IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 218

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Increase the price of junk food can decline the obesity among people .do you agree or disagree ?!

Obesity is a fast moving problem that facing a lot of countries . It is believed by some people that increase the fast food prices will solve the problems. In my opinion l completly disagree with this statement for two reason .

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Fewer people are reading books these days, therefore we should close all libraries and use of the funds for something more urgent like healthcare . Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years , fewer people are reading books compared to previous times. So governments suggest close the all libriaries and establish new hospitalw which have more advantegous to humqn's life. While , many individuals are considering demolishing libraries to build hospitals , elderly people still value libraries as spaces of freedom for reading. I partly agree with this proposal , and i will justify my point of view in the following paragraphs with relevant examples.

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: Some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that businesses mainly benefit. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today’s world, the international partnership has increased more and more. It is argued that this is to protect our planet, whilst others strongly claim that booming business is the main target. This essay agrees that worldwide cooperation is beneficial for merchandising in the headline.

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What mistakes are in this text? The question it answers is Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is an interested topic to discuss about education and work. Some people think that graduated from the university is one of the best way they can do to get a proper job. Then on the other side, people think that experienced in some fields or area is the prominent.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory in high school programs (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). Do you agree or disagree?

Recently, people have paid attention to the necessity of high school students working on volunteer activities such as working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to children in their school programs. This essay will discuss this general trend and provide the author's opinion.

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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What solutions do you suggest for this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent yeas, the growing number of people decide to pospone birth child in their life. Some of the reasons for this decision are focusing in their work an had financial situations. This essay will suggest several solution to this phenomenan.

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Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has negatively effect on their social lives. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some believe that people do not spend enough time with friends,choosing instead modern ways of communication such as email and messaging.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages. (IELTS 9, AC)

In today's Era, Eductaion plays a vital role in everyones life. Learnings new things on daily basis aids a person to have knowedlge about the things which are currenlty going. While, some thoughts of people belive that discovering new language since they start school would be more meaningful and benefical for young ones to cop-up with todays trend. Whereas, other group of people think gradually introduction to different languages should be done. In this essay, I will express both advantages and disadvantages and give my opinion at the end.

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In recent years, many small shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?

In this modern era, numerous small businesses have shut down because buyers go to big malls to do their shopping. In my point of view, It is a positive development as it has various benefits. This essay will shed light on supporting statements in upcoming paragraphs.

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The internet has made knowledge immediately available through computers and smartphones all over the world. Much of the information is free. Discuss the both advantages and drawbacks of this trend.

Today the Internet is the biggest search source for almost any information. This is very convenient because most of the information is publicly available to every user. However, Internet is a double-edged sword. It can be both useful and dangerous. In this essay I am going to discribe the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at en early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this dictinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

It is necessary to teach the chidren about the right and worng at their childhood and for that if the parents can apply punishment , they definetly can do this. I agree with this opinion, as at early age children can remember the things if they do any wrong and their parents gave punishment for that, that will be an important lesson for them in this learing process.

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Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore, they shoud be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school . To what extend do you agree or disagree?

As a contentious issue, watching television for children in order to learn impressively have its opponents and opposits. Whereas, in my point of view its profounds exceed in many ways, both related merit and drawbacks are provided here.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Each person has two options for living in his/her life span. Also, the individual has the right to choose any of them; on the one side, choosing a peaceful life without changes. One the other side, one may go for a life with accepting risks and changes. This essay is going to discuss both sides and give reasons to any chosen way of life.

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Some people say that the government should spend more money taking care of elderly people while others think that government spending should be spent more on the education of young people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals think that spending more funds for old people in each country is necessary, but the other group believe that the government should focus on the young people's education more than other ages. In the following paragraphs, both sides will be discussed with my personal point of view.

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Percentage of government spending on road and transport (1990 - 2005)

The provided bar chart gives information about the number of percentage which was spent of government on roads and transport in 4 countries over a fifteen-year period between 1990 and 2005. Namely Italia, Protugal, UK and USA.

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experiences and developing soft skill is more important. Discuss both view and give ur opinion

Some people argue that having a third education is the best way to get employed, while other believe that practical experiences and advancing soft abilities is more vital. In my view, gaining experiences would benefit more, because nowadays, everyone has college diploma, the only feature that differentiate more genius well-educated potential workers is domenstrating skills.

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These days, children have easy access to home computers, tablets, and smartphones and many spend a large part of free time using these devices. Dicuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, being reachable, youngsters are overusing their PC, mobile phones, and tablets. Although such devices allow them to reach information effectively, from my perspective, addictive features of these technological tools are detrimental for young individuals, both mentally and physically.

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Some people believe that online learning is more effective than traditional in-person classes, while others think that in-person classes are more beneficial.

There is an ongoing debate about the most effective method of learning among students . While some individuals believe that virtual learning provides better academic outcomes when compared to physical classes because its flexibility and the ability of students to learn at their own pace, others think otherwise. In my opinion in-person lecturers are more beneficial because youngsters are more focused and they can also benefit from instant feedback with this type of learning.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given picture illustrates the current site of the airport and the plan for its reconstruction a year later.

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Children can learn effectively by watching television . Therefore they should be encouraged to watch television regulartly at hom ean dat school. To what exten ddo you agree or disagree?

Waching Tv as an impressive route for children in order to learn should be considered, which is admitted by some, including me. While the opponents believe that its demerits conquer in many aspects. However, both the profits and the dire consequences are negotiated here.

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