IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1665

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Advertisement of snacks and toys have a great impact on children and their parents. So, the advertisements to children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

In this technology driven era, marketing ads are playing crucial role in making choices related to kids. Especially in category of children’s food and games, guardian could find innumerable ads, which are in fact having negative impacts on kids and their parent’s financial plans. This essay will discuss how telemarketing affecting the people and the society. I concord with the fact that lawmakers have to take measure in order to stop such ads, which are having worse effects on the younger generation and their caretakers.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think about the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

In today’s world, obesity is considered one of the most dangerous health problem which is increasing day by day especially in developed countries such as the USA. With the increasing body weights,people have started to become less healthy and immobile which leads to other health conditions and it is obvious that unhealthy eating habits and technological advancements are to blame at first for this and I will outline the measures which can be taken to prevent this problem below.

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Some people say that it is necessary to possess talent to become a successful sportsperson. Others, however, believe that hard work and practice are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are different opinions about whether it is a talent or hard work that contributes more to a sports person’s success. While some people believe that it is innate skills that play a key role in achieving success, I agree with those who say that success in sports is only possible through consistent efforts. In this essay, I will discuss both opinions and explain why I agree with the latter view.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Transportation is the only way to migrate from one plays to another, also it has major contribution in countries economy as it is used by local public. Many countries spend alot of their money in modernize the railway lines and its facility. while, some believe that, improving existing public transport system would be good option to make it more reliabe for people. In this essay i will discuss both points and also give my opinion.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Over a decade or so, due to continuous growth in computer technology there is a drastic increase of its usage in people’s life regularly. Though technology is bringing advantage like easy learning options, it also has some drawbacks such as effects of people’s health with excessive usage of it. I believe there are more advantages of using computers in life, but aggressive usages of it could leads to health issues.

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In recent years, more and more people tend to live individually. What are the causes of this trend? Does this have a positive or negative effect on society?

Modern lives have changed over the years and more individuals want to spend their life alone. Due to lack of oppurtunity in the home town more people move out of the their respective cities and cost of living is pretty expensive in the metropolitian towns which force them to live alone . This might have some negative impact on society as adult cant take care of old parents and need to give them to old age for well being .

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Surveys show that many people believe most jobs in the future will be done at home.Do you agree or disagree ?

Due to the accelerating pace of modernization, people have been influenced by the different ways of pursuing their jobs. Therefore, research indicates that in the coming years' a large proportion of people will choose to telecommute. In my opinion, people will definitely consider the option of work from home, but despite this, there will be still a few professions which need human presence rather than a digital environment.

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A long-distance flight consumes as much fuel as a car consumes in several years time, and causes the same amount of pollution as cars. So some people think we should abandon none essential flights and it is more efficient than restricting the car. To what extent do you agree or dis agree?

It is sometimes argued that unnecessary air travel should be completely stopped instead of restricting road transport as both these modes of transport use the same amount of fuel and generates as much pollution. This essay disagrees that nonessential aeroplane travel needs to be banned. Firstly, people need to go to another country for tourism as most of the borders can’t be crossed by road and secondly, air travel is a source of income for many in different ways

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping on line.

It is true that enormous people prefer shopping online than to buy what they need at supermarkets. In this essay, I will shed some light on both benefits and drawback of this issue.

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Do Sports & Games Create Disturbance In Students’ Life. Discuss.

The discussion on whether sports and games create disturbance in student's life is a debatable topic and people around the globe are divided in their opinions. The subject attracts numerous views and remains a hot topic among the people of concern. In this essay, I shall scrutinize both sides of view by providing relevant examples and explanations without drawing any conclusion.

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Studies have shown that in many countries the income gap between the rich and poor is ever increasing. What problems can arise from this situation and what could be done to address this situation?

There is no doubt that the gap present clearly today between the poor and the rich is getting wider by time and is affecting our way of life.

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Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages ?

A few employers compel their employees to dance to their tunes with their never-ending workload, even on a holiday. This gruesome approach seems to be opted by one’s bossdue to the overall company growth. The thought pinching my cerebral area is that such a development harshly impacts the mental peace of the dueker; bypassing any upsides this process might have.

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Many people believe that increasing levels of violence on television and in films is having a direct result on levels of violence in society. Others claim that violence in society is the result of more fundamental social problems such as unemployment. How much do you think society is affected by violence in the media?

Some people argue that there are increasing violence problems happened due to bad actions and examples shown on TV. However, others believe that this is caused directly by basic social problems, such as loss of jobs or medical cares. I really think that these two reasons make influences on issue, whereas, they play different roles.

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The Importance of car and airplanes in modern life give example

Automobiles become a necessity of life . many people believe that the Present time of motor cars and planes help to save time and money . In my perspective I have shared my views on flights and four-wheelers on the Upcoming paragraph .

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The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on the other planets. Some people think that the government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of the public. To what extent do you agree?

It is clear that nowadays there is a staggering amount of money being spent to finance research with the finality of finding out different types of life on other planets. There is no consensus on whether the government is spending money on a proper subject or there are more important topics such as public problems, that no receiving the proper treatment can directly affect the lives of several people. I fully agree with the latter statement, and in this essay, and I will support my view with examples.

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Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spent most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world. How important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

because of the modern life with a great contact with technology, children have been spent they time playing video games, on social media, watching television or Netflix,also, they stay at home for a long time, in that essay I'm going to give my point of view giving differents way about why it is important for they do some activities outdoor.

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Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree

plastic bags has been a polemic topic around the world, it was created many years ago to solve a problem, but nowadays we know a lot of problems that it has been done to the environment, in that essay I'm going to explain what I think about it giving my point of view.

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Nowadays, many schools find it profitable to sell unhealthy food and sugary drinks to students during lunch breaks. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Needless to say, education has become a business instead of working for the development of the nation. Above that, the canteen run by the schools stock the cheap variety of unhealthy food and high sugar content drinks, which is creating a negative impact towards the health of upcoming generation. The details are discussed in the below paragraphs.

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Some cities create extra housing by building tall buildings. Other cities do this by building on wide areas of land. Which do you think is the best solution to the problem of housing?

While some cities prefer to build tall houses, others create buildings by doing it on wide areas of land. Personally, I opine that the high-rise building should be preferred since, this can preserve nearby land for other uses and spend less time for daily trips.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? (IELTS 10, AC)

In this globalized world, trading and buying have become so affordable and accessible, thanks to the latest technology, that people can purchase whatever they want from anywhere they want. In my perspective, this phenomenon has a plethora of advantages and a lot of potential benefits which makes it a most positive development of the century.

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