IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 220

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, while others think that it can be harmful for children. What are the advantages and disadvantages for children doing paid work?

Although some people suppose that it is advantageous for children to have paid work, others believe that can be dangerous for youngers. Children can learn some neccessary skills, but they suffer from serious problems. On the one hand, doing paid work brings some major benefits for children. Firstly, being employed helps kids understand the value of money. This is a vital lesson to learn as it teaches them not to waste money. Secondly, working is advantageous because children take first steps in learning money management. As for me, now I have a part time job, so I have a small amount of money. I always think of how to spend it properly and how to save it. In short, understanding the value of money and the money management skill are nessessary for children to develop into self-supporting adults and ready the society and work force.

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Many people believe that Art and Music should be dropped from school curriculums in favour of more practical subjects, such as Information Technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this recently years, educational curriculums has become a heated topic among citizens. Some people believe that shcools should prioritize more practical subjects, such as Information Technology rather than non-academic streams, such as Art and Music. In this essay, I will examine both perspectives and provide my opinion supporting shcools to remain Art and Music in their programs.

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Many developed countries are giving financial aid to poor countries. However, this hasn’t solved the problem of poverty in these nations and so other types of help are needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

A lot of wealthy coutries are trying to help the countries in need by giving them monetary aids, but this has not stoping them from being poor, instead they are asking for different kinds of help. I must say that I completely agree with this statement, and I will let you know the reasons in the next paragraphs.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe that they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Experts work location has rison many debates. Some believe that their occupation must be in the same place of education; However, others think that the work area could be differ than their university belongs to. I think altering work place could be completely beneficial, and the reasons for both view will be discussed below.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

In the contrary world, people have gained weight more, and their fitness has changed negatively. These problems can have reasons like consuming unhealthy food and the decline of activity. Also, there are solutions for; like altering food quality and more exercise, which in this essay, the mentioned points, will be considered.

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Some people say that time and money spent on music classes in schools aren’t necessary; instead children should be learning useful subjects such as science and computers. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.

Nowadays children needs multi-talent then only they can survive this competitive world. Most of the schools are teaching to their students some additional class like music during their leisure period. Some people are argued this classes are not important to compare this students must spent to learn about sciences and computers. I am not going to support this statement by giving the below mentioned points.

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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is reducing the amount of maximum speed of vehicles. Others think that other ways exist. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. เริ่ม 12:40

It is believed by some people that reducing the speed of vehicles will affect the road safety in a positive way. On the other hand, there could be other ways to upgrade road safety which includes having seperate roads for different types of vehicles or seperate walking paths for pedestrians or improving public transportation. This essay will discuss both sides and provide its opinion.

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In some countries owning a home rather renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? In many nations, homeownership is considered to be of great significance. This essay discusses the reasons for this and why I believe it brings merits.

In many nations homeownership is often considered to be of great significance. This situation may be attributed to several reasons. Personally, I believe that it is a negative situation. In this essay, I will discuss why this trend is dominated society.

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Many developed countries are giving financial aid to poor countries. However, this hasn’t solved the problem of poverty in these nations and so other types of help are needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

it is indubitable that poverty has become a major concern in some areas around the world particularly third world countries although this is not enough to overcome this issue and therefore some different types of aid should be provided. in my view, i completely agree with opnion that help such as building education centre and medical facilities can make them prosper in future ahead

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Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspapers and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era, there has been a long-standing debate about whether e-books and modern technology will completely replace traditional newspapers and magazines. I agree with this statement because it offers many advantages for our future. However, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this policy.

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Many developed countries are giving financial aid to poor countries. However, this hasn’t solved the problem of poverty in these nations and so other types of help are needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

In this economic distress , Many of the developed countries had been funding the less fortunate countries . This subject had always been debatable in regards to the impact of solving the financial distress . In my opinion , I disagree with this notation and In this essay , I will further elaborate my view , in order to reach a logical conclusion.

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It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people prefer to purchase a lot of cheap clothes, rather than just some more expensive ones. I strongly disagree with this statement mainly due to the wide variety use of different clothes.

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The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some individuals are of opinion that the internet support people to bridge the gap between people, regardless of place we are living in, while some people believe it prevent people to have social communications. From my standpoint, i wholly believe that internet is beneficial, since it help users to broden their horizon and . This essay will expound upon this by giving compelling reasons and practical examples.

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Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

From the dawn of civilization, Punishing a criminal person has been a matter of debate. In this respect, some experts argue that fixed punshiment should be used to every crimes, while others believe that every case has its own case and there will be a different motivation or comitment for it. I am in favour of former argument.

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It is believed that the education system is the most critical factor to the development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this belief?

Education has long been recognized as a cornerstone of social progress, shaping not only individual futures but also the collective advancement of the nation. It is considered that the education system is essential for the advancement of a country. I completely agree with this viewpoint because an education populace drives economic growth and fosters innovation.

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An increasing trend nowadays is for young adults to play computer games. some people say this is negative development . Discuss and give your opinion.

In current generation, all age groups are taking benefits from the technological advancement of 20th century. Despite, the countless benefits of these technologies, it is believed to have a negative impact over young adults. In this essay, I will discuss both opinions and present my viewpoint in the conlcusion explaining the negative impact of computer games using suitable reasons and examples.

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Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss these two views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that these days education is a vital part in the process of societies development. Certian individuals believe that male and female students should attend separate classes at school, other, including myself argue that unmixed education leactures are better for young learners from both genders.

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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many children in the first-world nations are becoming obese. This is a great drawback in wealth nations. This essay will state causes and effects of this drawback.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Surge in domestic waste has been widely discussed nowadays. Exponential growth of population puts overwhelming pressure on the recycling system, therefore, causing failure in successfully managing the waste. It seems there are two major reasons and two steps that are need to be taken in order to address fully the issue.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large amount numbers of young adults compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situatuion outweigh the disadvantages?

Curently, the numbers of younger generation are dominant in several countries compared to the older one. I do think the situation is detrimental for those countries with high number of young adults and I will explain it further in the next following paragraphs.

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