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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Poor people and those living in the rural areas find it difficult to acess university education. University should make it easy for persons from this background . To what extent do you agree or disagree.

There is no denying fact that education is one of the most important needs of humans right. There is a statement that while the door to university are closing for the people with poor condition in finance and distance, many universities should find a solution to help them access to the learning path. It is agreed for this statement that university should hold a responsibility to help those people. Analysing the finacial barriers and the accessibility issues that are blocking people with special condition will prove this.

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Many people today find that the cost of attaining a University-level education is extremely high for the students and their families. What are the cause of this situation, and how can governments, Universities and the students themselves overcome the problem?

It is argued that students and their families are unable to deal with the cost of a high-level education. The primary cause of this issue is that low-level education will effect the country economy, and the main sloution is that governments must establish a free education at universities.

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Higher education can be funded in several ways including the following; 1. All costs are paid by the government. 2. All costs are paid by the student. 3. All costs are paid by the student using loan from the government that must be paid after graduation. Discuss the benefits of each option. Which one is the best?

Nowadays, there are many controversies all over the world about the resources to pay for tertiary education. They are talking about three paramount versions, in this essay I'll discuss about all of them.

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Demand of food is increasing worldwide. What are the causes of this? What measures can the international community take to make sure the food supply is enough?

Nowadays, we can see the unsufficient amount of food besides the increase of a consumption all over the world. I think, it have been caused by several reasons. This essay will discuss the main reasons for this phenomen and propose some possible solutions to avoid them.

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Ordinary people they copy famous people from TV, Do you think its a negative or positive development?

In contemporary society, many people adore and imitate celebrities they see on the television. This trend is almost admired by everyone on earth. This has caused an ongoing problems. I entrusted that it is a detrimental negative outcome.

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Advertising has become an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.

Nowadays, publicity campaigns are on a rise. The retailers put the adds of their products on newsletters, hoardings and social media. However, this approach has its own pros and cons. Therefore, I am holding a partial viewpoint on this. The points to support my stance are elaborated in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views with your opinion

Decision making is an important part of children upbringing. However, some individuals commonly argue that if teenagers make their own choices, they will not care about others, whereas some argue that this is vital for them to make their own decisions.

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Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is widely believed that friends should have similar attitudes, but others have/share another point of view that it is better to think differently. I would like to highlight that having different ways of thinking is more important for friendship than having friends who will strongly agree with you anytime.

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Some people believe that the internet has brought people closer together, while others think that people and communities have become more isolated. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Internet has made some people’s lives much easier by bringing them all together with family members. On the contrast, some people have perception that internet has made them apart from each other. According to me, internet has played significant role in strengthening the relations.

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The role of prisons should be to punish criminals who have committed serious crimes. Training courses and education offered to prisoners are a waste of tax payers' money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a common belief that rehabilitation of victims in jails is useless and waste of money. I strongly disagree with this proposal, since every criminals deserves a second chance to change his personality, so they need to learn new skills.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the modern world, toursim is a fundemental source of income for some countries, and helps them popularize their culture. However I believe that the over reliance on tourism leads to underdeveloped nations and extremely over priced markets. In short,the locals suffer from all the drawbacks of tourism.

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Now many big cities in the world are increasing in size. What are the problems associated with it? What are the solutions to these problems?

Nowadays, cities all over the world are becoming bigger than they were in the past.

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‘Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Kids these days don't respect the elderly compared to past years which is leading to a bad impact to society. some may believe that the new way of parenting is more efficient by giving the children more space. However, I think respect and the old method of raising kids is better.

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Today, some young people say that their mobile phones are the most important thing they own. Do you think that the popularity of mobile phones is a good or bad thing?

In recent years, technology had taken much more place in our lives. Some decades ago, only a few people had mobile phones, and they used their phose to communicate with their beloved ones. In contrast, lots of teenagers use their cell-phones to play some games or surf on the internet. I think the increasing of this technology makes young people more lonely.

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Some think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe one can get any information or advice from the Internet or books. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that it will be better to get advice or information from human, such as friends or family, while others think one can get any information or advice by using internet or books. By discussing with people, it will more helpful because as social human lives, people can relate what we feel or can give feedback for our problems. On the other sides, sometimes people do not know how to communicate their feelings instead they are trying to find information from internet or books that might be a solution.

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Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetable to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea but some people oppose it.

It is often argued that, some people believe that the use of aeroplanes in the the transportation of goods like fruit and vegetable is important while others think it is purposeless to use aircraft.I agree with the statement that Aircraft is a resourceful way of transporting of fruit and vegetables.In this essay, I wili discuss both points of view with the relevant examples.

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Scientists believe that computer will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

In the recent years, technology has taken much more place in our lives. Scientists developed many intelligent robots to make us live more comfortably. Despite those can be helpful in very variable areas such as housework, daily life and healthcare, I think that is a little considering if computers would become more intelligent than us, human beings.

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Advertising has become an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.

Nowadays advertisements play a significant role in the life of people, while some view advertisements to have positive effects as they can get further insights of the products available in market,others, however think of it as a negative part considering them to be useless and distracting. In my opinion advertisements should be seen optimistically.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other.

These dayas, people believe that it is beneficial activity to competes with each other especially at work,school,and in daily lifetime. While, others think that individuals ought to cooperate more rather than competing against each other.I will discuss both views to gain an appropriate understanding, and I will support my opinion in conclusion.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important profession. Some people think that is fully justified while other think that it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the most controversial issues today relates to the earnings of sports professionals as compared to other professionals in this essay.some people believe that it is justified for sports professionals to earn more while , others think that it is not justified.As far as, I m concerned i agree that sports people should be paid more .In this essay, I will discuss both points of view.

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