IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1666

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spent most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world. How important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

because of the modern life with a great contact with technology, children have been spent they time playing video games, on social media, watching television or Netflix,also, they stay at home for a long time, in that essay I'm going to give my point of view giving differents way about why it is important for they do some activities outdoor.

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Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree

plastic bags has been a polemic topic around the world, it was created many years ago to solve a problem, but nowadays we know a lot of problems that it has been done to the environment, in that essay I'm going to explain what I think about it giving my point of view.

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Nowadays, many schools find it profitable to sell unhealthy food and sugary drinks to students during lunch breaks. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Needless to say, education has become a business instead of working for the development of the nation. Above that, the canteen run by the schools stock the cheap variety of unhealthy food and high sugar content drinks, which is creating a negative impact towards the health of upcoming generation. The details are discussed in the below paragraphs.

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Some cities create extra housing by building tall buildings. Other cities do this by building on wide areas of land. Which do you think is the best solution to the problem of housing?

While some cities prefer to build tall houses, others create buildings by doing it on wide areas of land. Personally, I opine that the high-rise building should be preferred since, this can preserve nearby land for other uses and spend less time for daily trips.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? (IELTS 10, AC)

In this globalized world, trading and buying have become so affordable and accessible, thanks to the latest technology, that people can purchase whatever they want from anywhere they want. In my perspective, this phenomenon has a plethora of advantages and a lot of potential benefits which makes it a most positive development of the century.

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Some think that economic progress is completely dependent on the country’s success, while others believe that other factors are also important. What are the different factors contributing to the success of a country? Do you believe that only one factor is important, compared to others?

Some people believe that a country's success soley depends on its economic growth but others believe there are other factors that contribute to create a successful country. This essay will discuss about two main factors that contribute to a growing economy and discuss whether one factor is the key when compared to others.

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Some people think that in order to produce a happy society, it is necessary to ensure that there is only a small difference between the earnings of the richest and the poorest. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The economical inequality is so evident in our world. There are some people think that it is better to cap the salary of the rich, by doing this, the residents would be happier. I do not agree with this standpoint since this can have severe repercussions to the nation.

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In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the Internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development?

Modern life-style has changed after the invention of computers and internet. Nowadays it is easy to work and do shopping through internet without any physical interaction. I personally believe there are both positive and negative outcome in this trend. Throughout this essay I will discuss it.

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Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, environmental problems is one of the most serious concerns in the world, however, there are few people pay attention to. Many people think it belongs to the official's task and even others' responsibilities. I really think this is a very common phenomenon in medern societies,

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Nowadays, people in some countries can choose to live and work anywhere they want because of the improvement of the transportation and communication technologies. Discuss the benefits and the drawbacks of the phenomenon.

Due to the development of airline industry and social media, people can meet and communicate with their families from overseas easily. Hence, increasing number of population decided to settle down in a developed nation instead of staying in their motherland which happens frequently among developing countries’ citizens. It is no doubt that this trend brings both merits and disadvantages.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and other are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, children have faced a lot of pression on school and other environment, so it is common some of them start to practice more sports or learn how to play an instrument. However, it is remarkable that for a few young people these activities are easier than for others. Although the discussion that some people are born with more talent have increased, on the other hand, a lot of people believe that every person can be taught to learn some exercises or instrument.

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Some people think it would be a good ideia for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with opinion? Desribe the skills a person need to be a good parent.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people have discussed on reformulating children’s education. According these groups, schools should focus on teaching personal skills, instead academics ones. A great example would be finance classes and also how to become a great parent in a future situation. On this case, first of all, a kind of pattern needs to be tought, before elaborating a formal subject. In addition to it, it is necessary to understand if there is really a need to evolve on this issue.

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In the past, knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded to the internet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a fact, that in the modern world now the most useful information source is the Internet, rather than books, as it was years before. In my opinion, this is a positive influence, as it has the obvious more benefits than drawbacks.

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Some feel executives in large companies should receive high salaries while others think they are paid too much compared to ordinary workers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many believe that it is honest that the top managers and main officers at the companies earn a lot, while the regular employees earn not enough compare to them. In my opinion, it is an adequate thing to pay the high wage to the people who directs the company due to the experience and knowledge the executives have, even if it seems unreasonable.

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Some people believe that is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too importat or valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

wheather to share a data or not solely depends on the owner of that data. Many people consider that it is helpful to give out adequate or detailed information in scientific surveys, business and scholastic world. However, there is an equally voiced another perspective which claims that some records are too vital or relevant to be given at a zero cost. In my opinion, sharing information can eradicate ignorance and sharing it freely can devalue it and make people lazy. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the arguments further and put forward my opinion as well before drawing a conclusion.

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It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?

It is suitable for little ones to be grown up in the rural areas rather than urban. I disagree with this statement because metropolitan surroundings provide them better education, health and employment facilities and in country, jobs are not much available and human beings are indulged in old customs and practices which leads to poor mental development.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

There are many employees who like to spend excess amount of time at workplace, which let them to have a very few past time. In my opinion, though this trend has some benefits, it is ultimately brings some negetive impacts on the workers health and personal life.

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Scientific and technological advances bring benefits to our life. However, most scientists are no longer able to find the solutions to the problems they have created. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is an irrefutable fact, that science in different areas are developing new tools, new substanvces, every day in all over the world. I agree with the argument in which scientist, most of the time, solve issues that show up in the present time in the planet.

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Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years. Why do you think this has happened? Is it a positive or negative development?

An increasing number of physical stores are closing in nowadays. I think online shopping is the main reason cause this phenomenon, and this trend has both positive and negative impacts to the development.

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some people say that parents shoud encourage thier children to take parts in organized group activities in thier free time,others say that it's important for them to learn how occupay themselves on their own

It’s often said that it’s beneficial for children to participate in organized group activities during their free time. However, many arguments are made against this view. Personally, I think that it’s better for children to hang out with others than staying by their own.

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