a number of factors.

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