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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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nowadays more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face .is it a negative or positive development?

The advancements in sophisticatd technology has been seen in the field of communication. People spend their maximum time by using social networking sites instead of meeting in person. However , according to my opinion this trend could result in a negative development.

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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Social media and various channels on the dish are very common in these days and because of that it is consuming the period of rest and family sitting duration of a person. I accept that, the Colorful high definition graphics attracted human toward episodes, which affect the physical fitness and participating to let them live with these gadgets instead of performing in the physical activities.

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It is a commonly held belief that the death penalty is a good deterrent to prevent heinous crimes. However, others believe that life long sentence is a better deterrent. Discuss both views.

In the last years, the capital punishment effectiveness has been one of the main issues of discussion within the international community, with countries against it and others in favor of it. It's a matter of fact that while some people consider tough punishments, like death penalty, necessary to avoid terrible crimes, others prefer long life imprisonment and are demanding to abolish death penalty.

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It is a commonly held belief that the death penalty is a good deterrent to prevent heinous crimes. However, others believe that life long sentence is a better deterrent. Discuss both views.

In the last years, capital punishment effectiveness has been one of the main issues of discussion within the international community, with countries against it and others in favor of it. It's a matter of fact that while some people consider tough punishments, like death penalty, necessary to avoid terrible crimes, others prefer long life imprisonment and are demanding to abolish death penalty.

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completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is considered by some that being a university graduate is the key to securing a good job,while there are some people who think that it is better to have experience and soft skills.In my opinion,I believe that having university education is essential for academic jobs,while soft skills and experience is more useful for business.

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Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress?

In the modern era, there are many automated conveniences which reduce our time and energy and in turn make lives effortless. Although, some people argue that these tools are making lives tougher and have many drawbacks, I believe that these modern amenities have reduced our stress levels to the large extent.

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Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do, but others think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems well by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In normal, children are expected to obey some rules either at school or at home. Rigorous discipline is sometimes important，but I think that it would have an adverse impact on children’s problem-solving abilities.

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In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?

Thanks to the development of technology and the increase in personal wealth and lifespan of humanity have been prolonged. Although senior citizens can contribute to society, I would agree that the higher ratio of elderly population can bring about some problems.

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All fathers should be entitled to time off from work when their children are born. What is your opinion?

Many companies now allows fathers to take a few days or week off leaves to the time while his wife is pregnant. In my opinion, I think this is a meaningful idea and in further paragraph i am going to explain this.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own.

The trend of current nuclear family with a single child or maximum two children has led to a different lifestyle than that of what we all have grown up. As a part of joint family, we were always surrounded by kids and cousins to indulge in games and entertainment.

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some people think that to be successful,you need to get in university education wheras otgees say it is not true . discusa both views and hive your opinion

Success of a person cannot be defined by their level of education infact it is the hardwork and determination which plays a vital role.some people believe that higher education is the only key to success.However others insists there are various other factors which matters to attain success in life. I completely support the latter viewpiont and will discuss both notions in further paragraphs.

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It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been a controversial topic among general public, since recent past, that the government bodies and preservation institutes should incur an adequate amount of money to reconstruct ancient buildings, however some people think that the authorities needs to consider in investing in state-of-art buildings. As per my understanding, it is equally important to allocate funds, not only for old premises, but also for modern properties.

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It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. Do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsuge in the debate of whether media plays a key role to increase a juvinile crimes or not. However, i, personally belive that the mass media plays a crusial role in the mental growth of any person. In this eesay, i am going to discuss some reasons and solutions to resove this problem.

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Sports programmes are hugely popular on television nowadays. But some people argue that these programmes are to blame for the poor health of many young people who prefer to watch rather than part take in physical activity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In our modern society, phisical activity is gettig more and more important because of the relevance on the quality of life. From one side, obesity is one of the main factors of mortality in developed countries, while younger people practice less sport than in the past. To this extend, some peole are arguing that television have had a bad impact and in particular people prefer watching sport programs rather than do it themself.

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Better driver education for better driving habits is more effective than heavier punishments for driving offences. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Road security has become more and more a relevat issue in our societies and for this reason people are discussing whenever it is necessary to improve the driving preparation, especially for younger generation, or it is better to set up stronger sanctions. Some of them believe that a more accurate driver education is needed to sort out more results. I agree with this positive approach because I think that we need to prevent car accidents.

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it is often said that governments spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife,while there are other problems that are more important? do you agree or disagree?

some people believe that more than half of government's budget are spent on protecting the life of animals instead of major problems.This essay agrees that two third of governments fund are spent on wildlife protection leaving important issues unattended with reasons.

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Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success, while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are these factors?

When it comes to a successful country, the first thing that comes to our mind perhaps will be economic development. Some individuals believe economics is the only criteria that can be used to judge a country’s success, whereas some people think other factors should also be taken into account.

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Some people think that students who don’t take a break in studies between the high school and the university are at disadvantage compared to students who travel and work after high school before further continuing their education. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, in our competitive world, to succeed, knowledge from school and university is not enough. Therefore, students who study from the school to university get fewer benefits and contribute less too, compared to those student who travel or work and get experience and skills before going high. There are two following reasons to support for my opinion. I refer to the group of people who study from school to university as ‘group A’ and the other group – as ‘group B’.

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Some people think that students who don’t take a break in studies between high school and the university are at a disadvantage compared to students who travel and work after high school before further continuing their education. Do you agree or disagree?

Higher education after high school brings better opportunities for those who achieve said level of knowledge. This is one of the main reasons why more people attend university to seek a university degree. There is the assumption that people who travel and work before applying for university have better chances to succeed in life, but in my opinion, this is not game changing.

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Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The advancement of technology has been phenomenal. Two decades ago, one could not have imagined the extent to which it would develop. It has enhanced the entertainment industry, made knowledge more accessible and most importantly, communication easier. Many would argue that technology has hindered face-to-face communication, however, the implications of this extraordinary development cannot be neglected due to this one factor. Therefore, this essay will explore the reasons due to which technology has vastly improved the sociability of humans.

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